Betrayed

February 1, 2010
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(Chorus)
Betrayed

Just when I needed you most
Betrayed

Satan used you as his host
Betrayed

To think that I used to boast
Betrayed

That you’d be there for me…

But now I’m making you see

(end chorus)

No more
I’ve lost all trust in you
You left me broken inside, n’ you had no clue
Yeah, I’m still sore; not just a muscle you tore

Did you think that I’d forgive you
That I’d make it easy
When just the thought of what you do
Makes the blackest heart queasy

I’m not coming back to you
You said it was just one time
But the moon is never blue
The moon doesn’t shine

[is it pretentious to say
That I was your sun
I held your real darkness at bay
While my light fooled everyone]

I depended on you
Thought that your word was true

You always have to prove me wrong
Surprised you waited for so long

You cut my feet out from under
But there’s no lightning to your thunder

Now I see just how huge
My blunder was

You betrayed me
You’ve slayed me


Betrayed

(chorus)





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roxymutt said...
Jun. 29, 2010 at 10:00 am
this was SO full of emotion! you wrote this from the heart i can tell...it said so much in so few words i loved it...the end "you betrayed me you've slayed me" put everything into a kind of mystic feel...its a slaying of the heart and mind i loved it
 
MayaElyashiv This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 29, 2010 at 10:03 am
Thank you :)
 
HeronHero said...
May 2, 2010 at 1:06 am
Wow this is really great! I'm going through similar feelings right now so it really does move me.
 
MayaElyashiv This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 2, 2010 at 1:32 am
I don't know if to be sad or happy...happy that it moves you or sad that your going through a tough time
 
HeronHero replied...
May 2, 2010 at 11:33 am
Don't be sad, it actually helps to read this, and know that it's not only happening to me. Thanks for sharing your writting:)
 
SandyC said...
May 1, 2010 at 1:11 pm
awesome..simply awesome...very moving.... it tells a story ,and yu convey your emotions extremely well, i was feeling angry for you!.....this would be a song that i listen to:)
 
MayaElyashiv This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 1, 2010 at 1:37 pm
I'm glad I managed to convey the anger...I wrote this after a very hard episode. 
 
Haggai said...
Feb. 19, 2010 at 5:21 am
Maya, read some of your pieces. Liked pretty much all, but this is the one that moved me most. Thanks. Haggai.
 
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