Skeletal Lies MAG

January 2, 2010
By Poetiquette PLATINUM, Palmyra, Pennsylvania
Poetiquette PLATINUM, Palmyra, Pennsylvania
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I've seen the skeletons
Hiding in your closet,
More than just bones
And detailed composites,
I've heard the lies you tell,
They're neither little nor white,
I've witnessed the hands you deal,
Two kings but no white knight,
I don't know what your conscience tells you at night,
Or what the voice inside your head sounds like,
Cruel words tinged with guilt?
Schemes carefully built?
Where's the angel on your shoulder,
Or did the devil take him out?
Why can't you tell me what you told her,
Or am I like your angel now?
Are you blind to who I am,
Or to who I try to be?
Are you trying to condemn
Every part of me?



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on May. 26 2014 at 9:08 am
DeathOfAStar GOLD, Kailua, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
" Emancipate yourself from mental slavery"




- Bob Marley

I think this would go good with The Calm by Of Mice & Men

on Feb. 6 2013 at 2:06 pm
PirateCountry DIAMOND, Muncie, Indiana
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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve."

OooOh, I really like it! It can tell the reader so much in just a few chilling words!

on Nov. 6 2012 at 8:51 pm
TheBlackCrow901 SILVER, Chatham, Illinois
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"Let this be your honour: always love more than you are loved and never to be second in this."

This is amazing!  

on Feb. 11 2012 at 2:40 pm
Twinn4ever SILVER, Pflugerville, Texas
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this is awesome!

on Jan. 20 2012 at 11:03 pm
boomawang63 SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
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This is amazing! Do you have music for it?

on Dec. 26 2011 at 8:01 pm
Tralalaura PLATINUM, Bronx, New York
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Speechless... This poem is amazing! 5/5 :)

on Oct. 24 2011 at 2:45 pm
CWells_521 DIAMOND, Greene, New York
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Favorite Quote:
The best things in life are unseen, that's why you close your eyes when you kiss, cry, or dream.
What doesn't kill you, only makes you stronger.

Woww, just amazing!

on Jan. 22 2011 at 7:58 pm
RisingMomoM.R. SILVER, Georgetown, Texas
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i think of experiences and images...as being stored in the rootcellar of my mind, hibernating in the dark in the dark until they are ready for stories.
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Fab all the way! u got real talent that blaststhe rooooooof to shreds i send u my luck!!!!!!!!!

on Nov. 20 2010 at 11:00 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
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Sooooooooooooooooooooo GOOD!

on Oct. 21 2010 at 1:51 pm
AcidRayne BRONZE, City Of Sin, Louisiana
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very nice :) its soo unique

on Sep. 15 2010 at 3:07 pm
GodStrongKid PLATINUM, Parkville, Missouri
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Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about.

Wow. Great theme and great rhymes. I really like this.

d-rok33 said...
on Sep. 14 2010 at 7:27 am
This is a good poem and has a really good theme to it.

Milo! said...
on Mar. 12 2010 at 10:11 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.


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