I understand that she doesn't want to see me again, that she found somebody else and I cant even begin to pretend that i don't care when I do, can't take my mind off of you, the way you laugh the way you smile,just please pick up the phone and dial, so we could talk for a while.Big house,family dog,maybe bring the world a child. i just need one more chance, to get you back for one more dance.I'm just trying to make sure I'm that guy that's in your future plans.
"How We Were."
Wow I agree i like this peom too!!! All of yours are very good!!! You should check out some of mine when they get posted!
This poem is amazing, it kind of the style i like to write.:)
Milo! said...
Mar. 13, 2010 at 8:05 am:
Mar. 13, 2010 at 8:05 am:
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.
Thanks for the feedback, i will def. check out some of your work




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