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"How We Were."

I understand that she doesn't want to see me again, that she found somebody else and I cant even begin to pretend that i don't care when I do, can't take my mind off of you, the way you laugh the way you smile,just please pick up the phone and dial, so we could talk for a while.Big house,family dog,maybe bring the world a child. i just need one more chance, to get you back for one more dance.I'm just trying to make sure I'm that guy that's in your future plans.




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Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 10, 2010 at 5:12 pm:
Wow I agree i like this peom too!!! All of yours are very good!!! You should check out some of mine when they get posted!
 
perfected_11 replied...
May 19, 2010 at 2:15 pm :
i sure will check out some of yours
 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 19, 2010 at 3:59 pm :
thanks!!! i can't wait
 
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SavvyLane said...
May 8, 2010 at 10:18 am:
This poem is amazing, it kind of the style i like to write.:)
 
perfected_11 replied...
May 8, 2010 at 10:36 am :
thanks for the feedback
 
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Milo! said...
Mar. 13, 2010 at 8:05 am:
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.
 
perfected_11 replied...
May 8, 2010 at 10:06 am :
Thanks for the feedback, i will def. check out some of your work
 
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