"How We Were."

December 31, 2009
By perfected_11 SILVER, Cheverly, Maryland
perfected_11 SILVER, Cheverly, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"Negative thinking limits gods possibilities for us and for others."
-Craig L


I understand that she doesn't want to see me again, that she found somebody else and I cant even begin to pretend that i don't care when I do, can't take my mind off of you, the way you laugh the way you smile,just please pick up the phone and dial, so we could talk for a while.Big house,family dog,maybe bring the world a child. i just need one more chance, to get you back for one more dance.I'm just trying to make sure I'm that guy that's in your future plans.


The author's comments:
I was thinking about break ups that most couples go through and how one of partners, wants the other back

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on May. 19 2010 at 3:59 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

thanks!!! i can't wait

on May. 19 2010 at 2:15 pm
perfected_11 SILVER, Cheverly, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"Negative thinking limits gods possibilities for us and for others."
-Craig L

i sure will check out some of yours

on May. 10 2010 at 5:12 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

Wow I agree i like this peom too!!! All of yours are very good!!! You should check out some of mine when they get posted!

on May. 8 2010 at 10:36 am
perfected_11 SILVER, Cheverly, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"Negative thinking limits gods possibilities for us and for others."
-Craig L

thanks for the feedback

on May. 8 2010 at 10:18 am
SavvyLane PLATINUM, Peoria, Illinois
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"If youre a bird, Im a bird."

This poem is amazing, it kind of the style i like to write.:)

on May. 8 2010 at 10:06 am
perfected_11 SILVER, Cheverly, Maryland
5 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Negative thinking limits gods possibilities for us and for others."
-Craig L

Thanks for the feedback, i will def. check out some of your work

Milo! said...
on Mar. 13 2010 at 8:05 am
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.


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