Condeming Our Insanity

December 3, 2009
By Tambers BRONZE, Albrightsville, Pennsylvania
Tambers BRONZE, Albrightsville, Pennsylvania
4 articles 5 photos 2 comments

Empty walls, and a big white room
You've lost your mind, i'm losing mine too
We've been condenmed for so long now
What's wrong is right, and what's right is wrong
We've lost it all, and so they've won
They have taken everything, our sanity too
And now were trapped in this big white room

Their watching us decompose,
Our minds are framed, viewed as a show
Were their entertainment
And were helpless in their arms,
They have our control,
They have all we own
We'll never win,
so we'll hope for an end soon

Padded walls, windowless rooms
Sharp objects were taken away
There's no hope for
To end this for ourselves
There in control of our agony,
And our sufferings what they crave

Keep us here and
We'll scream out for an end
We'll hopelessly search,
even knowing the truth
Only they can can help us,
Only they can end this disgust

But the truth is simple,
Simple and clear
They like watching us suffer
In this big white room

The author's comments:
I wrote this piece with personal inspiration.

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This article has 4 comments.

on Feb. 12 2011 at 1:28 pm
toni_a7x_vengeance BRONZE, Wausaukee, Wisconsin
2 articles 20 photos 5 comments
The whole thing is just great! I like this part...whats wrong is right and wahts right is wrong. Nice job, keep writing! :)

Lonleydandy said...
on Jan. 3 2010 at 6:37 am
Oh, okay, and You're welcome

Tambers BRONZE said...
on Jan. 2 2010 at 10:36 pm
Tambers BRONZE, Albrightsville, Pennsylvania
4 articles 5 photos 2 comments

And i wrote this when I was really stressed, and i felt like I couldn't escape my problems

Lonleydandy said...
on Dec. 29 2009 at 11:42 am
I like it, but am curious what the inspiration for it was. haha, anyway, i still like it.


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