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the moon

when you look up at the moon
do you think of me?
when you look up at the moon
what do you really see?
when you look up at the moon
do you ever wonder
what you men to me?

I don't know about you
but when I look at the moon
I think of you
when I look at the moon
I see your eyes looking into mine
when I look at the moon
I wonder I you care about me
as much as I care about you

I wish I could tell you I love you
I wish you would say it back
I wish I could have you all to myself

when I look at the moon
I think of you
when I look at the moon
I see your eyes looking into mine
when I look at the moon
I wonder I you care about me
as much as I care about you

when you look up at the moon
do you think of me?
when you look up at the moon
what do you really see?
when you look up at the moon
do you ever wonder
what you men to me?

I want you always and forever
I want you to say it back


who do you see when you look up at the moon?




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Kay-Kay96 said...
Mar. 29, 2010 at 5:11 pm:
I really Like This
 
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flightlessbird This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 10:19 am:
i rllly like this!
 
~purple_musician~ replied...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 4:17 pm :
thanks so much :) i checked your stuff out as well :)
 
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Tori W. said...
Jan. 7, 2010 at 5:09 pm:
i really liked this one, i can feel the emotion that your getting through this poem.
 
~purple_musician~ replied...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 4:19 pm :
thank you so incredibly much its nice to know that other people can feel it when they read it so thanks a whole vunch :D
 
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sarahxinsane921 said...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 5:28 pm:
This Poem Is So Completly Beautiful.
I Love It. Keep Writing!
 
OLIVIA!!!!! replied...
Oct. 30, 2009 at 9:03 pm :
thank you so much! :)
 
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