The Way You Smile

October 18, 2009
By lyricist PLATINUM, West Pittston, Pennsylvania
lyricist PLATINUM, West Pittston, Pennsylvania
27 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
" How dare you give them so much power"


I stare at you
From across the room
I see the sparkle in your eyes

I smile at you
You turn your head
You stare into my eyes

And I see you smile

Its in the way I look at you
Its in the way I smile
Its in the way I talk to you
Its in the way I try
I try to be next to you
Try to be close to you
Try to be with you

Its the simplest truth you ever heard
I love you

I hold your hand
Walking down the street
I feel the sparks
I feel the heat

Its like a fire in my soul
I could dance all night
I could smile

I could do this forever

Its in the way I look at you
Its in the way I smile
Its in the way I talk to you
Its in the way I try
I try to be next to you
Try to be close to you
Try to be with you

Its the simplest truth you ever heard
I love you

And late at night
You hold me close
You whisper truths
Into my ear

We move to each others rythms
We are each others beats
And in the dark

I see you smile

Its in the way I look at you
Its in the way I smile
Its in the way I talk to you
Its in the way I try
Try to be next to you
Try to be close to you
Try to be with you

Its the simplest truth you ever heard
I love you

And no matter what life throw at us
Your still gonna be my number one
No one could ever replace
The butterflies

Or the way you smile


The author's comments:
So any of you who have read any of my other stuff know i dont normally write happy things. Well, shocking as it is, this one is happy. Though as normal it is dealing with love
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on Jan. 11 2011 at 12:51 am
sunshine04 BRONZE, Vindhyanagar, Other
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please teach me how to wite some great songs i always hav troble with my rhymings

on Dec. 20 2010 at 3:03 pm
ashbadash BRONZE, Ocala, Florida
4 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
Friends are like glue, they always stick by your side.

Aww very cute I love it. It's very romantice and adorable.:)

on Oct. 15 2010 at 11:23 am
LadyWizKhalifa BRONZE, Atlanta, Georgia
3 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Change will not come if we wait for some other person or some other time. We are the ones we've been waiting for. We are the change that we seek.
- Barack Obama (My Cousin did a very great job on this speech he is the 1st black president of the USA)

aw datz wussup i lyke dat!

on Jun. 27 2010 at 2:36 pm
BeyondMe BRONZE, Battle Creek, Michigan
3 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I used to want the words "She tried" on my tombstone. Now I want "She did it."
~Katherine Dunham

I totally agree.

on Jun. 27 2010 at 11:17 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

aww i liked this^^ it was very cute n romantic!! :) nicely done

on Jun. 5 2010 at 9:53 pm
Sketched97 PLATINUM, Silver Spring, Maryland
31 articles 4 photos 168 comments
This is awesome. I think its amazing how much emotion poems and songs can have!

on Apr. 24 2010 at 10:49 am
lyricist PLATINUM, West Pittston, Pennsylvania
27 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
" How dare you give them so much power"

lol i only play acoustic

on Apr. 24 2010 at 10:49 am
lyricist PLATINUM, West Pittston, Pennsylvania
27 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
" How dare you give them so much power"

thank you :) yes this is written from my own feelings, as is the majority of my other writing

on Apr. 22 2010 at 3:23 pm
Caitlyn_ilovesoftball GOLD, Douds, Iowa
15 articles 9 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hello Cat-i-lynn Mill-ard-o," -friends
"Stop saying that!! My name ain't Cat-i-lynn Mill-ard-o!!" -Me
"Okay, fine, Hello Cat."-friends
(GRRRRR)
----Also----
"You a turtle on steroids!"-friends
"Hahaha, I know" -ME

Very well written, I've been trying to figure out how to make a good song but I could almost say its impossible now reading all of these.. lol.. Is this your own feelings?  Its wonderful.

on Apr. 22 2010 at 10:23 am
effortlesslove BRONZE, Westminster, Maryland
3 articles 0 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A friend is someone who can sing the song in your heart when you have forgotten the words"i

really like this song, if you played it acoustically it would sound even better. Good work! :)

on Mar. 31 2010 at 6:17 pm
GabeLikesCandy BRONZE, Salem, Ohio
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This is very cute.

I was playing my guitar to it, trying to make a good background for it. :P


on Feb. 15 2010 at 2:00 pm
KaseyPerkins BRONZE, Pryor, Oklahoma
2 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
No llores por quien no te ama.Ama a quien llora por ti.

wow! this is a great one! When I read this I could hear music in my head =-) nicely done

on Jan. 3 2010 at 3:44 pm
lyricist PLATINUM, West Pittston, Pennsylvania
27 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
" How dare you give them so much power"

Well since this is like the 5th time you guys have voted this the best in song lyrics either you totally love it or every other song sucks(jk jk)

thanks so much guys :)

on Oct. 25 2009 at 12:25 pm
---Sixx--- PLATINUM, /, Other
26 articles 4 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"To see what a man is like, take a look at how he treats his inferiors, not his equals.\"

This is beautiful! I particularly like the part when you said, "I could dance all night." Great work!

on Oct. 25 2009 at 11:22 am
SHiiNYx3 BRONZE, South Setauket, New York
3 articles 23 photos 32 comments
I really like this!

You use such simple, basic words...but together, it really makes such an enjoyable piece!

on Oct. 24 2009 at 2:24 pm
gnihtlaicositna GOLD, Nova Scotia, Other
14 articles 0 photos 7 comments
I like this, it's romantic and so sweet :) Good job.

on Oct. 23 2009 at 3:03 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
26 articles 0 photos 493 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

I love this, it's so sweet, and I especially love the chorus (it's a song, right?). Great job!

beachgirl; said...
on Oct. 22 2009 at 11:16 pm
aww this is seriously cute!!

on Oct. 22 2009 at 7:59 pm
harvardsp2013 SILVER, Castleton, New York
8 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
What's meant to be will come to be

epic.

nough said

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on Oct. 22 2009 at 6:24 pm
Duckie430, Riverside, Rhode Island
0 articles 0 photos 229 comments

Favorite Quote:
“The secret to life is being who you are and being happy with who you are.”
"Whatever does not kill you only makes you stronger."

ohhhh this is really cute and sweet!!


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