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I stare at you
From across the room
I see the sparkle in your eyes

I smile at you
You turn your head
You stare into my eyes

And I see you smile

Its in the way I look at you
Its in the way I smile
Its in the way I talk to you
Its in the way I try
I try to be next to you
Try to be close to you
Try to be with you

Its the simplest truth you ever heard
I love you

I hold your hand
Walking down the street
I feel the sparks
I feel the heat

Its like a fire in my soul
I could dance all night
I could smile

I could do this forever

Its in the way I look at you
Its in the way I smile
Its in the way I talk to you
Its in the way I try
I try to be next to you
Try to be close to you
Try to be with you

Its the simplest truth you ever heard
I love you

And late at night
You hold me close
You whisper truths
Into my ear

We move to each others rythms
We are each others beats
And in the dark

I see you smile

Its in the way I look at you
Its in the way I smile
Its in the way I talk to you
Its in the way I try
Try to be next to you
Try to be close to you
Try to be with you

Its the simplest truth you ever heard
I love you

And no matter what life throw at us
Your still gonna be my number one
No one could ever replace
The butterflies

Or the way you smile




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ashbadash said...
Dec. 20, 2010 at 3:03 pm:
Aww very cute I love it. It's very romantice and adorable.:)
 
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TreySongzWifey said...
Oct. 15, 2010 at 11:23 am:
aw datz wussup i lyke dat!
 
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i.ll_be_fine_899 said...
Jun. 27, 2010 at 11:17 am:
aww i liked this^^ it was very cute n romantic!! :) nicely done
 
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DanceAwayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 5, 2010 at 9:53 pm:
This is awesome. I think its amazing how much emotion poems and songs can have!
 
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Cam12 said...
Apr. 22, 2010 at 3:23 pm:
Very well written, I've been trying to figure out how to make a good song but I could almost say its impossible now reading all of these.. lol.. Is this your own feelings?  Its wonderful.
 
lyricist replied...
Apr. 24, 2010 at 10:49 am :
thank you :) yes this is written from my own feelings, as is the majority of my other writing
 
devos replied...
Jan. 11, 2011 at 12:51 am :
please teach me how to wite some great songs i always hav troble with my rhymings
 
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claire3poetry said...
Apr. 22, 2010 at 10:23 am:
really like this song, if you played it acoustically it would sound even better. Good work! :)
 
lyricist replied...
Apr. 24, 2010 at 10:49 am :
lol i only play acoustic
 
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GabeLikesCandy said...
Mar. 31, 2010 at 6:17 pm:

This is very cute.

I was playing my guitar to it, trying to make a good background for it. :P

 
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ElenaFrmKc said...
Feb. 15, 2010 at 2:00 pm:
wow! this is a great one! When I read this I could hear music in my head =-) nicely done
 
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lyricist said...
Jan. 3, 2010 at 3:44 pm:
Well since this is like the 5th time you guys have voted this the best in song lyrics either you totally love it or every other song sucks(jk jk)
thanks so much guys :)
 
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rach(: said...
Oct. 25, 2009 at 12:25 pm:
This is beautiful! I particularly like the part when you said, "I could dance all night." Great work!
 
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SHiiNYx3 said...
Oct. 25, 2009 at 11:22 am:
I really like this!
You use such simple, basic words...but together, it really makes such an enjoyable piece!
 
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gnihtlaicositna This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 24, 2009 at 2:24 pm:
I like this, it's romantic and so sweet :) Good job.
 
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Inkspired said...
Oct. 23, 2009 at 3:03 pm:
I love this, it's so sweet, and I especially love the chorus (it's a song, right?). Great job!
 
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beachgirl; said...
Oct. 22, 2009 at 11:16 pm:
aww this is seriously cute!!
 
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harvardsp2013 said...
Oct. 22, 2009 at 7:59 pm:
epic.
nough said
 
PrincessAzaria replied...
Jun. 27, 2010 at 2:36 pm :
I totally agree.
 
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Duckie430This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 22, 2009 at 6:24 pm:
ohhhh this is really cute and sweet!!
 
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