Heart aches, head breaks

October 17, 2009
By Madeline.Pearl PLATINUM, Smithville, Texas
Madeline.Pearl PLATINUM, Smithville, Texas
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What if my heart and my head disagree
my head yelling saying what you do it wrong
while my heart wants you to stay with me
And thats the reason im writeing this song

What can i say
what can i do
to convince my head to stay with you.

My heart want to run run away.
what if the impossible was acheaved and my heart left me. could i love again.
could we still be friends.

Im Screaming calling out to the sky
pleading asking why
how could you hurt me so bad
that i am driven mad

The author's comments:
Please dont be judgey.. i know it sucks

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on Jul. 23 2011 at 8:46 pm
Silenced_in_Anxiety GOLD, Easton, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Have you ever been hurt and the place tries to heal a bit, and you just pull the scar off of it over and over again." - Rosa Parks

Good job. I know exactly what you're talking about. I feel like that quite often and it hurts a lot to try and figure out what you should do when your common sesnse and emotions disagree. Just try to think it through and if you make a mistake it's just part of life and what's supposed to hapen. Keep writing. You're great!!!! <3

on Jul. 14 2010 at 4:38 pm
inspire2bloom BRONZE, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Nerd? No, I prefer Intellectual.

this did nt suck. i liked it a lot.

Emily:) said...
on Mar. 17 2010 at 4:27 pm
This does NOT suck. But I AM gonna be a little bit judgey. Only about the spelling though. The EMOTION however is amazing and the flow is really really great. I understand exactly how you feel which is not easy to do in a song- create a mood. CONGRATULATIONS! (Which seems really mean to say, considering how sad I am. That's a good thing though!) Keep it up!


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