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You Left Me

Don't cone,
close to me.
That's how I thought,
it should be.
But when you held your hand out,
it felt right.

I feel so numb,
and rundown.
Since you left me,
I have felt so empty.

When you just left me,
my heart just stopped beating.
And as it starts aching,
you're not around.

You hurt me so badly baby.
And you haven't been true lately.
So I will watch you walk away,
cuz it's too late.
Things are so hard without you.
Cuz you haven't been here,
to help me.
And now I'll just fall to the ground.

I'm sinking down,
so steadily.
I turn around,
so carefully.
And once I did things began to fall
into place.

Been missing you,
terribly.
It hurts so much,
just to see;
you with someone else,
that is not me.

Cuz when I saw you with her
you just ignored me.
And now I'm seeing everything,
so clearly.

I see that you've moved on baby.
So now you're not here to save me.
And now I will just fade away
until I hear you say:
"I'm sorry I left you baby.
So will you try and forgive me maybe?"
But that will never happen now.
Cuz you left me.

Each and every time I see you,
you turn away.
And every time I speak,
you walk away.
You said that you loved me,
and I wanted to believe.
But this is just so wrong,
baby can't you see?
But I wanna know at once
how you feel about me now.
Since you left me.
Why did you leave me....



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kadizz said...
Oct. 2, 2012 at 10:48 am:
very amazing writting a few spelling errors but no biggy very emotional i give it 5 stars and you have some major creativity 
 
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Lily M. said...
Mar. 18, 2012 at 1:40 pm:
that is really awesome!:) 
 
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Danishroll said...
Feb. 25, 2012 at 3:22 pm:
Wow this is really good. You have so major talent. You will go really far in life. Keep it up.
 
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nadi-swagger-chickThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 3, 2012 at 10:44 pm:
Wow a wonderful piece of work. This is great :)
 
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ZaNeesa said...
Nov. 7, 2011 at 6:36 pm:
I've totally dealing with this right now. The song was BEAUTIFUL <3
 
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DinosoarJen This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 20, 2011 at 4:51 pm:

Wow i can totally relate. You're very talented. Maybe you can check out my stuff sometime? I would appreciate it! Keep up the good work!!

 

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titangods31 said...
Jun. 28, 2011 at 4:46 pm:
that happened to me to, and it hurt so bad, I would love to sing this song if you dont mind...
 
singingchic15 replied...
Jun. 30, 2011 at 7:01 pm :
this song is actually really personal..like i dont let others sing my songs..not yet at least
 
titangods31 replied...
Jul. 1, 2011 at 5:24 pm :
understand completely, and I wouldnt want to either. I
 
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writtingislikemagic16 said...
Apr. 1, 2011 at 7:28 am:
this is how i felt my ex left me but he left for a girl that was thought to be a friend and he didnt care that he hurt me he just want to use me and still to this very day he tried to come back but hte one simple question i ask is why did u leave , he say he dosent know but now this is my oppoin there going to come back when they lose the other girl and that to me is pitty you have lost your chance
 
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Smartie4Life said...
Mar. 10, 2011 at 10:30 pm:
This is so good!
 
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prettyuglygirl1998 said...
Feb. 17, 2011 at 6:59 pm:
I relate to it so much....But me and my ex are really good friends and we are getting really close
 
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1EmoKidd1 said...
Jan. 25, 2011 at 8:44 am:
I LOVE it Its The Way It Is Between Me And My Ex, but, It Would Be Better As A Poem Instead Of A Song, One:Because most Songs Have Chorus And What Not, Two:This IS So Much Better As A Poem. But Seriously , I Truly Absolutly, LOVE It.
 
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ILIKePIEZ said...
Oct. 29, 2010 at 3:31 pm:
dude this is depressing me and STOP RHYMING SONGS DONT NEED TO RHYME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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sushiluvrluvzme said...
Oct. 29, 2010 at 3:12 pm:
I think it's toucning and what I'm about to say is very negative but I want to be truthful to you.When you write yo lyrics,I notice that you use your true fellings but in a way,it seems to me that how you write it kind of doesn't make sense.I'm being honest but for sure,I know that you can make it better but I'm just saying that the way you write the words don't make sense but it's ok,good luck and I know it can be better!
 
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Luminescence said...
Oct. 7, 2010 at 3:07 pm:
I love this! Not that hasn't been said before...
 
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haleynicole(: said...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 7:53 pm:
i loooooove this(:
 
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RA.SW said...
Aug. 2, 2010 at 8:13 am:
This is nice and touchin i liked it
 
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Jesusandwordsfinatic said...
Jun. 19, 2010 at 9:19 am:
very nice and touching! I'd like to give you some advice though. When you said that you felt so empty, God is waiting for you to ask Him to fill it; He can i promise! And wen you said that you felt like you were falling, He can pick you up out of the deepest hole in the earth. I hope this has encouraged you! Just remember, if not this guy, it just means He has someone even better for you. =)
 
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Nicholas H. said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 12:13 pm:
It was a really lovely poem. I'm glad it was voted #1.
 
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