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I'm Starting To Forget

October 10, 2009
By indiecaligurl PLATINUM, Long Beach, California
indiecaligurl PLATINUM, Long Beach, California
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I'm starting to forget
Your touch, your scent
How it feels to be loved by you

I'm starting to forgot
Your eyes, your lips
How it felt to look then kiss you

You think, think so bad of me
It's pushing me away now
You think, think you got it right
That I've already changed

CHORUS:
So this is how it feels
To be alone
And so cold
There's no one here to hold you
So this is how it feels
For you to leave
Me so long
There's no one left to hold you

I'm starting to forget
Your thoughts, your lies
And how it felt to not be trusted

You think, think so bad of me
It's pushing me away now
You think, think you got it right
That I'm already gone

CHORUS

So what did I do to make you act this way?
So what should I do to make you want to stay?

CHORUS


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on Oct. 31 2012 at 3:33 pm
PrincessSparkleStar BRONZE, Michigan
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This is awesom!! I can totally picture it on my ipod :) Please would you check out my poem? TeenInk.com/poetry/ballad/article/499252/Take-a-Chance/

on Jun. 21 2012 at 12:03 am
DayDreaamer BRONZE, Raleigh, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Liar liar. Plants for hire!" -Patrick, from Spongebob XD

Wow. Love it :)

-Duckie- GOLD said...
on Dec. 10 2011 at 10:42 pm
-Duckie- GOLD, West Fargo, North Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
Your heart is a weapon the size of your fist. Keep fighting. Keep loving.
-Anonymous

WOW GREAT SONG!!! Is there music? If not you should upload a video of yourself singing it to teen ink :) that would be cool also if you have time, check out some of my stuff? Thanks :)

on Nov. 18 2011 at 1:58 pm
MarleyRainbow PLATINUM, Valles MInes, Missouri
40 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
one good thing about music is, when it hits you, you feel no pain.

That was an amazing song, it's like sad but then true at the same time. I take it you have had a few sad moments in your life?

on Jun. 13 2011 at 10:51 am
kaykaybeck PLATINUM, Petersburg, Michigan
24 articles 4 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life takes you somewhere, love helps you get there.

I really love this!

on Feb. 23 2011 at 9:39 pm
dreamer9492 GOLD, Denver, Colorado
11 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Dreaming is what makes the world go round"

i really, really, really liked this!! i could see this being a hit song! good job, keep writing! can you comment some of my stuff as well? i'd greatly apreciate it =)

on Nov. 5 2010 at 6:29 pm
BurningRose SILVER, New Fairfield, Connecticut
6 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
I dunno.

i LOVE THIS!!!! please do you have a melody??? i would LOVE to be able to know it!!!!!!!!! this is GREAT GREAT GREAT!!! gosh im trying to sing to it but i dont know if i have the beat right yet ...XD

on Sep. 21 2010 at 2:44 pm
Bookworm7 SILVER, Middletown, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Be not afraid of greatness: some are born great, some achieve greatness, and some have greatness thrust upon them. -Willian Shakespeare

I love it! I hope you write more!:)

on Jul. 20 2010 at 8:37 pm
LoveSickenedRebel GOLD, Lubbock, Texas
12 articles 0 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Why does everyone think I need a man? Look if you find a guy who is decent, good with kids and has respect for women, call me." "It is better to have loved, than to have never loved at all."

cool song. it sounds awesome!!!

keilly GOLD said...
on Mar. 11 2010 at 9:03 pm
keilly GOLD, Springfield, Massachusetts
13 articles 1 photo 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
there is always a rason for things

well thanks to you. i take u as a very good writer and i hope you grow to become a recodnise person cuz u really can write. hope the best 4 u

on Mar. 10 2010 at 6:39 pm
Saphira96 SILVER, Crestwood, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
I have 3 but here they are:
Truly Great friends are hard to find, difficult to leave, and impossible to forget.
Life isn't measured by the number of breaths you take but by the moments that take your breath away. And the only problem is time.

Yeah me too! I love sad movies and songs, and books! They make me feel good!

on Mar. 9 2010 at 6:03 pm
indiecaligurl PLATINUM, Long Beach, California
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Niceee! I take it you're a singer :) That's neat.

on Mar. 9 2010 at 6:01 pm
indiecaligurl PLATINUM, Long Beach, California
38 articles 0 photos 25 comments
:) lol I love sad things too...movies, songs...

on Mar. 9 2010 at 5:59 pm
indiecaligurl PLATINUM, Long Beach, California
38 articles 0 photos 25 comments
Thanks so much! :)

on Mar. 9 2010 at 5:58 pm
indiecaligurl PLATINUM, Long Beach, California
38 articles 0 photos 25 comments
Thank you! :)

keilly GOLD said...
on Mar. 9 2010 at 7:10 am
keilly GOLD, Springfield, Massachusetts
13 articles 1 photo 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
there is always a rason for things

i loved this song. i dont no how you did the beet for it when singing ti but when i sang it it sounded very good.

on Mar. 6 2010 at 5:16 pm
Saphira96 SILVER, Crestwood, Kentucky
5 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
I have 3 but here they are:
Truly Great friends are hard to find, difficult to leave, and impossible to forget.
Life isn't measured by the number of breaths you take but by the moments that take your breath away. And the only problem is time.

Wow that was amazing and sad! I don't know why but i love sad things!

on Feb. 2 2010 at 6:40 pm
milkdud-music-freak BRONZE, Akron, Ohio
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Wow, i really like this song, its awesome.

on Oct. 23 2009 at 10:59 pm
VampireLover88, Kankakee, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"If at first you don't succeed try again"

I like it it shows emotion


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