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When You Fall In Love!!!

October 5, 2009
By Ookami DIAMOND, Kiansas City, Missouri
Ookami DIAMOND, Kiansas City, Missouri
50 articles 0 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't give up! Keep on going! Till victory is won!!!


Vs.1
I remember a dream i had/ (and in it)/ you watched me fade away/ you left without a word/then i asked the Lord/ if he would let me stay/ even just for one more day/ i had promised him/ that i would be good/ and everyday i kept my word/ that's how it'll be/ when you fall in love...
Chorus:
Until you fall in love/ you will never know/ just how great it is/ to be loved by someone else/ you forget all those long goodbyes/ and all those first year fights/ everysingle sleepless night/ when you fall in love!!
Vs.2
There will never be/ anyone else for me/ you are my everything/ cuz when you fall in love/ you never think of anyone else/ only one person counts/when you fall in love/ you'll never want to leave/ you'll always want to be/ right there by their side/ that's how it'll be/ when you fall in love...(chorus)
Vs.3
Until you fall in love/ you don't know what it's like/ to be unsure at times/ you don't know what to do/ just remember they'll be watching you/ and that's how it'll be/ when you fall in love...(chorus)
AC= That's how it'll be when you fall in love!!


The author's comments:
a love song for anyone who thinks they're in love but still not sure... AC= after chorus...

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Ookami DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 7 2010 at 3:39 pm
Ookami DIAMOND, Kiansas City, Missouri
50 articles 0 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't give up! Keep on going! Till victory is won!!!

thanks. i'm glad you liked it.

on Mar. 7 2010 at 12:57 am
amanda727 PLATINUM, Salt Lake City, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Don't let anybody tell you who you are; don't let anyone tell you that you don't deserve what you're willing to work for.
Never give up; you\'ll never know how far you could go until you try to get to where you want to go.

:) yayyyy i love this! :) good job!

Ookami DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 10 2010 at 1:08 pm
Ookami DIAMOND, Kiansas City, Missouri
50 articles 0 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't give up! Keep on going! Till victory is won!!!

o. owell that's cool. i could say that but i'd be lying and i'm not much for that. i have a myspace and yahoo but that's it. i only use them to talk to my friends that have moved. just to keep in touch.

Lonleydandy said...
on Jan. 9 2010 at 9:02 pm
Nope, no online sites like that. [No facebook, myspace, twitter, etc.]

Ookami DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 9 2010 at 6:24 pm
Ookami DIAMOND, Kiansas City, Missouri
50 articles 0 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't give up! Keep on going! Till victory is won!!!

ah of course the evenant ploi of a working man... lol oh well you know you seem like a very cool person.

Lonleydandy said...
on Jan. 9 2010 at 8:20 am
I am pretty sure I relate to it..haha, I have been so busy I don't remember my original thoughts about it..hahaha

Ookami DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 8 2010 at 10:25 pm
Ookami DIAMOND, Kiansas City, Missouri
50 articles 0 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't give up! Keep on going! Till victory is won!!!

so do you relate to this? if so then how? if not then what made you read it? well actually what made you read it?

Lonleydandy said...
on Jan. 8 2010 at 5:33 pm
Yeah, I like to read things that I can relate to

Ookami DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 8 2010 at 3:14 pm
Ookami DIAMOND, Kiansas City, Missouri
50 articles 0 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't give up! Keep on going! Till victory is won!!!

that's cool at least i know you hold a standard on things. you're ok. well i'd like to know if you read any of my other work. alot of it is what you write about too. our writing has some things in common i guess that's pretty cool. don't you think? lol. ^_^

Lonleydandy said...
on Jan. 8 2010 at 6:55 am
No its not, but I have a personal thing of not telling people my name on line..hahaha...sorry

Ookami DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 7 2010 at 11:03 pm
Ookami DIAMOND, Kiansas City, Missouri
50 articles 0 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't give up! Keep on going! Till victory is won!!!

I mean who are you as in your name. i like to know the name of people who comment on my work. i mean don't you? i was just wondering. is that so bad?

Lonleydandy said...
on Jan. 6 2010 at 7:26 am
What do you mean?

Ookami DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 5 2010 at 11:45 pm
Ookami DIAMOND, Kiansas City, Missouri
50 articles 0 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't give up! Keep on going! Till victory is won!!!

thanks but who are you really?

Lonleydandy said...
on Oct. 17 2009 at 8:55 pm
Love it.....just love it