Crush

August 26, 2009
By Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)


I know you don't notice me,
Don't even know that i exsist.
But, in all of my dreams, you're in "Bop" magazines
You're face is so precious and perfect to me
And i don't care about you're flaws, you're my fantasy..
I go crazy thinkin' about
Just wanna (to be continued)


The author's comments:
This song i wrote is very special to me :)

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Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Oct. 26 2009 at 2:51 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

yeah, i looked at that song, i thought it was great!:) If you wanna see the rest of the song, just click more by this author, and then click on "Precious" :)

on Oct. 13 2009 at 12:32 pm
amanda727 PLATINUM, Salt Lake City, Utah
33 articles 2 photos 245 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't let anybody tell you who you are; don't let anyone tell you that you don't deserve what you're willing to work for.
Never give up; you\'ll never know how far you could go until you try to get to where you want to go.

It's pretty good...you should finish it lol you should comment me too! I'm number 6 or something like that...it's called Never Underestimate a Girl :)

on Oct. 11 2009 at 10:19 pm
yaelephant5 PLATINUM, Potomac, Maryland
29 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing, I think, is not apart from living. Writing is a kind of double living. The writer experiences everything twice. Once in reality and once in the mirror which waits always before or behind."

i'll be honest... i'm not a huge fan of this. its fine but nothing incredibe.

on Oct. 5 2009 at 5:07 pm
purplemusician SILVER, Columbus, Indiana
7 articles 3 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
"those who matter don't mind, but those who mind don't matter" ~ Dr. Seuss

well publish it!!! lol

i really want to read the rest of it!!!

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Oct. 5 2009 at 2:12 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

thanks, i rewrote the rest, but it isn't published yet :)

Z3bRUh said...
on Oct. 4 2009 at 4:53 pm
ugh don't stop here!!! keep going!

u gotta way with wordsss

on Oct. 4 2009 at 4:02 pm
BeautifulSimplicity BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
2 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
We keep it light, until it's time to go dark. Then we go pitch black.

DANG, THIS WAS GOOD, HURRY UP AND FINNISH it, homeboy got talent! dang, thats all i have to say

on Oct. 4 2009 at 3:57 pm
purplemusician SILVER, Columbus, Indiana
7 articles 3 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
"those who matter don't mind, but those who mind don't matter" ~ Dr. Seuss

you should finish it.

im absolutely starving for more!

you should also check me out to :)

yelsse<3 said...
on Oct. 4 2009 at 2:23 pm
Good poem!! How cute((:

~blueroses~ said...
on Oct. 3 2009 at 7:49 pm
~blueroses~, Summerville, South Carolina
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i do get what your saying, i write songs and poetry too, but yours is really really good. :) congrats and good luck

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Oct. 2 2009 at 2:39 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

thanks for the comment

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Oct. 2 2009 at 2:38 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

i didn't really finish the thought, but i thought reders would get my point, but i wrote the whole song in another thing i published called Precious :) thanks for ur comment

on Oct. 2 2009 at 8:27 am
chelseahicks BRONZE, Kenton, Ohio
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment
just wanna what?

on Oct. 2 2009 at 8:21 am
dylonmichael GOLD, El Dorado, Kansas
10 articles 3 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
i have two one is "live life as if it were your last day on earth" and two is "never make some one your everything because when they leave you you have nothing"

welcome :)

on Oct. 2 2009 at 12:56 am
David Avalos BRONZE, Santa Ana, California
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment
good so far =)

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Oct. 1 2009 at 10:04 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

yeah, thanks for the comment

on Oct. 1 2009 at 2:47 pm
kendraelysia SILVER, Turner, Maine
9 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To risk nothing is to risk everything."

Awesome sense of rhythm. :) I loved this.

on Oct. 1 2009 at 8:48 am
dylonmichael GOLD, El Dorado, Kansas
10 articles 3 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
i have two one is "live life as if it were your last day on earth" and two is "never make some one your everything because when they leave you you have nothing"

i loved it its about a secret crush that your scared to ask out i have been down that road many times

on Sep. 30 2009 at 8:23 pm
Writer4life BRONZE, Acton, Massachusetts
2 articles 0 photos 5 comments
wow, your a good writer!!! you should enter a contest when your done!!! It'll be great!!! You should be proud!!!:):)

raybeck0809 said...
on Sep. 30 2009 at 7:29 pm
i really like your song that you rote that takes a lot of work to do


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