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I know you don't notice me,
Don't even know that i exsist.
But, in all of my dreams, you're in "Bop" magazines
You're face is so precious and perfect to me
And i don't care about you're flaws, you're my fantasy..
I go crazy thinkin' about
Just wanna (to be continued)




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OLIVIA!!!!! said...
Oct. 4, 2009 at 3:57 pm:
you should finish it.
im absolutely starving for more!
you should also check me out to :)
 
Thandiwe replied...
Oct. 5, 2009 at 2:12 pm :
thanks, i rewrote the rest, but it isn't published yet :)
 
OLIVIA!!!!! replied...
Oct. 5, 2009 at 5:07 pm :
well publish it!!! lol
i really want to read the rest of it!!!
 
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yelsse<3 said...
Oct. 4, 2009 at 2:23 pm:
Good poem!! How cute((:
 
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David A. said...
Oct. 2, 2009 at 12:56 am:
good so far =)
 
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kendraelysia This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 1, 2009 at 2:47 pm:
Awesome sense of rhythm. :) I loved this.
 
Thandiwe replied...
Oct. 2, 2009 at 2:39 pm :
thanks for the comment
 
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dylonmichael said...
Oct. 1, 2009 at 8:48 am:
i loved it its about a secret crush that your scared to ask out i have been down that road many times
 
Thandiwe replied...
Oct. 1, 2009 at 10:04 pm :
yeah, thanks for the comment
 
dylonmichael replied...
Oct. 2, 2009 at 8:21 am :
welcome :)
 
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raybeck0809 said...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 7:29 pm:
i really like your song that you rote that takes a lot of work to do
 
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Writer4life said...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 3:30 pm:
that's good!!!
 
Thandiwe M. replied...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 3:49 pm :
Thanks, i wrote it myself, and other songs too.
 
Writer4life replied...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 8:23 pm :
wow, your a good writer!!! you should enter a contest when your done!!! It'll be great!!! You should be proud!!!:):)
 
Chelsea H. replied...
Oct. 2, 2009 at 8:27 am :
just wanna what?
 
Thandiwe replied...
Oct. 2, 2009 at 2:38 pm :
i didn't really finish the thought, but i thought reders would get my point, but i wrote the whole song in another thing i published called Precious :) thanks for ur comment
 
~blueroses~ replied...
Oct. 3, 2009 at 7:49 pm :
i do get what your saying, i write songs and poetry too, but yours is really really good. :) congrats and good luck
 
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