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Crush

I know you don't notice me,
Don't even know that i exsist.
But, in all of my dreams, you're in "Bop" magazines
You're face is so precious and perfect to me
And i don't care about you're flaws, you're my fantasy..
I go crazy thinkin' about
Just wanna (to be continued)



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yaelephant5 said...
Oct. 11, 2009 at 10:19 pm
i'll be honest... i'm not a huge fan of this. its fine but nothing incredibe.
 
sweetNsour replied...
Nov. 15, 2009 at 11:42 am
You have somewhat of a point.. but it just makes more sense to keep your negative comments to yourself.. its not like your giving them any advice.. that would be different
 
yaelephant5 replied...
Nov. 15, 2009 at 3:45 pm
ok, i agree. i didn't even say why i didn't like it so i guess it would be different if i had.
 
Z3bRUh said...
Oct. 4, 2009 at 4:53 pm
ugh don't stop here!!! keep going!
u gotta way with wordsss
 
Michelle G. said...
Oct. 4, 2009 at 4:02 pm
DANG, THIS WAS GOOD, HURRY UP AND FINNISH it, homeboy got talent! dang, thats all i have to say
 
OLIVIA!!!!! said...
Oct. 4, 2009 at 3:57 pm
you should finish it.
im absolutely starving for more!
you should also check me out to :)
 
Thandiwe replied...
Oct. 5, 2009 at 2:12 pm
thanks, i rewrote the rest, but it isn't published yet :)
 
OLIVIA!!!!! replied...
Oct. 5, 2009 at 5:07 pm
well publish it!!! lol
i really want to read the rest of it!!!
 
yelsse<3 said...
Oct. 4, 2009 at 2:23 pm
Good poem!! How cute((:
 
David A. said...
Oct. 2, 2009 at 12:56 am
good so far =)
 
kendraelysia This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 1, 2009 at 2:47 pm
Awesome sense of rhythm. :) I loved this.
 
Thandiwe replied...
Oct. 2, 2009 at 2:39 pm
thanks for the comment
 
dylonmichael said...
Oct. 1, 2009 at 8:48 am
i loved it its about a secret crush that your scared to ask out i have been down that road many times
 
Thandiwe replied...
Oct. 1, 2009 at 10:04 pm
yeah, thanks for the comment
 
dylonmichael replied...
Oct. 2, 2009 at 8:21 am
welcome :)
 
raybeck0809 said...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 7:29 pm
i really like your song that you rote that takes a lot of work to do
 
Writer4life said...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 3:30 pm
that's good!!!
 
Thandiwe M. replied...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 3:49 pm
Thanks, i wrote it myself, and other songs too.
 
Writer4life replied...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 8:23 pm
wow, your a good writer!!! you should enter a contest when your done!!! It'll be great!!! You should be proud!!!:):)
 
Chelsea H. replied...
Oct. 2, 2009 at 8:27 am
just wanna what?
 
Thandiwe replied...
Oct. 2, 2009 at 2:38 pm
i didn't really finish the thought, but i thought reders would get my point, but i wrote the whole song in another thing i published called Precious :) thanks for ur comment
 
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