Crush

August 26, 2009
By Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)


I know you don't notice me,
Don't even know that i exsist.
But, in all of my dreams, you're in "Bop" magazines
You're face is so precious and perfect to me
And i don't care about you're flaws, you're my fantasy..
I go crazy thinkin' about
Just wanna (to be continued)


The author's comments:
This song i wrote is very special to me :)

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on Apr. 13 at 8:04 am
Summer_R_Quinn GOLD, Madison, South Dakota
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This is great, keep writing! Please check out my songs and vote for them!

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Jun. 14 2016 at 11:55 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

Hey, I don't have music for it. I can't play an instrument but that's very interesting. I'd love to hear it to music.

on Jun. 25 2015 at 5:53 pm
Kayla Thompson, Seymour, Indiana
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I really like your song my name is Kayla and my dad owns a recording studio ... if there is more to this song I would love to hear it

Caroline said...
on Jun. 21 2015 at 4:34 pm
I really like the way you've drawn on your own life experiences, especially being of a similar age, to really try to imagine what life was like for Anne Frank. A very profound comment at the end. How very true!

on May. 22 2014 at 2:21 pm
katie grooms BRONZE, Pocahontas Ar, Arkansas
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This song is gr8 it really speaks to me. it  reminds me of my breakup. and how things are now. but it tells me that i shouldnt be so sad

lake33 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 19 2013 at 1:02 pm
lake33 BRONZE, Uniontown, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"You want something? go get it!"

Who ever reads this, please check out my poems. I need your opinions!

on Oct. 30 2012 at 10:11 am
hnabanana SILVER, Urbandale, Iowa
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this is actually okay, can you check out my work? i have songs on there and need to have some opinion! not promising it'll be good though :) or not as good as this ;)

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Oct. 29 2012 at 9:21 am
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

Haha thanks. If you view my songs the song "precious" is the continuation

nanna said...
on Jun. 20 2012 at 12:02 pm
nice song its like me

on May. 22 2012 at 2:08 pm
-youngbrownpoet-, Cheyenne, Wyoming
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Favorite Quote:
"You're the only one who can make the difference. Whatever your dream is, go for it." - Earvin "Magic" Johnson

This is exactly how I feel towards a girl! Well, what you have so far anyway...Keep on writing bud.

on Mar. 2 2012 at 1:14 pm
scottchb47 BRONZE, Flushing, New York
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whats the point of the continuation?

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Jan. 20 2012 at 1:43 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

pop/ rock or something

on Jan. 18 2012 at 2:52 pm
NGGuerrette GOLD, Litchfield, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
If the world is one thing, and we are another then we should entitle ourselves into that, because it is the law that resides in our heart to go forth and to examine the rest of us… -Myself

What genre of music does this fall under?

on Dec. 5 2011 at 10:50 am
Kparker27 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
30 articles 17 photos 101 comments

Favorite Quote:
"In the end, it's still best to wait for the one we want rather than settle for what's available. It's still best to wait for the one you love rather than to settle for the one who's around. It's still best to wait for the right person, because life's too short to waste on the wrong one."

Thart's what I was thinking....lol

Racquel reid said...
on Dec. 5 2011 at 9:53 am
Racquel reid, Wakegaun, Illinois
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your stupid

Racquel reid said...
on Dec. 5 2011 at 9:53 am
Racquel reid, Wakegaun, Illinois
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yea ahhahahahha

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Sep. 23 2011 at 6:25 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

thanks love <3 :)

Mrs.parez said...
on Sep. 22 2011 at 1:48 pm
this is a great poem or story its very true

on Sep. 9 2011 at 8:58 pm
ThePeaceDaisy BRONZE, Albany, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“Laundry is the only thing that should be separated by color.” - Unknown
I will change this every week!

and* typo 

on Sep. 9 2011 at 8:57 pm
ThePeaceDaisy BRONZE, Albany, New York
4 articles 5 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Laundry is the only thing that should be separated by color.” - Unknown
I will change this every week!

np abd thanks!


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