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I know you don't notice me,
Don't even know that i exsist.
But, in all of my dreams, you're in "Bop" magazines
You're face is so precious and perfect to me
And i don't care about you're flaws, you're my fantasy..
I go crazy thinkin' about
Just wanna (to be continued)




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lake33 said...
Apr. 19, 2013 at 1:02 pm:
Who ever reads this, please check out my poems. I need your opinions!
 
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hnabanana said...
Oct. 30, 2012 at 10:11 am:
this is actually okay, can you check out my work? i have songs on there and need to have some opinion! not promising it'll be good though :) or not as good as this ;)
 
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nanna said...
Jun. 20, 2012 at 12:02 pm:
nice song its like me
 
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-youngbrownpoet- said...
May 22, 2012 at 2:08 pm:
This is exactly how I feel towards a girl! Well, what you have so far anyway...Keep on writing bud.
 
Thandiwe replied...
Oct. 29, 2012 at 9:21 am :
Haha thanks. If you view my songs the song "precious" is the continuation
 
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scottchb47 said...
Mar. 2, 2012 at 1:14 pm:
whats the point of the continuation?
 
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TheLoneForestThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 18, 2012 at 2:52 pm:
What genre of music does this fall under?
 
Thandiwe replied...
Jan. 20, 2012 at 1:43 pm :
pop/ rock or something
 
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Mrs.parez said...
Sept. 22, 2011 at 1:48 pm:
this is a great poem or story its very true
 
Thandiwe replied...
Sept. 23, 2011 at 6:25 pm :
thanks love <3 :)
 
Racquel R. replied...
Dec. 5, 2011 at 9:53 am :
yea ahhahahahha
 
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LazyDaisyTheWriter said...
Sept. 8, 2011 at 8:26 pm:
I really like the start of this song! I know how you feel, although my crush is my friend, but he doesn't like me that way.
 
Thandiwe replied...
Sept. 9, 2011 at 3:50 pm :
omg that sucks :( good luck though!!! and thanks
 
LazyDaisyTheWriter replied...
Sept. 9, 2011 at 8:57 pm :
np abd thanks!
 
LazyDaisyTheWriter replied...
Sept. 9, 2011 at 8:58 pm :
and* typo 
 
Racquel R. replied...
Dec. 5, 2011 at 9:53 am :
your stupid
 
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liberianbadd said...
Sept. 8, 2011 at 12:35 pm:
this is sooo guud, i really enjoyed reading it, and its is so true
 
Thandiwe replied...
Sept. 8, 2011 at 2:39 pm :
thanks. precious* is the continuation if u want to read the rest
 
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BeccaMarie said...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 8:26 am:
... somebodys got bieber fever... ;)
 
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GreenActress said...
Aug. 17, 2011 at 8:34 pm:
Good job, I'm off to find the rest of the song to read! Keep up the good work! Check out some of my work if you have time! Happy writing! :)
 
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