August 26, 2009
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I know you don't notice me,
Don't even know that i exsist.
But, in all of my dreams, you're in "Bop" magazines
You're face is so precious and perfect to me
And i don't care about you're flaws, you're my fantasy..
I go crazy thinkin' about
Just wanna (to be continued)

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Summer_R_QuinnThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 8:04 am
This is great, keep writing! Please check out my songs and vote for them!
Kayla T. said...
Jun. 25, 2015 at 5:53 pm
I really like your song my name is Kayla and my dad owns a recording studio ... if there is more to this song I would love to hear it
Thandiwe replied...
Jun. 14, 2016 at 11:55 pm
Hey, I don't have music for it. I can't play an instrument but that's very interesting. I'd love to hear it to music.
Katie G. said...
May 22, 2014 at 2:21 pm
This song is gr8 it really speaks to me. it  reminds me of my breakup. and how things are now. but it tells me that i shouldnt be so sad
lake33 said...
Apr. 19, 2013 at 1:02 pm
Who ever reads this, please check out my poems. I need your opinions!
Caroline replied...
Jun. 21, 2015 at 4:34 pm
I really like the way you've drawn on your own life experiences, especially being of a similar age, to really try to imagine what life was like for Anne Frank. A very profound comment at the end. How very true!
hnabanana said...
Oct. 30, 2012 at 10:11 am
this is actually okay, can you check out my work? i have songs on there and need to have some opinion! not promising it'll be good though :) or not as good as this ;)
nanna said...
Jun. 20, 2012 at 12:02 pm
nice song its like me
-youngbrownpoet- said...
May 22, 2012 at 2:08 pm
This is exactly how I feel towards a girl! Well, what you have so far anyway...Keep on writing bud.
Thandiwe replied...
Oct. 29, 2012 at 9:21 am
Haha thanks. If you view my songs the song "precious" is the continuation
scottchb47 said...
Mar. 2, 2012 at 1:14 pm
whats the point of the continuation?
TheLoneForest said...
Jan. 18, 2012 at 2:52 pm
What genre of music does this fall under?
Thandiwe replied...
Jan. 20, 2012 at 1:43 pm
pop/ rock or something
Mrs.parez said...
Sept. 22, 2011 at 1:48 pm
this is a great poem or story its very true
Thandiwe replied...
Sept. 23, 2011 at 6:25 pm
thanks love <3 :)
Racquel R. replied...
Dec. 5, 2011 at 9:53 am
yea ahhahahahha
LazyDaisyTheWriter said...
Sept. 8, 2011 at 8:26 pm
I really like the start of this song! I know how you feel, although my crush is my friend, but he doesn't like me that way.
Thandiwe replied...
Sept. 9, 2011 at 3:50 pm
omg that sucks :( good luck though!!! and thanks
LazyDaisyTheWriter replied...
Sept. 9, 2011 at 8:57 pm
np abd thanks!
LazyDaisyTheWriter replied...
Sept. 9, 2011 at 8:58 pm
and* typo 
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