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You're Mine

August 6, 2009
By distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"


Verse 1:


When you’ve lost your way,
And you don’t know which path to take; Just reach for my hand, and I’ll show you the way
When the storm of life brings you farther than you want to go
Reach for my hand, and I’ll never let go.

Chorus:
When the rain falls,
when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Verse 2:

When trials seem to rip up your dreams,
Don’t give up, and don’t give in
Don’t let Satan win.
Remember that I’m fighting by your side,
So never run and never hide!

Chorus:

When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Sometimes things happen that we can’t understand,
But call out to the Father,
take Him by the hand!

Chorus:
When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine, oh you’re mine!

You will always be mine!


The author's comments:
Hi everyone! This is my very fist song that I have ever written!! I hope that you all like this song, and I would Really appreciate it if you could rate and comment, I really want to know how everyone thinks of this! Thanks again!!!

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on Feb. 16 2010 at 9:11 pm
Keisha9797 BRONZE, Columbus, Ohio
1 article 2 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love One Another ; as you love yourself"
"Love Your Neighbor As You Love Yourself; Love Yourself Before You Can Love Anyone Else"

OMG i almost cryed reading it.. (Crying now!!) but umm i love this song it's so amazing!!<3 Great!!!:D

on Feb. 14 2010 at 8:21 pm
adristar96 SILVER, Miami, Florida
9 articles 4 photos 77 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is like a box of chocolate, You'll never know what your gonna get. :) Forest Gump

i really like it :) i have some stuff up if you'd like to see and comment

on Feb. 14 2010 at 11:43 am
brysmarie12 PLATINUM, Neoga, Illinois
22 articles 1 photo 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am the author of my own life... unfortunately I'm writing in pen and can't erase my mistakes.

This is very good! :) Please check out some of my work... I love the feedback! :)

on Feb. 13 2010 at 6:29 pm
CircusChild GOLD, Purchase, New York
18 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm learning to be brave in by beautiful mistakes
-P!nk

really like this...check out some of my stuff and let me know what you think? i cant really write lyrics very well though):

on Feb. 6 2010 at 8:13 am
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Sure! Lol :) Thanks so much!!! :)

meggers SILVER said...
on Feb. 5 2010 at 7:40 am
meggers SILVER, San Angelo, Texas
5 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
if u cant say something nice then dont say anything at all

i love it can i sing it for you!!!!!!!!! lol

on Jan. 31 2010 at 10:08 pm
love2love17 GOLD, Springfield, Missouri
13 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
You only live once, but if you do it right, once is enough. -Mae West

Hey does this song have a melody? I would love to sing it! You are very talented, I love the message of this song!!

on Jan. 23 2010 at 10:24 pm
VioletsandVoice, Spiritwood, North Dakota
0 articles 0 photos 170 comments
I loved your song and admire you for writing it because I can do poetry, fiction, essays, pretty much anything if not perfectly but I tried to write a song and I couldn't even do a decent corus so you've done better than I ever will :)

on Jan. 23 2010 at 10:23 pm
creativemind BRONZE, A City, Other
2 articles 2 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"never let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game"

hey good job! love it!

on Jan. 17 2010 at 5:59 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thanks so much!

Pillow BRONZE said...
on Jan. 16 2010 at 6:45 pm
Pillow BRONZE, Spokane, Washington
1 article 5 photos 300 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing says oops like a wall of flame.

I loved your song. I wish I knew the melody so I could sing it for my friends. Wonderful job.

dawnlight411 said...
on Jan. 15 2010 at 4:54 pm
This is a interesting poem because its a song that is a poem, which are also like raps, and its saying how love is in an interesting way.

on Jan. 15 2010 at 8:50 am
ButtercupBby BRONZE, Conyers, Georgia
3 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
when i look up at the stars i hope to be one day

Love the song (: especially the chorus

on Jan. 14 2010 at 7:15 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

thank you ALL for your supportive and kind comments it means SO much to me!!! I LOVE hearing from you all!!! :) THANKS AGAIN, YOU GUYS ARE THE GREATEST!!!!!!!

Love,

distant_dreamer!

ZiRaww! SILVER said...
on Jan. 14 2010 at 5:46 pm
ZiRaww! SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
5 articles 0 photos 96 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Giving up doesn’t always mean you are weak; sometimes it means that you are strong enough to let go. ”

The chorus is soooo cute i can't stop saying it in my head!!!

hotchick15 said...
on Jan. 14 2010 at 11:24 am
wow i think you are a really good writer and i love ur song!! i give it 5 stars... keep up the good work

LOGAN said...
on Jan. 14 2010 at 10:27 am
this song is pretty good.i liked it.

i want to here this with its own beat.

Princess P said...
on Jan. 14 2010 at 10:19 am
i really liked this poem mostly be cause i like to write music also. plus i can relate to what she wrote about

gustavo said...
on Jan. 14 2010 at 7:43 am
awesome song 10/10

on Jan. 8 2010 at 9:02 am
CylasPalacios GOLD, Macomb, Illinois
12 articles 6 photos 11 comments
This is amazing! Is it like a love song?

It is almost "Emo", but in the end it totally brings you up again.

I love the mixed emotions.