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You're Mine

Verse 1:


When you’ve lost your way,
And you don’t know which path to take; Just reach for my hand, and I’ll show you the way
When the storm of life brings you farther than you want to go
Reach for my hand, and I’ll never let go.

Chorus:
When the rain falls,
when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Verse 2:

When trials seem to rip up your dreams,
Don’t give up, and don’t give in
Don’t let Satan win.
Remember that I’m fighting by your side,
So never run and never hide!

Chorus:

When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Sometimes things happen that we can’t understand,
But call out to the Father,
take Him by the hand!

Chorus:
When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine, oh you’re mine!

You will always be mine!



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heybabyluver said...
Oct. 14, 2010 at 9:51 pm:
 I love this it is so pretty
 
Brokendownbutnotbrokenapart replied...
Oct. 25, 2010 at 12:55 pm :
BEAUTIFULLY PUT TOGETHER!!! BRAVO! BRAVA!
 
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tori1256 said...
Oct. 14, 2010 at 1:48 pm:
i like ur poem but not who its is about justin bever really
 
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lil_shay said...
Oct. 14, 2010 at 1:02 pm:
i really like the way you got your point across.good job
 
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wendyleee said...
Oct. 14, 2010 at 9:25 am:

Well I really liked the whole thing, especially the main sentence when it goes 'cause you're mine, oh, you're mine'.

Still, if you don't mind me saying,  I think some part of the verse were pretty stiff and you could make the chorus more interesting by using some other words that aren't so common.  

Anyway, it would've made a great song as it is :)

 
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LunaWingsFlyAway said...
Oct. 3, 2010 at 8:02 pm:
thnks :) can u comment some of my work pleaseee :) thnkkss
 
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LunaWingsFlyAway said...
Sept. 22, 2010 at 5:54 pm:
its a really cuteee song....i wish i cud hear how it sounds tho...
 
loversinjapan This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 1, 2010 at 9:35 pm :

I agree with LunaWingsFlyAway. I like verse one the best. I envy your song writing.

PS LunaWingsFlyAway nice screeenname

 
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ALlovegreen said...
Sept. 17, 2010 at 9:30 am:
this is really good i wish we could here you singing it or some of the tune!!
 
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A.Dreamer said...
Aug. 27, 2010 at 8:30 pm:
Amazing job writing this! :) It's beautiful, it sounds like it would be a huge hit!
 
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puppy123 said...
Aug. 26, 2010 at 1:01 pm:
this an cool song or poetry is cool i love it
 
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olican16 said...
Aug. 18, 2010 at 12:32 pm:

THIS is really a great piece i love it just like the rest of your stuff! keep up the great work!

 

Check out my stuff??

 

 
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SundanceKid said...
Aug. 16, 2010 at 11:24 am:
Tell me you are turning this into a song! I would totally buy this.
 
distant_dreamer replied...
Aug. 16, 2010 at 11:34 am :
thank you sooo much! lol :) I want to and probably will someday! :D
 
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Marlyre This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 8:05 pm:
just out of curiosity, when you were writing this song, what instrument would you think would go with this? as for advice, maybe you should count your syllables in your verses, it might help the flow better and will make easier if you ever want to perform it
 
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court8652 said...
Aug. 4, 2010 at 9:58 am:
is he/she yours or Gods? whos hand are they reaching for. make sure you stay consistant. the whole song youre saying reach for me youre mine then you sday reach for god but youre still mine? also i dont fell emotion.....be aware of that. over all tho it was good for a first song... youll get better once you find a topic youre compassionate about and with practice.....:D
 
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pinkidinki101 said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 9:51 pm:
I liked your song but i just got the feeling that it constantly repeated over and over and i know a song is soppose to be like that but you took it to an extreme please make it so it sticks but make it different with everything the verses and the chorus make it interesting so people will be more into your song 
 
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SWRA said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 8:25 am:
IT Was a really good song but next time just use a little bit more rhyming words
 
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liljrp said...
Aug. 2, 2010 at 8:20 am:
That was pretty good you showed a lot of feelings on having a person be yours (:. Did you just do this writing when you were sad or what?
 
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rokgurl said...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 2:58 am:
I love it,its so....cant explain it.
 
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just.me_899 said...
Jul. 25, 2010 at 8:28 pm:
awww :)) that was really sweet, i completely loved it!!! nice job ^^ that was so beautiful
 
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