You're Mine

August 6, 2009
By distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"


Verse 1:


When you’ve lost your way,
And you don’t know which path to take; Just reach for my hand, and I’ll show you the way
When the storm of life brings you farther than you want to go
Reach for my hand, and I’ll never let go.

Chorus:
When the rain falls,
when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Verse 2:

When trials seem to rip up your dreams,
Don’t give up, and don’t give in
Don’t let Satan win.
Remember that I’m fighting by your side,
So never run and never hide!

Chorus:

When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Sometimes things happen that we can’t understand,
But call out to the Father,
take Him by the hand!

Chorus:
When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine, oh you’re mine!

You will always be mine!


The author's comments:
Hi everyone! This is my very fist song that I have ever written!! I hope that you all like this song, and I would Really appreciate it if you could rate and comment, I really want to know how everyone thinks of this! Thanks again!!!

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Pickles-29 said...
on Mar. 17 2011 at 2:35 pm
Pickles-29, Boise, Idaho
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I loved this great job!!!!!!!! Keep writing

 

 


on Mar. 17 2011 at 11:12 am
ForgottenSomeHow PLATINUM, Harrison, Arkansas
39 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
Many Things Are Said,
Many Words Are Meant,
It's The One's That Hurt You The Most,
You Don't Never Forget.

That... Was... I Don't Know... I'm Speechless... It Was Truely Amazing... And, I'll Be Sure To Remember This Song.(:

on Mar. 17 2011 at 9:57 am
travelbuff13 BRONZE, Boise, Idaho
1 article 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is like a box of bullets, you never know when it's hit you and how bad its gonna hurt."

That is just........ I am speechless

on Mar. 17 2011 at 12:34 am
RupaPrasad SILVER, Ranchi, Jharkhand, Other
5 articles 4 photos 7 comments
I loved it... it has worked as an inspiration for me as i too wanna write  songs... great work... keep writing more....

Lilium BRONZE said...
on Mar. 15 2011 at 5:02 pm
Lilium BRONZE, Marysville, Washington
1 article 12 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you don't try, you'll never know.

There is hope, you just have to search your heart for it.

That was a really good song :) I liked it! You should write another one~!

on Feb. 23 2011 at 12:09 pm
jack2024 BRONZE, Elgin, Illinois
1 article 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Im awesome

This poem was very good.  The author of this poem knew how to capture the reader’s attention.  The poem didn’t go into too much depth, but I still liked the meaning behind it.  It did take me two times to read it before I understood the whole thing.  I think they need to stay with simplicity more than complexity.

cbking1 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 23 2011 at 12:09 pm
cbking1 BRONZE, Elgin, Illinois
1 article 0 photos 1 comment
this was awesome

on Feb. 22 2011 at 9:04 pm
da1sygirl SILVER, Delmar, New York
8 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Magic is believing in yourself. If you can do that, you can do anything." -Foka Gomez

This is REALLY good! Keep writing song lyrics, and maybe you'll inspire me to write more lyrics.

e@gles16 said...
on Feb. 9 2011 at 2:43 pm

You are welcome :))))

 


on Feb. 6 2011 at 7:10 am
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Yes! The "Father" in this song, is talking about Go.d, and He wont ever let His child go, no matter what! It's basically Go.d saying "I will always be there, and you'll be just fine, cause your MINE! :) Thanks for all the sweet comments.

on Feb. 5 2011 at 3:58 pm
musicfan PLATINUM, South Holland, Illinois
38 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"...in the end, you've got to become the change you want to see in the world."

This is really good! I love how you didn't let us know who was saying these things when you mention the Father.

e@gles16 said...
on Feb. 5 2011 at 8:37 am
I love dis song, alot & it have alot of meaning to it when you think you dont have no one but you always have the Father & he will never let you go?

Hope Udarbe said...
on Feb. 4 2011 at 3:20 pm
Hope Udarbe, Westminster, Colorado
0 articles 0 photos 25 comments

how sweet ,that song was so pretty

 


on Feb. 1 2011 at 5:57 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Aww thank you so much!!!!! :) I'm soo glad you liked it! Um..I just felt like writing a song, and idk, the words just suddenly came to me! :) Thanks for you sweet comments!!!!

on Feb. 1 2011 at 3:55 pm
collegegirladventures GOLD, Mequon, Wisconsin
10 articles 8 photos 307 comments

Favorite Quote:
A poet's work is to name the unnameable, to point at frauds, to take sides, start arguments, shape the world, and stop it going to sleep.

~Salman Rushdie

Encore, encore!!!!!!!!! Briiliant masterpiece! 5 stars for the awesome poet. :)

Your stylye of poetry is amazing, especially for your 1st one. What made you want to write this?


on Feb. 1 2011 at 12:40 pm
WaterGirl23 BRONZE, Nutley, New Jersey
4 articles 5 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some are born great, some achieve greatness, and some have greatness thrust upon them." -William Shakespeare

i love it! :D

Jessi_chick said...
on Jan. 24 2011 at 10:46 pm
This is really good you should keep up all of ur good work I love it! I hope to be as good as u one day :)

on Jan. 24 2011 at 5:20 am
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thank you All for your sweet encouraging comments!!!! :)

limelove said...
on Jan. 23 2011 at 9:32 pm
limelove, Gresham, Oregon
0 articles 1 photo 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
Memories last forever.

I really like this song i can't stop singing it in my head. Keep it up.

on Jan. 22 2011 at 7:55 pm
RisingMomoM.R. SILVER, Georgetown, Texas
7 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
i think of experiences and images...as being stored in the rootcellar of my mind, hibernating in the dark in the dark until they are ready for stories.
-Daniel Keyes

bravo. i'm singing it my self and spectacular. keep it up




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