You're Mine

August 6, 2009
By distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"


Verse 1:


When you’ve lost your way,
And you don’t know which path to take; Just reach for my hand, and I’ll show you the way
When the storm of life brings you farther than you want to go
Reach for my hand, and I’ll never let go.

Chorus:
When the rain falls,
when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Verse 2:

When trials seem to rip up your dreams,
Don’t give up, and don’t give in
Don’t let Satan win.
Remember that I’m fighting by your side,
So never run and never hide!

Chorus:

When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Sometimes things happen that we can’t understand,
But call out to the Father,
take Him by the hand!

Chorus:
When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine, oh you’re mine!

You will always be mine!


The author's comments:
Hi everyone! This is my very fist song that I have ever written!! I hope that you all like this song, and I would Really appreciate it if you could rate and comment, I really want to know how everyone thinks of this! Thanks again!!!

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karash10397 said...
on Jun. 13 2011 at 12:16 pm

This is good ..... 



on May. 30 2011 at 8:30 am
sportsycrystal GOLD, New Fairfield, Connecticut
12 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Two roads diverged in a yellow wood, and I, I took the one less traveled by, and it has made all the difference." ---Robert Frost

I really love this... and i really like your name btw i think it really stands out to every dreamer and writer here

 


twpercy BRONZE said...
on May. 22 2011 at 11:41 am
twpercy BRONZE, Lansdale, Pennsylvania
2 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
“The only way to keep your health is to eat what you don’t want, drink what you don’t like, and do what you’d rather not”

this is good.

on May. 16 2011 at 7:34 pm
StacieTonissen SILVER, Hubbard, Oregon
9 articles 0 photos 5 comments
Wow this is a really good song...could I possibly use this sometime?

on May. 4 2011 at 1:02 am
purplelass_3209 BRONZE, Iriga City, Other
1 article 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you really want to shine,rock and invent your own style. Be brave and be yourself.

I like your song *´'`°¤¸¸.•'´`'•.¸¸¤°´'`**´'`°¤¸¸.•'´`'•.¸¸¤°´'`**´'`°¤¸¸.•'´`'•.¸¸¤°´'`*

on Apr. 30 2011 at 11:24 pm
estherhoran__ GOLD, Bell Gardens, California
10 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never lose an opportunity of seeing anything beautiful, for beauty is God's handwriting. -Ralph Waldo Emerson

It's very well written! i love it keep up the good work buddy!

on Apr. 30 2011 at 3:37 pm
Sierra379 BRONZE, Lehi, Utah
2 articles 0 photos 14 comments
I love it! ...wow youve got talent

on Apr. 30 2011 at 12:14 pm
MonaLisa316 GOLD, Indianapolis, Indiana
10 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
YOLO:you only live once

this was so amazin...i really loved it

on Apr. 29 2011 at 10:27 am
ehascher BRONZE, Michigan
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments
This is really good! I love the first verse, and the beginning of the chorus. You should definitely try and put it to music!

on Apr. 21 2011 at 4:24 pm
this is a really good espetialy for a first timer. its also deep i get were this is comeing from. if i were you then id keep writing and the more you do the better itl get.

on Apr. 15 2011 at 9:53 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thanks for all the great comments, and yes you can use it for your track, I would be sooo honored! Could you maybe post it on youtube, so I could listen to it? :) Thanks so much again!

on Apr. 15 2011 at 1:30 pm
hello-im-a-koala, Bronx, New York
0 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
People moving all the time inside a perfectly straight line. Don't you wanna curve away? When it's such, it's such a perfect day.

This is really beautiful. I love it and I wish I could write good songs -_______- I'm so jealous...

 

 

 

 

 


Duane BRONZE said...
on Apr. 11 2011 at 12:52 pm
Duane BRONZE, Wathena, Kansas
3 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
What comes around goes around

hey love the song just wondering if I can use it for my first song on my record?

love it


Maveric SILVER said...
on Apr. 8 2011 at 7:43 pm
Maveric SILVER, Baton Rouge, Louisiana
7 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life happens wat realy matters is what you do to get over the bad times

wow this is great u realy need to have someone sing it or send it to recording co. if u get the chance read some on mine n tell me what u think once again that was great

on Apr. 1 2011 at 8:55 pm
candygirl1985 GOLD, Mechanicsburg, Pennsylvania
16 articles 4 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
But I was used to finding something deadly in things that attracted me; there was always something deadly lurking in anything I wanted, anything I loved. And if it wasn't there ... I put it there myself. ~ John Knowles

Could you maybe set these lyrics to music? And maybe have someone sing it? I really like it, it is very good!

on Mar. 26 2011 at 8:52 pm
kaykaybeck PLATINUM, Petersburg, Michigan
24 articles 4 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life takes you somewhere, love helps you get there.

Very good (: you should keep writing!

on Mar. 19 2011 at 8:23 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

thank you sooo much for adding me to your favorites, that is such an honor, and I'm So happy you liked the song!

on Mar. 19 2011 at 8:22 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Hey just wanted to personally thank you for putting my song on your favorites, that is such an honor! :D Oh and I also saw that you just created an account on here, so Welcome!! :D ♥

on Mar. 19 2011 at 8:19 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Oh my goodenss, I just am so overwhelmed!!! I want to thank each one of you for your comments, they mean sooo much to me, and you all just made my day! :D

on Mar. 17 2011 at 7:45 pm
dolphin13 BRONZE, North St. Paul, Minnesota
1 article 0 photos 125 comments
Amen! Love the song!


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