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You're Mine

Verse 1:


When you’ve lost your way,
And you don’t know which path to take; Just reach for my hand, and I’ll show you the way
When the storm of life brings you farther than you want to go
Reach for my hand, and I’ll never let go.

Chorus:
When the rain falls,
when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Verse 2:

When trials seem to rip up your dreams,
Don’t give up, and don’t give in
Don’t let Satan win.
Remember that I’m fighting by your side,
So never run and never hide!

Chorus:

When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Sometimes things happen that we can’t understand,
But call out to the Father,
take Him by the hand!

Chorus:
When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine, oh you’re mine!

You will always be mine!



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Lilium said...
Mar. 15, 2011 at 5:02 pm:
That was a really good song :) I liked it! You should write another one~!
 
distant_dreamer replied...
Mar. 19, 2011 at 8:23 pm :
thank you sooo much for adding me to your favorites, that is such an honor, and I'm So happy you liked the song!
 
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jack2024 said...
Feb. 23, 2011 at 12:09 pm:
This poem was very good.  The author of this poem knew how to capture the reader’s attention.  The poem didn’t go into too much depth, but I still liked the meaning behind it.  It did take me two times to read it before I understood the whole thing.  I think they need to stay with simplicity more than complexity.
 
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cbking1 said...
Feb. 23, 2011 at 12:09 pm:
this was awesome
 
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da1sygirl said...
Feb. 22, 2011 at 9:04 pm:
This is REALLY good! Keep writing song lyrics, and maybe you'll inspire me to write more lyrics.
 
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e@gles16 said...
Feb. 9, 2011 at 2:43 pm:

You are welcome :))))

 

 
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musicfanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 5, 2011 at 3:58 pm:
This is really good! I love how you didn't let us know who was saying these things when you mention the Father.
 
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e@gles16 said...
Feb. 5, 2011 at 8:37 am:
I love dis song, alot & it have alot of meaning to it when you think you dont have no one but you always have the Father & he will never let you go?
 
distant_dreamer replied...
Feb. 6, 2011 at 7:10 am :
Yes! The "Father" in this song, is talking about Go.d, and He wont ever let His child go, no matter what! It's basically Go.d saying "I will always be there, and you'll be just fine, cause your MINE! :) Thanks for all the sweet comments.
 
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Hope U. said...
Feb. 4, 2011 at 3:20 pm:

how sweet ,that song was so pretty

 

 
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pixiedust15 said...
Feb. 1, 2011 at 3:55 pm:

Encore, encore!!!!!!!!! Briiliant masterpiece! 5 stars for the awesome poet. :)

Your stylye of poetry is amazing, especially for your 1st one. What made you want to write this?

 
distant_dreamer replied...
Feb. 1, 2011 at 5:57 pm :
Aww thank you so much!!!!! :) I'm soo glad you liked it! Um..I just felt like writing a song, and idk, the words just suddenly came to me! :) Thanks for you sweet comments!!!!
 
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WaterGirl23 said...
Feb. 1, 2011 at 12:40 pm:
i love it! :D
 
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Jessi_chick said...
Jan. 24, 2011 at 10:46 pm:
This is really good you should keep up all of ur good work I love it! I hope to be as good as u one day :)
 
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limelove said...
Jan. 23, 2011 at 9:32 pm:
I really like this song i can't stop singing it in my head. Keep it up.
 
distant_dreamer replied...
Jan. 24, 2011 at 5:20 am :
Thank you All for your sweet encouraging comments!!!! :)
 
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Monique R. said...
Jan. 22, 2011 at 7:55 pm:
bravo. i'm singing it my self and spectacular. keep it up
 
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Cinder said...
Jan. 10, 2011 at 8:16 pm:
You have real talent, well done :)
 
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Nick121 said...
Jan. 10, 2011 at 8:09 pm:
that was a great son
 
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kpott4 said...
Jan. 10, 2011 at 12:46 pm:
I really really like this, you have alot of talent!
 
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