You're Mine

August 6, 2009
By distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"


Verse 1:


When you’ve lost your way,
And you don’t know which path to take; Just reach for my hand, and I’ll show you the way
When the storm of life brings you farther than you want to go
Reach for my hand, and I’ll never let go.

Chorus:
When the rain falls,
when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Verse 2:

When trials seem to rip up your dreams,
Don’t give up, and don’t give in
Don’t let Satan win.
Remember that I’m fighting by your side,
So never run and never hide!

Chorus:

When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Sometimes things happen that we can’t understand,
But call out to the Father,
take Him by the hand!

Chorus:
When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine, oh you’re mine!

You will always be mine!


The author's comments:
Hi everyone! This is my very fist song that I have ever written!! I hope that you all like this song, and I would Really appreciate it if you could rate and comment, I really want to know how everyone thinks of this! Thanks again!!!

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misael said...
on Oct. 3 2011 at 10:24 am
misael, Pheonix, Arizona
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its apretty good poem n what its all saying is true...

on Sep. 28 2011 at 10:46 am
WOW. this is amazing! I love this.

on Sep. 17 2011 at 5:18 pm
Blackrosechick, (Anonymous), Other
0 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everything will be okay in the end. If it's not okay, it's not the end.

This is amazing!!! <33333

jaque1995 said...
on Sep. 16 2011 at 8:57 am
omg i love this poem you are the best :)

on Aug. 18 2011 at 8:53 am
sunny.all.day. GOLD, Potomac, Maryland
15 articles 0 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day so I never have to live without you."
— A.A. Milne (Winnie-the-Pooh)
"writing is a struggle against silence" carlos fuentos
You miss 100% of the shots you don't take."

this is amaazing!!! especially for ur first song :) keep writing!

yeahrigh1992 said...
on Aug. 8 2011 at 9:53 am
I love the religious connotation. Fabulous job.

Janeyy BRONZE said...
on Aug. 2 2011 at 3:11 pm
Janeyy BRONZE, Vancouver, Other
4 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams\" <3

Aww, so cute! Really good for your first song!

on Aug. 2 2011 at 2:12 pm
thanks! Yup you have my permission, could u send me the chords and stuff after, i would love to see it. thanks ;)

on Aug. 2 2011 at 2:10 pm
Hey everyone! Thanks for the great comments!! I'm so glad you all like this song! :) To jaymishae-you are too kind. :) thanks, and yes you have my permission, but i want to hear it once u have it done kk?! :) thanks again!

on Jul. 31 2011 at 11:22 pm
TheNovaClytie PLATINUM, Woodhaven, Michigan
30 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
If I could run away from my problems, I'd probably get lost, and then new problems would find me.
~Shelby Seeley

i can so hear the kings of leon singing this :)

on Jul. 30 2011 at 1:35 pm
David.DZE BRONZE, Paramus, New Jersey
1 article 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A bird doesn't sing because it has an answer, it sings because it has a song."
Lou Holtz

"A child of five would understand this. Send someone to fetch a child of five."
Groucho Marx

"A nickel ain't worth a dime anymore."
Yogi Berra

Last night I lay in bed looking up at the stars in the sky and I thought to myself, where the heck is the ceiling.

Amazing job.  It is soft and comforting and true in many ways.

on Jul. 27 2011 at 3:30 pm
jaymishae SILVER, Jonesboro, Arkansas
6 articles 1 photo 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Two things are infinite: the universe and human stupidity; and I'm not sure about the universe." - Albert Einstein

I love this soooooooooooooo much. i have an idea on how to put music to this. do i ahve permission?

 


on Jul. 27 2011 at 2:02 pm
riley1516 PLATINUM, Lake Zurich, Illinois
26 articles 2 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don’t ask what the world needs. Ask what makes you come alive, and go do it. Because what the world needs is people who have come alive.” -Howard Thurman

Nice job! my favorite part is verse 1 its absolutely beautiful! keep it up

on Jul. 27 2011 at 2:13 am
Shortblueeyes224 DIAMOND, Auburntown, Tennessee
57 articles 0 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Are We Happy Plastic People"- Casting Crowns "While we're sung to sleep by philosophies that save the trees and kill the children" - Casting Crowns "It's such a secret place, the land of tears"Antoine de Saint-Exupery

Very well done!!

on Jul. 18 2011 at 8:43 pm
wildflower92 BRONZE, Henrico, Virginia
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Who are you to judge the life i live i know im not perfect and i dont live to be! So before you go pointing fingers make sure your hands are clean - Bob Marley<3

This is reallly good can i have permission to do a cover to this song and write chords and notes for it ?

on Jul. 6 2011 at 8:12 pm
hdeneen26 BRONZE, Atglen, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Country music is three chords and the thruth.

Great! Just amazing! I loved it! I''m so suprised that this is only ur first song! Its great it rly is! Keep writing! I wanna read and maybe hear more!

on Jul. 5 2011 at 10:34 am
dia.dreamer GOLD, Kochi, Other
10 articles 0 photos 145 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I saw an angel in the marble and carved until I set him free." - Michelangelo
"I took a deep breath and listened to the old bray of my heart: I am, I am, I am." - Sylvia Plath

Wow this is awesome...I read it out loud and found myself singing a whole new tune just like that!! I can't believe this is really your first song!

Shivam GOLD said...
on Jul. 5 2011 at 3:12 am
Shivam GOLD, Lucknow, Other
19 articles 0 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
Its nothing like nothing or all.. its just that how far you climb up the tree before you fall..

the song you wrote is very impactful and beautiful, keep trying , keep writing, keep getting better... Best Wishes

on Jun. 13 2011 at 11:25 pm
Jarbey_unknown GOLD, Laplace, Louisiana
10 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"the weak never sleep" "you live to face reality of death"

that was beautiful i loved it so much keep up the good work

on Jun. 13 2011 at 12:33 pm
Tough_Heart SILVER, Abc, South Dakota
7 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Being saved gives you fire insurance. Burn or turn :)" -my pastor
I don't mind living in a man's world as long as I can be a woman in it. Marylin Monroe
All men are equal before fish. Herbert Hoover

This is UBER GOOD!!! best song I've read so far




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