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You're Mine

Verse 1:


When you’ve lost your way,
And you don’t know which path to take; Just reach for my hand, and I’ll show you the way
When the storm of life brings you farther than you want to go
Reach for my hand, and I’ll never let go.

Chorus:
When the rain falls,
when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Verse 2:

When trials seem to rip up your dreams,
Don’t give up, and don’t give in
Don’t let Satan win.
Remember that I’m fighting by your side,
So never run and never hide!

Chorus:

When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Sometimes things happen that we can’t understand,
But call out to the Father,
take Him by the hand!

Chorus:
When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine, oh you’re mine!

You will always be mine!



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ehascher said...
Apr. 29, 2011 at 10:27 am
This is really good! I love the first verse, and the beginning of the chorus. You should definitely try and put it to music!
 
cookiemonster said...
Apr. 21, 2011 at 4:24 pm
this is a really good espetialy for a first timer. its also deep i get were this is comeing from. if i were you then id keep writing and the more you do the better itl get.
 
hello-im-a-koala said...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 1:30 pm

This is really beautiful. I love it and I wish I could write good songs -_______- I'm so jealous...

 

 

 

 

 

 
Duane said...
Apr. 11, 2011 at 12:52 pm

hey love the song just wondering if I can use it for my first song on my record?

love it

 
distant_dreamer replied...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 9:53 pm
Thanks for all the great comments, and yes you can use it for your track, I would be sooo honored! Could you maybe post it on youtube, so I could listen to it? :) Thanks so much again!
 
Maveric said...
Apr. 8, 2011 at 7:43 pm
wow this is great u realy need to have someone sing it or send it to recording co. if u get the chance read some on mine n tell me what u think once again that was great
 
kaykaybeck said...
Mar. 26, 2011 at 8:52 pm
Very good (: you should keep writing!
 
distant_dreamer said...
Mar. 19, 2011 at 8:19 pm
Oh my goodenss, I just am so overwhelmed!!! I want to thank each one of you for your comments, they mean sooo much to me, and you all just made my day! :D
 
candygirl1985 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 1, 2011 at 8:55 pm
Could you maybe set these lyrics to music? And maybe have someone sing it? I really like it, it is very good!
 
Nerd34 said...
Mar. 17, 2011 at 2:35 pm

I loved this great job!!!!!!!! Keep writing

 

 

 
LoveMeFoever said...
Mar. 17, 2011 at 11:12 am
That... Was... I Don't Know... I'm Speechless... It Was Truely Amazing... And, I'll Be Sure To Remember This Song.(:
 
travelbuff13 said...
Mar. 17, 2011 at 9:57 am
That is just........ I am speechless
 
distant_dreamer replied...
Mar. 19, 2011 at 8:22 pm
Hey just wanted to personally thank you for putting my song on your favorites, that is such an honor! :D Oh and I also saw that you just created an account on here, so Welcome!! :D ♥
 
RupaPrasad said...
Mar. 17, 2011 at 12:34 am
I loved it... it has worked as an inspiration for me as i too wanna write  songs... great work... keep writing more....
 
Lilium said...
Mar. 15, 2011 at 5:02 pm
That was a really good song :) I liked it! You should write another one~!
 
distant_dreamer replied...
Mar. 19, 2011 at 8:23 pm
thank you sooo much for adding me to your favorites, that is such an honor, and I'm So happy you liked the song!
 
jack2024 said...
Feb. 23, 2011 at 12:09 pm
This poem was very good.  The author of this poem knew how to capture the reader’s attention.  The poem didn’t go into too much depth, but I still liked the meaning behind it.  It did take me two times to read it before I understood the whole thing.  I think they need to stay with simplicity more than complexity.
 
cbking1 said...
Feb. 23, 2011 at 12:09 pm
this was awesome
 
da1sygirl said...
Feb. 22, 2011 at 9:04 pm
This is REALLY good! Keep writing song lyrics, and maybe you'll inspire me to write more lyrics.
 
e@gles16 said...
Feb. 9, 2011 at 2:43 pm

You are welcome :))))

 

 
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