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Never Understimate a Girl

September 12, 2009
By amanda727 PLATINUM, Salt Lake City, Utah
amanda727 PLATINUM, Salt Lake City, Utah
33 articles 2 photos 245 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't let anybody tell you who you are; don't let anyone tell you that you don't deserve what you're willing to work for.
Never give up; you\'ll never know how far you could go until you try to get to where you want to go.


You're sittin' over there
talkin' like you're better than me
like you've got a right, more skill in everything
like it's destined in some prophecy
But let me tell you something
something one day you'll see
one day you'll figure out, what the world is all about
you'll step back to re-evaluate me
re-think your priorities

CHORUS: Never underestimate a girl
cause' one day she will become your world
she understands,she wears the pants
she knows your thoughts with one glance

Never underestimate a girl
cause' one day you'll be on her pay roll
can control you with her finger,
so don't dare too long to linger,
cause' you know she's in control
never underestimate a girl

Go ahead and drop your mouth
you know what I'm talkin' about
guess one day you'll see
Beauty tamed the Beast
Ariel left the sea
we're stronger than you think

CHORUS

Never underestimate a girl
no, never underestimate a girl


The author's comments:
DON'T UNDERESTIMATE A GIRL... I know some guys think they are tougher or more skilled but... us girls stick together and we're strong and we're quick thinking... so we'll take your world by surprise....

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Ivalyn(: said...
on May. 1 2012 at 2:13 pm
I liked how you used rhythm throughout the whole poem. I also liked you used metaphor to compare girls to the rest of the world. Great job(:

T-Plush 2 said...
on May. 1 2012 at 12:50 pm
I really like the personification you had. I also liked the rhythm you had.

Anynomous said...
on Apr. 30 2012 at 7:58 am
In your poem I loved the rhyme scheme that you used, but your rhythm was a little hard to find. I can tell it'll make a very good song though. Nice job.

on Apr. 29 2012 at 2:38 pm
AcrossTheUniverse BRONZE, Hondo, Texas
2 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Go confidentally in the direction of your dreams! Live the life you've always imagined." -Thoreau

Oh, and its more or less empowering (which society needs in a world where women/girls are portrayed as objects).

on Apr. 29 2012 at 2:33 pm
AcrossTheUniverse BRONZE, Hondo, Texas
2 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Go confidentally in the direction of your dreams! Live the life you've always imagined." -Thoreau

I love this! Some of the rhythm could probably flow better but for the most part excellent!

Hrk997 said...
on Apr. 26 2012 at 4:04 am
Hrk997, Chennai, Other
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
change is inevitable,for the better or worse is in
ur choices.

I like to think of poetry as something to express urself. I am guess in some guy was bossing around and hence, this poem.

on Apr. 22 2012 at 5:26 pm
CodyKinzz BRONZE, Lyman, Maine
4 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness.
~~ Robert Frost
...
“I'm tough, ambitious, and I know exactly what I want. If that makes me a b****, okay.
~~ Madonna

“People are like stained-glass wind

I think it's alright, not the BEST but very good.

on Apr. 21 2012 at 11:10 am
elizabethlong BRONZE, Chambersburg, Pennsylvania
1 article 0 photos 32 comments
Love it, you did an amzing job!!!!

on Apr. 18 2012 at 6:36 pm
Writer_Jordan GOLD, Ellicott City, Maryland
15 articles 0 photos 182 comments

Favorite Quote:
All that is gold does not glitter,
Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost.
From the ashes a fire shall be woken,
A light from the shadows shall spring;
Renewed shall be blade that was broken,
The crownless again shall be king.

I like it, but one thing I would revise is "she'll know you're thoughts in once glance." to something that didnt interrupt the flow so much "she'll know you're thoughts in just one glance." loved it once again!!

dynasty7 GOLD said...
on Apr. 18 2012 at 4:14 pm
dynasty7 GOLD, Cochranville, Pennsylvania
14 articles 0 photos 10 comments
You're piece is amazing and expresses you're emotions in a unique way. I would still like all you girls out there to remember that you can never stereotype everyone, yes I realize that some boys out there act like this, but some of us actually care about what you think also. We just can't write good enough peotry to express that. ;) 

on Apr. 18 2012 at 8:50 am
Under-the-Rain GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
18 articles 5 photos 99 comments

Favorite Quote:
Are you ready to go to battle with your mind?- Written by me :)
Lost the battle, win the war//Bringing my sinking ship back to the shore- Paramore, Now

AWSUME!!!! I love the part where you wrote "Beauty tamed the Beast/ Ariel tamed the sea," but you could have left the word "chorus" out.  Overall I love your poem, and your right, NEVER underestimate a girl :)

C.Lynn BRONZE said...
on Apr. 15 2012 at 3:19 pm
C.Lynn BRONZE, Humboldt, Iowa
4 articles 8 photos 2 comments
I personally loved this poem... maybe because I'm a girl, but you have the right idea. Girls are underestimated all the time and it shouldn't be that way.

LunaLives GOLD said...
on Apr. 15 2012 at 11:33 am
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
17 articles 0 photos 237 comments

Favorite Quote:
Because I can!-Me "Life is a choice and death is a decision"-Lil Wayne

This was really good. I don't think that people bring sexist issues up enough anymore. It's like they think that the problems don't exist anymore but they do.

on Apr. 13 2012 at 9:18 pm
Amberr.Daviss BRONZE, Cannon Falls, Minnesota
4 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Failure will never overtake me if my DETERMINATION to succeed is strong enough. If I’m not in front of you, then I’m right behind you because I never give up

Umm, This is amazing, this is how i feel! i hate when people think they are so much better then everyone else! great jod:)

on Apr. 9 2012 at 6:20 pm
BloglessBlogger GOLD, Somerset, California
10 articles 1 photo 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep keep you from playing the game."

Please record!!! The guys will never know what hit them. One day we'll rule the world while they learn what happens when they underestimate us.

AshuM said...
on Apr. 3 2012 at 4:26 pm
AshuM, Denver, Colorado
0 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love and Hate are very strong words."

Damn i can feel the power of your words!!! It made me get chills, so powerful.

on Apr. 3 2012 at 7:30 am
MarieAntoinette2014 DIAMOND, Scottsburg, Indiana
54 articles 2 photos 237 comments

Favorite Quote:
Isn't it ironic? We ignore the ones who adore us, adore the ones who ignore us, love the ones who hurt us, and hurt the ones that love us.

Tht's great! You should record it!!!!!!!!! Girl power!!!

on Apr. 2 2012 at 9:40 am
CyperPoet93 BRONZE, Cleveland, Ohio
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"To find what you seek in the road of life,
the best proverb of all is that which says:
"Leave no stone unturned." Edward Bulwer Lytton

I loved it, it was quite inspirational and I agree you should record yourself singing this song.

on Mar. 27 2012 at 9:03 am
Poison-ivy SILVER, Park City, Utah
5 articles 5 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Music can change the world, because it can change people.

I loved it!  You should like, record yourself singing it.

on Mar. 27 2012 at 7:11 am
LittleSully GOLD, Elmwood Park, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The course of true love never did love smooth." William Shakespeare

I think this is great! I'm a big athlete at my school and I'm always tired of having guys say they're better than me. Great job:)