September 16, 2009
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Oh, sweet sorrow, you're raining down on me
Licking my mouth, carrying salt to the sea
Wash away everything, expose all my colors
I walk with you, rain, away from the others

Streaming through rock, cage-less and young
Fall into myself, from my toes I have sprung
Soften the concrete with my face pressed to the floor
The holes shouting, porous, they beg me for more

Start a new season and wash away blandness
Prismacolored, pure, but I didn't plan this
Rain, condemned to a life of continual fall
The streak on my cheek is your silent call

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Shortblueeyes224 said...
Oct. 19, 2011 at 2:58 pm

i like it :)


deardiary said...
Apr. 12, 2010 at 5:33 pm
Love the second line.
lindsey said...
Nov. 20, 2009 at 10:26 am
I really like this!! But i think more words can be added to it.. But overall i really like it.. =]
TPGrange123 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 31, 2009 at 11:38 pm
my favorite one yet, simply lovely
Sadandstrangebeauty22 said...
Sept. 22, 2009 at 12:20 pm
I love it! <3
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