Love Hate

September 1, 2009
By Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)


[1st Verse
hun?
are you having fun
living this lie
hes not your
leave him be
stop saying 'he'll come back to me"

[Chorus]
She wnet boy crazy
Pickin' petals offa' daisies
singing
love me, love me not
why don't you just figure out
he's just something you
ain't got

[2nd verse]

Middle school girl
highschool crush
can't do nothin' but make a big (fuss)
all he does is act tough
she don't care
(she thinks he looks buff)

[Chorus}

[Bridge]
didn't like it when he got another girl
'cause she thought she was his world
so she got mad one day & deciden
"baby i'm gonna' huff & puff & steal your heart away
I'm gonna huff & puff & blow the b**** away

[Chorus](X2)

The author's comments:
I finished this recently as well
so i'm posting it.

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on Sep. 28 2016 at 6:48 pm
Your_Apathetic_Basketcase ELITE, Orlando, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Just remember, if the world didn't suck, we'd all fall off."
-Derrolyn Anderson

"Don't trust everything you see, even salt looks like sugar."

"The sea speaks more honestly... To those willing to drown." -J.D. Hard

I think this was a good song, but you spelled some things wrong on here. I think if you didn't spell these things wrong, it would be even better. Just simple mechanical errors. Overall really good it had a nice flow, and I can put a beat to it, which is always good in songs. Good job! :)

on Apr. 7 2016 at 10:11 am
JeffMusic BRONZE, Culpeper, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about finding yourself, its about creating yourself.

Great Song

on Sep. 3 2011 at 8:25 pm
ThePeaceDaisy BRONZE, Albany, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“Laundry is the only thing that should be separated by color.” - Unknown
I will change this every week!

love it! is there music written for it?

on Feb. 17 2011 at 11:22 am
Alvar-Knight SILVER, Harlingen, Texas
7 articles 5 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
what is said flies,
what is written never dies.

omg i love this song i wish i knew the rhythm so i could sing it. and what rocks it seems that it comes from the heart.

ashley1 said...
on Sep. 16 2010 at 7:39 am
ashley1, Fredericksburg, Virginia
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I could deffinitly tell that this poem came from the heart. It was fantastic!

on Aug. 3 2010 at 9:14 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

Thanks. This is just a remake of the first song I ever wrote back when I was 12. I just made it better. I'll try to check out some of your songs soon and give you some feedback.

Cajsim SILVER said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 3:27 pm
Cajsim SILVER, Reagan, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
If your gonna be dumb, then you gotta be tough... ~ My Grandpa

Wow very strong... Definently from the heart...

Please check out my songs! I love feedback...


on Apr. 17 2010 at 1:02 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

Thanks All my songs are writtin by others or my own issues and I try to make them relay our feelings at that time.

on Apr. 17 2010 at 1:01 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

Spanks you very much!

lexi said...
on Apr. 15 2010 at 8:05 pm
ok i have ta say that was awsome you can tell it is true and something that is worth listening to its great

on Apr. 15 2010 at 3:28 pm
Sincerely_Sammie GOLD, Baldwinsville, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Prove them all wrong."

I loved it!

on Mar. 18 2010 at 8:13 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

anyone can write songs. All words are just songs without the corny elevator ambiance.

on Mar. 18 2010 at 8:12 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

okay. I'll get to that soon. I don't like to sing although I apparently can.

on Mar. 18 2010 at 3:54 pm
superswim_19 PLATINUM, Grand Haven, Michigan
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That was super awesome! i wish i could write songs like that!

on Dec. 22 2009 at 8:37 pm
montana PLATINUM, Parker, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
cliche quotes I have are.....
I know, right? and..... Are you kidding me?

Wow. I really like 2 sing so I look at all of these songs an sing 'em and wow. dO u think u could comment on my work?

on Sep. 20 2009 at 10:51 am
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

Thank you I will.

on Sep. 19 2009 at 9:53 pm
SteffSilhouette SILVER, Oxford, Mississippi
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Thats awesome.

Let me know when you do :)

And I am aware of jamstudio.

<33

on Sep. 19 2009 at 12:12 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

Thank you. I am currently working on an accompanyment on a program called Jam Studio while i'm learning to play guitar. Once I do so I'm going to attempt to sing it and post on You Tube. Your feedback is verry appreciated.

on Sep. 19 2009 at 12:11 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

Thank you. To me i'ts one of my more amature-ish ones. But thanks for your feedback it's appreciated

on Sep. 18 2009 at 8:52 pm
SteffSilhouette SILVER, Oxford, Mississippi
5 articles 3 photos 6 comments
OMG.

I loved it.

I would love to write music to that and sing it

<3333!


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