Love Hate

September 1, 2009
[1st Verse
hun?
are you having fun
living this lie
hes not your
leave him be
stop saying 'he'll come back to me"

[Chorus]
She wnet boy crazy
Pickin' petals offa' daisies
singing
love me, love me not
why don't you just figure out
he's just something you
ain't got

[2nd verse]

Middle school girl
highschool crush
can't do nothin' but make a big (fuss)
all he does is act tough
she don't care
(she thinks he looks buff)

[Chorus}

[Bridge]
didn't like it when he got another girl
'cause she thought she was his world
so she got mad one day & deciden
"baby i'm gonna' huff & puff & steal your heart away
I'm gonna huff & puff & blow the b**** away

[Chorus](X2)





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Your_Apathetic_BasketcaseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 28, 2016 at 6:48 pm
I think this was a good song, but you spelled some things wrong on here. I think if you didn't spell these things wrong, it would be even better. Just simple mechanical errors. Overall really good it had a nice flow, and I can put a beat to it, which is always good in songs. Good job! :)
 
JeffMusic said...
Apr. 7, 2016 at 10:11 am
Great Song
 
LazyDaisyTheWriter said...
Sept. 3, 2011 at 8:25 pm
love it! is there music written for it?
 
6shady69 said...
Feb. 17, 2011 at 11:22 am
omg i love this song i wish i knew the rhythm so i could sing it. and what rocks it seems that it comes from the heart.
 
ashley1 said...
Sept. 16, 2010 at 7:39 am
I could deffinitly tell that this poem came from the heart. It was fantastic!
 
Cajsim said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 3:27 pm

Wow very strong... Definently from the heart...

Please check out my songs! I love feedback...

 
Brittaner replied...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 9:14 pm
Thanks. This is just a remake of the first song I ever wrote back when I was 12. I just made it better. I'll try to check out some of your songs soon and give you some feedback.
 
lexi said...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 8:05 pm
ok i have ta say that was awsome you can tell it is true and something that is worth listening to its great
 
b_swain replied...
Apr. 17, 2010 at 1:02 pm
Thanks All my songs are writtin by others or my own issues and I try to make them relay our feelings at that time.
 
Sincerely_Sammie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 3:28 pm
I loved it!
 
b_swain replied...
Apr. 17, 2010 at 1:01 pm
Spanks you very much!
 
superswim_19 said...
Mar. 18, 2010 at 3:54 pm
That was super awesome! i wish i could write songs like that!
 
b_swain replied...
Mar. 18, 2010 at 8:13 pm
anyone can write songs. All words are just songs without the corny elevator ambiance.
 
montana said...
Dec. 22, 2009 at 8:37 pm
Wow. I really like 2 sing so I look at all of these songs an sing 'em and wow. dO u think u could comment on my work?
 
b_swain replied...
Mar. 18, 2010 at 8:12 pm
okay. I'll get to that soon. I don't like to sing although I apparently can.
 
Steff S. said...
Sept. 18, 2009 at 8:52 pm
OMG.
I loved it.
I would love to write music to that and sing it
<3333!
 
Bumble_Bee replied...
Sept. 19, 2009 at 12:12 pm
Thank you. I am currently working on an accompanyment on a program called Jam Studio while i'm learning to play guitar. Once I do so I'm going to attempt to sing it and post on You Tube. Your feedback is verry appreciated.
 
Steff S. replied...
Sept. 19, 2009 at 9:53 pm
Thats awesome.
Let me know when you do :)
And I am aware of jamstudio.
<33
 
Humming_Bird replied...
Sept. 20, 2009 at 10:51 am
Thank you I will.
 
Sammi L. said...
Sept. 18, 2009 at 12:19 pm
I really liked this. Very funny and good. Creative.
 
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