Love Hate

September 1, 2009
[1st Verse
are you having fun
living this lie
hes not your
leave him be
stop saying 'he'll come back to me"

She wnet boy crazy
Pickin' petals offa' daisies
love me, love me not
why don't you just figure out
he's just something you
ain't got

[2nd verse]

Middle school girl
highschool crush
can't do nothin' but make a big (fuss)
all he does is act tough
she don't care
(she thinks he looks buff)


didn't like it when he got another girl
'cause she thought she was his world
so she got mad one day & deciden
"baby i'm gonna' huff & puff & steal your heart away
I'm gonna huff & puff & blow the b**** away


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Your_Apathetic_BasketcaseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 28, 2016 at 6:48 pm
I think this was a good song, but you spelled some things wrong on here. I think if you didn't spell these things wrong, it would be even better. Just simple mechanical errors. Overall really good it had a nice flow, and I can put a beat to it, which is always good in songs. Good job! :)
JeffMusic said...
Apr. 7, 2016 at 10:11 am
Great Song
LazyDaisyTheWriter said...
Sept. 3, 2011 at 8:25 pm
love it! is there music written for it?
6shady69 said...
Feb. 17, 2011 at 11:22 am
omg i love this song i wish i knew the rhythm so i could sing it. and what rocks it seems that it comes from the heart.
ashley1 said...
Sept. 16, 2010 at 7:39 am
I could deffinitly tell that this poem came from the heart. It was fantastic!
Cajsim said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 3:27 pm

Wow very strong... Definently from the heart...

Please check out my songs! I love feedback...

Brittaner replied...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 9:14 pm
Thanks. This is just a remake of the first song I ever wrote back when I was 12. I just made it better. I'll try to check out some of your songs soon and give you some feedback.
lexi said...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 8:05 pm
ok i have ta say that was awsome you can tell it is true and something that is worth listening to its great
b_swain replied...
Apr. 17, 2010 at 1:02 pm
Thanks All my songs are writtin by others or my own issues and I try to make them relay our feelings at that time.
Sincerely_Sammie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 3:28 pm
I loved it!
b_swain replied...
Apr. 17, 2010 at 1:01 pm
Spanks you very much!
superswim_19 said...
Mar. 18, 2010 at 3:54 pm
That was super awesome! i wish i could write songs like that!
b_swain replied...
Mar. 18, 2010 at 8:13 pm
anyone can write songs. All words are just songs without the corny elevator ambiance.
montana said...
Dec. 22, 2009 at 8:37 pm
Wow. I really like 2 sing so I look at all of these songs an sing 'em and wow. dO u think u could comment on my work?
b_swain replied...
Mar. 18, 2010 at 8:12 pm
okay. I'll get to that soon. I don't like to sing although I apparently can.
Steff S. said...
Sept. 18, 2009 at 8:52 pm
I loved it.
I would love to write music to that and sing it
Bumble_Bee replied...
Sept. 19, 2009 at 12:12 pm
Thank you. I am currently working on an accompanyment on a program called Jam Studio while i'm learning to play guitar. Once I do so I'm going to attempt to sing it and post on You Tube. Your feedback is verry appreciated.
Steff S. replied...
Sept. 19, 2009 at 9:53 pm
Thats awesome.
Let me know when you do :)
And I am aware of jamstudio.
Humming_Bird replied...
Sept. 20, 2009 at 10:51 am
Thank you I will.
Sammi L. said...
Sept. 18, 2009 at 12:19 pm
I really liked this. Very funny and good. Creative.
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