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Six moths at a bowlingalley bar; You got up to go to the car;
Something happened that made everybody sad; But mostly my dad;
You died but your not dead in my heart you see; Because you are One Half of Me;
I may get sad; And I might get mad;
They took you away from me; But I know how it has to be;
Because it is Gods deed; I know how that deed works; And it most surely hurts;
I was too young for u to die; And sometimes I do cry
You are my first and only mom you see; You are One Half of Me;
I don’t know what went wrong; You are my only perfect mom;
Theres a line between us it acts like a beam; but I know you’ll visit me in my dreams;
Your family is waiting to see you; In heaven it is true;
I can’t wait to see you mom; And until I do; I will always stay true;





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Black_Pool said...
Dec. 29, 2016 at 10:34 am
So good :)
 
barrelracer29 said...
Sept. 7, 2016 at 1:23 am
That was so good! I'm sorry for your loss, its always hard losing someone dearest to you.
 
barrelracer29 said...
Sept. 7, 2016 at 1:23 am
That was so good! I'm sorry for your loss, its always hard losing someone dearest to you.
 
desi_0205 said...
Aug. 14, 2016 at 10:30 pm
This was awesome sorry for your loss please keep up your great work!
 
AllSoPlayfulWhenYouDemonizeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 2, 2015 at 12:28 pm
This is so beautiful and sad. I'm so sorry for your loss, honey.
 
AnginiqueAndrews said...
Sept. 26, 2014 at 10:48 am
This Poem is very inspirational . Good work on it!
 
mygrls5 said...
Oct. 6, 2009 at 8:47 pm
danyalle..this poem is sooo true..and i love you and your sis soo much...my license plate says mygrls 5...for a reason...lovbe ya
 
nana gogo said...
Oct. 3, 2009 at 11:43 pm
yalle you are the neatest girl i know-im so proud of u-xoxo
 
littlemac47 said...
Oct. 3, 2009 at 11:10 am
good job danyalle, your mom would be sooo proud of you... i miss her everday.. Love you..
 
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