Her Mind

August 28, 2009
By xeskimoKISSESxx BRONZE, Nashua, New Hampshire
xeskimoKISSESxx BRONZE, Nashua, New Hampshire
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She is lost Behind
The walls inside her Mind
And she is waiting Blind
For the rescue that's Not There

She's pawned her Wishing Well
Because she's locked inside her Cell
And you know that silly Well
Never really worked

She want to Break Free from the confines of her Mind
She wants to Hold Herself, and be able to Cry
She wants to Break this Coma, and take a Breath of Air
She wants to Live her own Life without her Despair

The author's comments:
It's original intention was to be sung. it's got piano to it and everything.
Well, piano to some of it.
Thought taht might help the oddness in the piece.

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Jdaniel BRONZE said...
on May. 8 2013 at 5:48 pm
Jdaniel BRONZE, Waterford, Virginia
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this was a great song when put to the right guitar riff i was wondering if i could use it sometime when playing a gig plz respond dont want to copy thanx

on Nov. 3 2010 at 5:14 pm
CocoStar BRONZE, Calgary, Other
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This is amazing! The capitals in odd places make it a little hard to read, but you get the rhythm of the song early on. I can understand how she feels. But there are times when you have to stay strong, times when you can't just cry. overall? Amazing! 

Milo! said...
on Apr. 8 2010 at 11:17 pm
This is really good. It’s easy to relate to, and interesting to read. Keep writing, because this is really good. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.




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