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CHORUS

bring me an angel from the heavens above
bring me an angel the angel of love
send me cupid from hignh in the sky
hurry before i wither and die
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im waiting for my angel to arrive
without her i can barely survive
whos that ringging my doorbell
its probally satan gonna take me to hell

(chorus)

i have a broken heart
you mightve noticed im falling apart
with my angel i may be stabel
now will you send me my angel

(chorus)

with my ange now insyead of horns there lays a halo
now will you send me my angel



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YandahLIBgirll said...
Mar. 1, 2012 at 5:03 pm:
I really like this ...GREAT WORK!
 
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Kimberly_W said...
Sept. 29, 2011 at 11:38 am:

very good it has a religous tune and a possitive attitude....add a few beats and post it as a song with a video home made and i think it could be a hit(:

~kim

 
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undone said...
Jun. 11, 2011 at 3:13 pm:
great song!! :)
 
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SergSG94 said...
Apr. 28, 2011 at 8:34 pm:
I gotta say this is really good, keep writing. And if you have time, check some of my work out, i would really like to see what you think
 
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Mudder_Hacky said...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 3:41 pm:

hey do u mind if my or my friend's band uses this song? i really love it's strict four-line versage and simplicity, yet it's still full of strength. and dude? i feel ya, man. i feel ya.

u mind if i take it?

i don't really know how to credit you, exactly.. except with a screen name. but i definitely will make sure to not take credit for it.

 
uncaring-unknowing-unthinking replied...
Apr. 18, 2011 at 9:01 pm :
hey you wanna use it go ahead but yeah credit me please and thank you
 
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Saved_Soul said...
Mar. 16, 2011 at 9:11 am:
I love this! (: Keep written and post them please!! I want to read some more of them! :P 
 
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BriannaM. said...
Mar. 15, 2011 at 10:10 am:
very good!
 
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luvsoccer3000 said...
Feb. 21, 2011 at 2:00 pm:
love it! its really deep which is something i love in a song!
 
BchGrlSurf replied...
Mar. 15, 2011 at 11:16 am :
i feel the same way
 
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Jumpa said...
Oct. 12, 2010 at 8:58 pm:
Hey for my music class we have to sing a song of our choosing.. Do you mind if I use yours? I will add in that you created it and all
 
uncaring-unknowing-unthinking replied...
Mar. 9, 2011 at 9:12 pm :
sure go ahead
 
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klepto said...
Oct. 12, 2010 at 8:20 pm:
i love it!!!!
 
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MusicalImpressions said...
Jul. 7, 2010 at 7:25 am:
i like this song. thank you for writing such a good song.
 
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humanity_vs._reason said...
Mar. 28, 2010 at 6:32 pm:
Besides the obvious typos, I thought you did well on this piece. Perhaps this was influenced by a real-life scenario of yours?
 
uncaring-unknowing-unthinking replied...
Mar. 30, 2010 at 8:15 pm :
yes it was i wrote this when i was eight because my grandpa died and all i wantef was for him to come and talk to me from heaven
 
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holdyourdreams said...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 6:59 pm:
this was really good, I love the first paragraph. is amazing
 
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Acullen13 said...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 8:20 pm:
it's...um...interesting....
 
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Lover*that*HatesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 12, 2010 at 7:44 am:
i liked the begins of this song alot. the first two paragraphs could really start something great.
 
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vampluv11 said...
Dec. 3, 2009 at 10:47 am:
wonderful song... seems like something Nickelback would song (not that im stereotyping it!)
 
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