Bleed [A Song]

July 7, 2009
Just Let Go.

Did you see me?
Did you see me cry?
Will you watch me?
Will you watch me die?


Did you love me?
Or was it a lie?
Did you need me?
Or was I just a good time?

Well Now.
We’ll find out.
I stand here.
Split Open.
Tears Streaming.
Blood Flowing.


As I,
Will you just watch
Will you walk
Or will you stop the
Darlin’ will you


Crimson red.
Color of roses.
Color of death.

Hold me or let me go?
No more games,
Ive got to

Come on Come on.
You gonna stop the flow?
Come on Come on.
Let me know.
Don’t have much time.
Tell me please,
Before I die.

Wont you hold me close?

As I
I cant
As I
As I,

Don’t Leave Me In The Dark…

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rebeldiamond1313kd said...
Nov. 25, 2009 at 8:33 pm
I don;t have much else to say besides what everyone else already said, but it sounds very alternatiove/emo and like the kind of song I would put on repeat in my room at night.
Like many other people, I really wish I could hear it sung. Even if you don;t sing and record it, you should try to get someone else to record it for you who sings screamo. I would totally buy it!
But anyways I felt it. It was very good. I love it!
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse replied...
Sept. 15, 2010 at 11:19 pm
You should post a chord progression up too.  That would be awesome, then all of us guitarists out there could play this song!
XXXemoprincessXXX said...
Nov. 17, 2009 at 10:49 am
Yawb...sounds like my life story... I love it... </3
rocker_grl96** said...
Nov. 15, 2009 at 1:44 pm
awesome. sounds like its got a rockin' beat and... a lot of screamin. keep writin.
emjay1216 said...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 3:07 pm
that was bomin' i loved it!!
i write songs too
Schubster said...
Sept. 27, 2009 at 7:17 pm
GREAT SONG!!! I wish I could hear it sung, too.....and I wish I could write songs at all. haha, keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
check out my work?
emo.panda101 said...
Sept. 19, 2009 at 7:02 pm
i could feel ur pain like it was my own i started crying cause i want to know if he really even loved me but wow this is great
Tears2Roses said...
Sept. 15, 2009 at 5:33 pm
Wow that was intense! GO YOU! Wish i could hear it sung.
GLee said...
Sept. 13, 2009 at 12:52 pm
nice. i like it
Angel*music*lover This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 13, 2009 at 11:13 am
This is beautifully written. I can feel your words, and that is a good thing when you write a song. Bravo!
Leighton B. said...
Sept. 13, 2009 at 2:07 am
I really liked these lyrics! It appears very alt. rock to me! I really like it! I could like totally feel your pain!
Fangz said...
Sept. 11, 2009 at 7:46 am
Pretty decent. Sounds like a song for the electric harmonica.
Taryn J. said...
Sept. 10, 2009 at 4:48 pm
I absolutely love it. I wish I could write songs, but unfortunately, I can't. :P I wish I had your talent. :)
antionette12345 said...
Sept. 10, 2009 at 2:22 pm
i really like this i just wanted to know could you write me a song and sent it to jalen123_2009@YMAIL.COM.
Kayla J. said...
Sept. 8, 2009 at 4:57 am
wow, i wish i could write like this.
it is really good :)
sadie912 said...
Sept. 4, 2009 at 9:06 pm
luv this!sounds like something i would listen 2. can u sing tho??jw
Kassy G. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 8, 2009 at 12:10 am
according to my friends, my music teacher, and the one soloist competition I have been in I have a decent voice. I cant honestly tell you either way whether im good or not, im basically my greatest critic...Im a bit rough on this song because its mostly kind of screamo......and thats something i have to work on...but thanks for the comment glad u liked it and glad you think itd be something you would listen to =]
dreamer_believer said...
Sept. 4, 2009 at 2:22 pm
i'm kinda disappointed other people got to this piece before me...because they have already said everything there is to say about this piece :) it is truly amazing, awesome, excellent, deep, heartfelt...and sooo much more <3 it is just so great, so sad and sooo touching. sorry my comment is so long, i just want you to know how awesome of a writer you seem to be!!
Jani B. said...
Sept. 4, 2009 at 8:32 am
i cant say more then what the other people said, but this piece is extraordinary, every word drips with emotion, its my biggest aspiration 2 be this good!
ACooke said...
Sept. 3, 2009 at 7:09 am
ah-mazing!!!! there was so much emotion behind the words and the capitol letters did a good job showing how the words meant more. good job, please consider reading my work
Lonleydandy said...
Jul. 15, 2009 at 2:34 pm
WOW....WOW....WOW....WOW. It was really good, it has so much emotion behind it. WOW....WOW....WOW....WOW!!!!!!!
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