Bleed [A Song]

July 7, 2009
By KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments

Just Let Go.

Did you see me?
Did you see me cry?
Will you watch me?
Will you watch me die?

LET GO.

Did you love me?
Or was it a lie?
Did you need me?
Or was I just a good time?

Well Now.
We’ll find out.
I stand here.
Split Open.
Tears Streaming.
Blood Flowing.



BLEED.
BLEED.
JUST BLEED.
ILL BLEED.
COME ON COME ON,
DO YOU LOVE ME?

As I,
BLEED.
Will you just watch
ME?
Will you walk
AWAY.
Or will you stop the
FLOW?
Darlin’ will you
STAY?

AS I BLEED.




Blood.
Crimson red.
Color of roses.
Color of death.

Hold me or let me go?
No more games,
Ive got to
KNOW.

Come on Come on.
You gonna stop the flow?
Come on Come on.
Let me know.
Don’t have much time.
Tell me please,
Before I die.

Wont you hold me close?

As I
BLEED.
I cant
BREATHE.
As I
BLEED.
So,
PLEASE.
As I,
BLEED.

Don’t Leave Me In The Dark…
LET GO.


The author's comments:
Once Again, this is a song...so it may be written to indicate how some parts wound be sung...such as the word in all caps , they would be screamed rather than sang.

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on Jan. 10 2010 at 4:10 pm
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
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Thank You So Much!

on Jan. 10 2010 at 4:09 pm
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments
Why Thank You!!!

on Jan. 9 2010 at 7:28 pm
LordOfPoetry BRONZE, Louisville, Kentucky
1 article 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"And He Breathed Life Into What Was Nothing...."

Erm.. I agree with jake. I dont comprehend this poem ever becoming an actual song. Their are way to many songs that are crying about bleeding and stuff. Yea i cried, i got my tissues out, but not because the song was good, but because of how much it made me die inside because of how many people voted for this.

Curator BRONZE said...
on Jan. 9 2010 at 7:18 pm
Curator BRONZE, Fairdale, Kentucky
4 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"I believe in everything until it's disproved. So I believe in fairies, the myths, dragons. It all exists, even if it's in your mind. Who's to say that dreams and nightmares aren't as real as the here and now? "

wow....this simply is the worst song i've read to date, someone please stop the bleeding from my eyes for i can't take it anymore.

on Dec. 2 2009 at 4:48 pm
LeilaniLives PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
42 articles 11 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
"They say 'Life's two steps forward and one step back' - But what if I tripped and fell down the whole flight of stairs?"

Simple. Unnecessary for large words and deep metaphores, which is strange that I still like it. Sometimes the simplest of lyrics can mean the most. I love the repetion.

on Nov. 27 2009 at 4:48 pm
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments
THANK YOU SO MUCH...Yes I do sing...and yes it would be very screamo...however i am not that great at that type of singing....=

on Nov. 25 2009 at 8:33 pm
rebeldiamond1313kd GOLD, Franklin, Tennessee
18 articles 0 photos 143 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you look in the mirror and don't like what you see. You can find out first hand what it's like to be me!" -"The End." -My Chemical Romance

I don;t have much else to say besides what everyone else already said, but it sounds very alternatiove/emo and like the kind of song I would put on repeat in my room at night.

Like many other people, I really wish I could hear it sung. Even if you don;t sing and record it, you should try to get someone else to record it for you who sings screamo. I would totally buy it!

But anyways I felt it. It was very good. I love it!

on Nov. 17 2009 at 10:49 am
Yawb...sounds like my life story... I love it... </3

on Nov. 15 2009 at 1:44 pm
awesome. sounds like its got a rockin' beat and... a lot of screamin. keep writin.

on Nov. 5 2009 at 3:07 pm
emjay1216 SILVER, Eugene, Oregon
6 articles 3 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
Often times, the test of courage is not to die, but to live.
~ Vittorio Alfieri

that was bomin' i loved it!!

i write songs too

Schubster said...
on Sep. 27 2009 at 7:17 pm
GREAT SONG!!! I wish I could hear it sung, too.....and I wish I could write songs at all. haha, keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

check out my work?

on Sep. 19 2009 at 7:02 pm
emo.panda101 BRONZE, Fitchburg, Massachusetts
4 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
iam the greatest dork!!

i could feel ur pain like it was my own i started crying cause i want to know if he really even loved me but wow this is great

on Sep. 15 2009 at 5:33 pm
RadioShower PLATINUM, Rio Rancho, New Mexico
23 articles 5 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
Emo is imaginary - Gerard Way
Normalness leads to sadness -Phil Lester (AmazingPhil)

Wow that was intense! GO YOU! Wish i could hear it sung.

GLee said...
on Sep. 13 2009 at 12:52 pm
nice. i like it

on Sep. 13 2009 at 11:13 am
AngelForeverBleedingLove DIAMOND, Frederic, Wisconsin
66 articles 3 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
You say you don't remember,
But I will never forget

This is beautifully written. I can feel your words, and that is a good thing when you write a song. Bravo!

on Sep. 13 2009 at 2:07 am
LaLaLexy BRONZE, Henderson, Nevada
1 article 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Never give up on someone you can't go a day without thinking of.

I really liked these lyrics! It appears very alt. rock to me! I really like it! I could like totally feel your pain!

Fangz PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 11 2009 at 7:46 am
Fangz PLATINUM, Ware, Massachusetts
37 articles 15 photos 108 comments

Favorite Quote:
In necessariis unitas, in dubiis libertas, in omnibus caritas.

Pretty decent. Sounds like a song for the electric harmonica.

Pinky BRONZE said...
on Sep. 10 2009 at 4:48 pm
Pinky BRONZE, Hopkinsville, Kentucky
1 article 0 photos 3 comments
I absolutely love it. I wish I could write songs, but unfortunately, I can't. :P I wish I had your talent. :)

on Sep. 10 2009 at 2:22 pm
antionette12345 BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
3 articles 0 photos 1 comment
i really like this i just wanted to know could you write me a song and sent it to jalen123_2009@YMAIL.COM.

on Sep. 8 2009 at 4:57 am
kaylababy07 BRONZE, Chapin, Illinois
1 article 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"love is needing someone.
love is putting up with someone's
bad qualities because they somehow
complete you." -sarah dessen.

wow, i wish i could write like this.

it is really good :)




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