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Bleed [A Song]

Just Let Go.

Did you see me?
Did you see me cry?
Will you watch me?
Will you watch me die?

LET GO.

Did you love me?
Or was it a lie?
Did you need me?
Or was I just a good time?

Well Now.
We’ll find out.
I stand here.
Split Open.
Tears Streaming.
Blood Flowing.



BLEED.
BLEED.
JUST BLEED.
ILL BLEED.
COME ON COME ON,
DO YOU LOVE ME?

As I,
BLEED.
Will you just watch
ME?
Will you walk
AWAY.
Or will you stop the
FLOW?
Darlin’ will you
STAY?

AS I BLEED.




Blood.
Crimson red.
Color of roses.
Color of death.

Hold me or let me go?
No more games,
Ive got to
KNOW.

Come on Come on.
You gonna stop the flow?
Come on Come on.
Let me know.
Don’t have much time.
Tell me please,
Before I die.

Wont you hold me close?

As I
BLEED.
I cant
BREATHE.
As I
BLEED.
So,
PLEASE.
As I,
BLEED.

Don’t Leave Me In The Dark…
LET GO.



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yorf said...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 3:28 pm:
actually. don't BLEEEEEEED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yourself.
 
KassyElizabeth This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 10:22 am :
Was there a point to any of that?
 
heartbroken101 replied...
Dec. 8, 2010 at 11:05 am :
there dont got to be a point sumone can write a song if tjey dont have a point it is kalled EXPRESSING YOURSELF!!!!!!!!
 
KassyElizabeth This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 10, 2010 at 3:25 pm :
I understand that, as it is MY song. I was just wondering what the point to all these comments sating BLEEEDDDD were. I mean I don't care that they don't like it...I would just hope for more constructive critisism.
 
Tsume replied...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 2:50 pm :
I THINK KASSY ELIZABETH IS RIGHT  HEARTBROKEN 101 THERE HAS TO BE A POINT PEOPLE JUST CANT EXPRESS THEIRSELVES WITH OUT HAVING A POINT DUH BESIDES ITS HER SONG !!!!!!!!!!!!!! 
 
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yorf said...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 3:22 pm:
BLEEEEEDDDDD!!!!!!!! yourself
 
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yorf said...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 3:10 pm:
BLEEEEEED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Tsume replied...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 2:54 pm :
WHY ARE YOU SAYING BLEEEEEEED IT SOUNDS TO ME YOU GUYS ARE CRITISIZING HER POEM CUT IT OUT I DONT THINK YOU WOULD LIKE IT  IF SOME1 SAID THAT ABOUT YOU WOULD YOU I DONT THINK SO!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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Yalith said...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 8:39 am:
i love this song. i was wondering if i could print it out and give it a tune.
 
KassyElizabeth This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 10:22 am :
It does already have a tune...
 
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emo_nerd951 said...
Apr. 10, 2010 at 10:46 pm:
This is really good!!! Like no joke. I am like dead serious. Keep up the good work!!!
 
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curlikap18 said...
Mar. 28, 2010 at 11:01 am:
really love it! I want to hear it. so when its on youtube....
 
KassyElizabeth This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 10:25 am :
probably never. sorry.lol
 
curlikap18 replied...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 3:36 pm :
oh. well thats okay too! Are you like a musician, like do you play anything?
 
KassyElizabeth This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 8:54 pm :
No, I just sing. lol.
 
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Alexandria6 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 27, 2010 at 9:43 am:
This is the best song i've ever read on here. I absolutely love it! And the best part is being able to relate to it.
 
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VampChick49 said...
Mar. 22, 2010 at 1:13 pm:
OMG thiz wuz one of the most emoest lovelyest things i have ever read i am so verry inspired i luv it
 
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TNT25 said...
Feb. 28, 2010 at 11:47 am:
Very well written. The emotion is well displayed and dang its just a good song.
 
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laaeira said...
Feb. 26, 2010 at 7:34 pm:
I felt the song so well it was wonderful good job :)
 
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Meli0214 said...
Feb. 6, 2010 at 11:09 pm:
Hey this was really good! It kinda reminded me (just a bit) of the song Watch Me Bleed by Scary Kids Scaring Kids and Give Me A Sign by Breaking Benjamin. Good Job! :D Youve got talent!
 
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