Bleed [A Song]

July 7, 2009
By KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments

Just Let Go.

Did you see me?
Did you see me cry?
Will you watch me?
Will you watch me die?

LET GO.

Did you love me?
Or was it a lie?
Did you need me?
Or was I just a good time?

Well Now.
We’ll find out.
I stand here.
Split Open.
Tears Streaming.
Blood Flowing.



BLEED.
BLEED.
JUST BLEED.
ILL BLEED.
COME ON COME ON,
DO YOU LOVE ME?

As I,
BLEED.
Will you just watch
ME?
Will you walk
AWAY.
Or will you stop the
FLOW?
Darlin’ will you
STAY?

AS I BLEED.




Blood.
Crimson red.
Color of roses.
Color of death.

Hold me or let me go?
No more games,
Ive got to
KNOW.

Come on Come on.
You gonna stop the flow?
Come on Come on.
Let me know.
Don’t have much time.
Tell me please,
Before I die.

Wont you hold me close?

As I
BLEED.
I cant
BREATHE.
As I
BLEED.
So,
PLEASE.
As I,
BLEED.

Don’t Leave Me In The Dark…
LET GO.


The author's comments:
Once Again, this is a song...so it may be written to indicate how some parts wound be sung...such as the word in all caps , they would be screamed rather than sang.

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nightgirl13 said...
on Nov. 19 2010 at 4:04 pm
nightgirl13, Beechgrove, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
shoot for the moon if you miss stay in the stars

that was a great song my kind of song

on Nov. 19 2010 at 12:00 pm
stephie95 PLATINUM, Tripoli, Other
25 articles 1 photo 65 comments
amazing song!!! really great!!!

on Nov. 19 2010 at 11:09 am
DragonMaster66.6 BRONZE, Washougal, Washington
1 article 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Crush your enemies, see them driven before you, and hear the lamentations of their women" -Conan the Barbarian-

Coldplay? Really?

This song is more like a Hawthorne Heights tune


on Nov. 19 2010 at 11:08 am
DragonMaster66.6 BRONZE, Washougal, Washington
1 article 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Crush your enemies, see them driven before you, and hear the lamentations of their women" -Conan the Barbarian-

This song actually depressed me. I'm sorry you got hurt, if you did in fact get hurt. If you didn't get hurt or anything then you shouldn't be writing about something like this. But thats just my own opinion

lajane22 said...
on Oct. 6 2010 at 11:49 am
omg this is sooo good. id love to sing this!!! it would sound amazing if it was sung

on Oct. 2 2010 at 9:11 pm
LaughingGirl GOLD, Ocala, Florida
13 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
Play the music not the instrument. -Author Unknown

This is REALLY good. I want this song playing on the radio right now cause its awesome. I can see Coldplay singin it...sorry big fan, big fan...lol

on Sep. 15 2010 at 11:22 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

You totally need to write out the chord progression to this

on Sep. 15 2010 at 11:19 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

You should post a chord progression up too.  That would be awesome, then all of us guitarists out there could play this song!

on Sep. 14 2010 at 12:40 pm
cutebunny_10 BRONZE, Marrero, Louisiana
4 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everything Happens For A Reason! :)

I AGREE ! :)

on Jul. 7 2010 at 7:22 am
LoveSickenedRebel GOLD, Lubbock, Texas
12 articles 0 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Why does everyone think I need a man? Look if you find a guy who is decent, good with kids and has respect for women, call me." "It is better to have loved, than to have never loved at all."

dude that should be on the radio playing right now!!! it reminded me of how one stupid guy can cut u up so much. thanks for writing this song. i really love it.

on Jun. 16 2010 at 2:13 pm
MyFairyTaleEnding SILVER, Villa Ridge, Missouri
7 articles 0 photos 86 comments
This is absolutly amazing...it actually triggered old feelings I have felt. I wish I could write songs that well! Great job!:)

on Jun. 15 2010 at 5:56 pm
BeautifullyBroken18 BRONZE, Del Rio, Texas
4 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Does he watch ur favorite movies?Does he hold u when u cry?Does he let u tell him all ur favorite parts, tho u've seen it a million times?Does he sing 2 all ur music while u dance to purple rain?Does he do all these things like we used 2?"

this is one of the deepest saddest songs i've read all day on here. I like it though. I can relate. And the lyrics are ... well i've never seen a better choice of words to be strung together before in my life. Beautiful.

LoveKills GOLD said...
on Jun. 10 2010 at 4:49 pm
LoveKills GOLD, Niantic, Connecticut
14 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
And people say we wear tight jeans and dye our hair. That doesnt mean we can't scream or make loud noise.

im at a lost for words when i read this. its just a wow song. in a great way

on May. 5 2010 at 8:23 am
FateshiddenWriter GOLD, Williamsburg, Virginia
16 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
if i were the rain could i ever merge with someones heart like the way rain merges with the sky and earth- BLEAH QUOTE

i love it!!

i can relate to it

 

=]


on Apr. 19 2010 at 9:04 pm
darkdestro27 PLATINUM, West Jefferson, Ohio
21 articles 0 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
hey whats up how are you ........... squirrel

this is amazing never thought i would say this but i feel jelouse of your talent

on Apr. 15 2010 at 8:54 pm
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments
No, I just sing. lol.

Meli138 said...
on Apr. 15 2010 at 7:40 pm
Meli138, GP, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Like a bird with broken wings its not how high he flies but the song he sings"
"Everybody live like its the last day you will ever see tell me tell me do you feel the pressure now?"

Lol glad to hear that! Its an awesome song! :)

on Apr. 15 2010 at 3:36 pm
curlikap18 BRONZE, Newark, Delaware
2 articles 0 photos 14 comments
oh. well thats okay too! Are you like a musician, like do you play anything?

on Apr. 15 2010 at 10:28 am
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments
Thank You. It definitely helps me not worry about those other comments. lol

on Apr. 15 2010 at 10:27 am
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments
I would just like to say, because of your comment, Watch Me Bleed by Scary Kids Scaring Kids is now one of my favorite songs. However it is alot slower than this one, and I must admit much more beautiful.




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