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Bleed [A Song]

Just Let Go.

Did you see me?
Did you see me cry?
Will you watch me?
Will you watch me die?

LET GO.

Did you love me?
Or was it a lie?
Did you need me?
Or was I just a good time?

Well Now.
We’ll find out.
I stand here.
Split Open.
Tears Streaming.
Blood Flowing.



BLEED.
BLEED.
JUST BLEED.
ILL BLEED.
COME ON COME ON,
DO YOU LOVE ME?

As I,
BLEED.
Will you just watch
ME?
Will you walk
AWAY.
Or will you stop the
FLOW?
Darlin’ will you
STAY?

AS I BLEED.




Blood.
Crimson red.
Color of roses.
Color of death.

Hold me or let me go?
No more games,
Ive got to
KNOW.

Come on Come on.
You gonna stop the flow?
Come on Come on.
Let me know.
Don’t have much time.
Tell me please,
Before I die.

Wont you hold me close?

As I
BLEED.
I cant
BREATHE.
As I
BLEED.
So,
PLEASE.
As I,
BLEED.

Don’t Leave Me In The Dark…
LET GO.



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life-and-music99 said...
May 9, 2011 at 5:51 pm:
I reeaallyyy liked it. I found it a bit cheesy but other than that it was awesome! keep up the good work and never let your dreams fall! :)
 
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angelsteals said...
Apr. 22, 2011 at 3:51 pm:

i love it. was it suposed to have a rock tempo? because thats how i hear it in my head and its awesome!!

 

 
kaykaybeck replied...
Apr. 22, 2011 at 5:46 pm :
Same here! (:
 
KurlzBasheld replied...
May 14, 2011 at 5:16 am :
Yeah, I did too. I could almost hear it, haha.
 
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BrokenThorn said...
Apr. 22, 2011 at 5:46 am:
Im normally not a fan of music about self harm but I did like your, I really loved the first part. I love how you have a simple song but that it still has alot of meaning! I hope you do continue writing.
 
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hello-im-a-koala said...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 1:29 pm:

I've gotta say it's very Coldplay and that's good because, like them, you really found an artistic way to express feelings we all have. I love it :)

 

 
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Loveyouinmyfantasy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 14, 2011 at 9:16 am:
hehe im singing this ish in my head
 
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Pivotbandet said...
Apr. 7, 2011 at 8:36 pm:
"Blood.
Crimson red.
Color of roses.
Color of death." - I love this part!
 
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rockstardream said...
Apr. 4, 2011 at 2:48 pm:
I like the beginning lyrics- they fit together perfectly!
 
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emodog15 said...
Mar. 31, 2011 at 9:19 am:
this is pritty cool, good work dude, this for some reason reminds me of last resort by papa roach and blood on my hands by the used, cool lyrics dude
 
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purplechoc said...
Mar. 15, 2011 at 6:29 pm:
<3<3<3<3
 
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ashleyn said...
Mar. 10, 2011 at 4:07 pm:
Love it!!!!!!! Seriously one of my favorites...i would love to hear the music for it ...is it on youtube or something?
 
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desiree said...
Mar. 9, 2011 at 8:02 pm:
i loved it likewow i want to put my poems but i was denied
 
justanotherteenwriter replied...
Mar. 9, 2011 at 9:17 pm :
denied like how?????
 
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Surrender said...
Feb. 28, 2011 at 9:25 am:
honestly i think this song has more of a meaning and a purpose, alot of expressed words and meaning has been justified in your amazing lyrics! AWESOME WORK!
 
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big .j. #50 said...
Feb. 9, 2011 at 9:49 am:
i like!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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MysteryKnightThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 24, 2011 at 7:17 pm:
awesome lyrics! this is my kind of music :)
 
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taLisHa_pLoeDerL said...
Jan. 24, 2011 at 1:55 pm:
hey!(: is this kinda like a SCREAMO song? lol it was great..xD when i first read it i didnt really get it but then i read the authors note and i understood it right away.. good job. really(:
 
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heartbroken101 said...
Dec. 8, 2010 at 11:02 am:
this song is really good i actually cried cuz im goin thru something just like dis...me and ma bf dat i had for a long time just broke up a week ago and i miss him like crazii i dont know wat to do wit out him in my life!!!!
 
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Bradley_F. said...
Dec. 8, 2010 at 10:25 am:
i luved this song. i wish it were real so i cud put it into my mp3
 
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