Bleed [A Song]

July 7, 2009
By KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments

Just Let Go.

Did you see me?
Did you see me cry?
Will you watch me?
Will you watch me die?

LET GO.

Did you love me?
Or was it a lie?
Did you need me?
Or was I just a good time?

Well Now.
We’ll find out.
I stand here.
Split Open.
Tears Streaming.
Blood Flowing.



BLEED.
BLEED.
JUST BLEED.
ILL BLEED.
COME ON COME ON,
DO YOU LOVE ME?

As I,
BLEED.
Will you just watch
ME?
Will you walk
AWAY.
Or will you stop the
FLOW?
Darlin’ will you
STAY?

AS I BLEED.




Blood.
Crimson red.
Color of roses.
Color of death.

Hold me or let me go?
No more games,
Ive got to
KNOW.

Come on Come on.
You gonna stop the flow?
Come on Come on.
Let me know.
Don’t have much time.
Tell me please,
Before I die.

Wont you hold me close?

As I
BLEED.
I cant
BREATHE.
As I
BLEED.
So,
PLEASE.
As I,
BLEED.

Don’t Leave Me In The Dark…
LET GO.


The author's comments:
Once Again, this is a song...so it may be written to indicate how some parts wound be sung...such as the word in all caps , they would be screamed rather than sang.

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on Nov. 28 2011 at 2:41 pm
AliceVanityHarragarra, Gallup, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't bother sleeping without one eye open wide.There's creatures in the night to haunt you..."
-Kellin Quinn

WHAT IS COLDPLAY AND HAWTHORNE I WANT TO KNW ARE THEY SOME KIND OF HEAVY METAL BAND

on Nov. 28 2011 at 2:38 pm
AliceVanityHarragarra, Gallup, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't bother sleeping without one eye open wide.There's creatures in the night to haunt you..."
-Kellin Quinn

i dont get the both of you guys coldplay and hawthorne are they like heavy metal bands or something:)

on Nov. 28 2011 at 2:31 pm
Wow these lyrics are Breath taking and to me its just sad but astonishing :)) keep writing

smurfett said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 9:22 am
smurfett, Grand Junction, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
I love pinkkk!!!!!!!!!!

thats not weird to say no not at all

smurfett said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 9:21 am
smurfett, Grand Junction, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
I love pinkkk!!!!!!!!!!

thats not weird at all

 


on Oct. 15 2011 at 12:57 pm
impossibletolove BRONZE, Maumee, Ohio
1 article 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"beauty is different in the eye of each beholder"

holy. crap. O_O i loved it!!!

on Oct. 15 2011 at 12:57 pm
musiccrazy SILVER, Colorado Springs, Colorado
8 articles 1 photo 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Live a life worth living, because God gave you this amazing gift worth giving!" by me (Harley)

A-w-e-s-o-m-e! I loved it wish it had music so i could sing it around my house with out sounding like an idit teehee.

on Sep. 1 2011 at 12:49 pm
Rap_up21 SILVER, Yuma, Arizona
8 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"DON'T TOUCH MY COOOOOKKKIE!!!!!!!!!"

Sounds kind of like the song a homosidal manic would kill his victims to but it was really cool.

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on Jun. 27 2011 at 6:13 pm
JLEIGH96 GOLD, Corydon, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Everyone is a genius, but if you judge a fish on its ability to climb it will live its entire life believing it is stupid. -Albert Einstein

Very creative i love it!

on Jun. 5 2011 at 6:19 pm
14hipkri PLATINUM, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
22 articles 10 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Is that when you get you're thinger off you're thinger?"-Eric Stopper

Wow. Really Really good!! No, Great!! I could heard it playing out in my head!!! That's better then all mine combined!!

i am me said...
on Jun. 3 2011 at 11:30 am
dude dont be so rude he was speeking his mind

i am me said...
on Jun. 3 2011 at 11:23 am
that was awesome i bleed it out linkin park

on May. 31 2011 at 12:23 pm
SceneEmo SILVER, Pocomoke, Maryland
5 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
KEEP MOVING FOWARD NO MATTER HOW MUCH YOU HATE LIFE

 That was awesome i wish i woul've wrote that .That was intense

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on May. 25 2011 at 8:19 pm
becool GOLD, Allison Park, Pennsylvania
19 articles 43 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
life isnt about finding yourself. life is about creating yourself.

Dude, That was DEEP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

on May. 21 2011 at 11:15 am
SeeAndBelieve SILVER, Stratford, Other
6 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Save me from myself
I can't relate
We're mouth to mouth
And still I suffocate
There's nothing left
Inside of me to break
Save me from myself
Save me from myself
There's nothing left inside me
There's nothing left

This song is amazing. Keep up the good work. You should become a professional songwriter :)

on May. 14 2011 at 11:46 am
WhiteClouds BRONZE, Portland, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
Today is the tomorrow we worried about yesterday

I wish you could sing it!

on May. 14 2011 at 5:16 am
KurlzBasheld PLATINUM, Abermain, Other
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Favorite Quote:
I like cheese.

Yeah, I did too. I could almost hear it, haha.

on May. 10 2011 at 7:56 pm
KatieMichelle BRONZE, Beaufort, South Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Dreams are like stars, you man never touch them...but they will always be there"
"I'm going to be the one that takes the road less traveled by.."
"Life is like a box of chocolates you man never know what you pick"

Amazing. thewords speak for themselves and shows the emotion given. i love it :) good job!

on May. 9 2011 at 5:51 pm
CallMeMrs.Batman SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
5 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It takes a great deal of courage to stand up to our enemies, but a great deal more to stand up to our friends."
-Professor Dumbledore to Harry Potter
"What doesn't kill you, makes you stronger."
-Unknown

I reeaallyyy liked it. I found it a bit cheesy but other than that it was awesome! keep up the good work and never let your dreams fall! :)

on Apr. 22 2011 at 5:46 pm
kaykaybeck PLATINUM, Petersburg, Michigan
24 articles 4 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life takes you somewhere, love helps you get there.

Same here! (:




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