Song of the Solemn Night

June 25, 2009
By Anonymous

As long as thou, the Solemn Night,
Whose silence wakes my song,
Places words in my sight,
I shall write as if I was strong.

In mental corners of deepest dark,
Words I search for currently reside.
But during the night there is a spark,
That causes word and pen to collide.

In midnight peace the words do flow,
And slowly they are raised to life.
With the sparse light but a dim glow,
I forget the world and its strife.

The sun rises for the song is written and sung.
Now my eyes are turning to rejoice at the light,
But I recall from where my song was sprung.
I find my song in you, oh Solemn Night.



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on Jun. 20 2011 at 10:26 pm
I really liked it was focused, powerful, imaginative, and beautiful... I loved it write more and perhaps a bit longer .....

nightgirl13 said...
on Nov. 19 2010 at 4:12 pm
nightgirl13, Beechgrove, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
shoot for the moon if you miss stay in the stars

it was kinda cofuseing

on Jun. 18 2010 at 4:19 pm
CalliopeAndClio GOLD, Newton, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
Live the Life you Love and Love the Life you Live

This is very good.  I think if you revised/edited it a bit more it could be amazing.  But Its really good so far.

on May. 20 2010 at 3:18 pm
ElijahN PLATINUM, Livonia, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"only after you've lost everything, that you're free to do anything."-Tyler Durdan -Fight Club-

holy.....wow. simply...amazing. very strong, powerful, and moving. so imaginative.

on Jan. 28 2010 at 6:44 am
CountryGothic GOLD, Somersworth, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"Once something has been said, it cannot be said in other words." -Aristotle

I have fallen into a trance, it's beautiful!

on Nov. 25 2009 at 9:01 am
Paul_James PLATINUM, Plainsboro, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"The only true love I ever knew
Was behind those downcast eyes
The only comfort I ever felt
Was during those long hours of loneliness
When I felt for you
I do believe
Only innocence can save the world..." -Ocean Soul

This is actually really good...it's better than the usual song lyrics I've read...there isn't much to say for actual poets who have this beauty in writing I see in this...

on Nov. 10 2009 at 9:42 pm
It was one of the best songs I've ever read.

Drayeth said...
on Sep. 5 2009 at 8:15 pm
Drayeth, Annapolis, Maryland
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Nice, really hard to make it rhyme and actually sound good. The only thing I would say is to make it a bit longer, or is that for instrumental inserts?




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