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Song of the Solemn Night

By , Alexandria, VA
As long as thou, the Solemn Night,
Whose silence wakes my song,
Places words in my sight,
I shall write as if I was strong.

In mental corners of deepest dark,
Words I search for currently reside.
But during the night there is a spark,
That causes word and pen to collide.

In midnight peace the words do flow,
And slowly they are raised to life.
With the sparse light but a dim glow,
I forget the world and its strife.

The sun rises for the song is written and sung.
Now my eyes are turning to rejoice at the light,
But I recall from where my song was sprung.
I find my song in you, oh Solemn Night.



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HarryPotterNerd11 said...
Jun. 20, 2011 at 10:26 pm
I really liked it was focused, powerful, imaginative, and beautiful... I loved it write more and perhaps a bit longer .....
 
nightgirl13 said...
Nov. 19, 2010 at 4:12 pm
it was kinda cofuseing
 
CalliopeAndClio said...
Jun. 18, 2010 at 4:19 pm
This is very good.  I think if you revised/edited it a bit more it could be amazing.  But Its really good so far.
 
ElijahNoble said...
May 20, 2010 at 3:18 pm
holy.....wow. simply...amazing. very strong, powerful, and moving. so imaginative.
 
CountryGothic said...
Jan. 28, 2010 at 6:44 am
I have fallen into a trance, it's beautiful!
 
pauldan00b said...
Nov. 25, 2009 at 9:01 am
This is actually really good...it's better than the usual song lyrics I've read...there isn't much to say for actual poets who have this beauty in writing I see in this...
 
cupidhearts#12 said...
Nov. 10, 2009 at 9:42 pm
It was one of the best songs I've ever read.
 
Zach B. said...
Sept. 5, 2009 at 8:15 pm
Nice, really hard to make it rhyme and actually sound good. The only thing I would say is to make it a bit longer, or is that for instrumental inserts?
 
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