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1st Verse- She's Gone, are the words that stopped the world in motion
They echo in my mind, as i try to keep it all together
I remeber her telling me that everything was going to be alright.
But its not becuase she's gone.
But then i remembered that
Chorus- God said to run to him for comfort.
So i ran to him for comfort
He's my hope my strength my everything
He's the song i want to hear
So i ran into his arms
2nd Verse-I have to go back
he said as he packed to leave for Iraq
No you can't Leave!
These are the words I dreaded to hear.
As i crumpled to the ground he reminded me that
Chorus- God said to run to him for comfort
So i ran ran to him for comfort.
He's my hope my strength,my everything, He's the song i want to hear so I ran to him for everything
Becuase i remembered that God said to run to him for comfort.



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Frankieee said...
today at 1:25 am:
That was seriously amazing!! The connection between running in the battlefield and running into god's arms for protection really moved me! amazing (:
 
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DarkCat said...
Jul. 2, 2011 at 11:26 pm:
This is amazing. You have a true talent. Even though this might not be a song from a band of yours or something, if you release it into the music world, it will be big. It's that powerful.
 
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karstarr13 said...
Apr. 27, 2011 at 10:51 am:
wow! This is REALLY good! nice job :)
 
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Maximum_Ride. said...
Sept. 19, 2010 at 6:59 pm:
Woah this sounds almost exactly like something i wrote when my brother left for Iraq and when i lost my other brother there...great lyrics.
 
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holyinHIM said...
Sept. 14, 2010 at 12:35 pm:
wow! this is really good!  and so true
 
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TaylorC said...
Jun. 24, 2010 at 5:09 pm:
Thanks. I bet that you will have some great music and i will look for you. Someday when i get to it i  will record this song with me singing and playing either guitar or piano and post it on youtube. you will have to check it out when i do. thanks again. keep on writing
 
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lifes_felicity said...
Jun. 23, 2010 at 12:17 pm:
this is truley a beautiful song...i write music too but i havent published any of it yet....but plz keep looking for me!  ur opinion would b awesome to hear!!  i luv this song!!
 
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def i love this do you sing? whats the style, im a country singer so i really try to comment on things that could sound good country
 
TaylorC replied...
Feb. 19, 2010 at 7:14 pm :
i enjoy singing i am not amazing but yea. and there is no specific style if you can get it to work country then go for it.
 
hate_love_theory replied...
Apr. 10, 2010 at 6:13 pm :
this is amazing i cant stop reading it im from texas but live in colorado and i mean man really this is a beautiful song is this all the lyrics of jsutr some?
 
TaylorC replied...
Apr. 11, 2010 at 6:23 pm :
this is part of the lyrics. i also have a musical intro on the piano and i am learning guitar so we will see how it will work
 
mitchinmyheart replied...
Apr. 18, 2010 at 3:25 pm :
this is going to be an amazing song! keep up the work!
 
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Bethy said...
Oct. 22, 2009 at 10:59 pm:
This is really great. It made me want to find music to sing to it with.
 
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Zoeybird96 said...
Oct. 1, 2009 at 4:53 pm:
omg i love that. you are so great with words. you should write more songs. Your friend:
Zoeybird96
 
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distant_dreamer said...
Sept. 5, 2009 at 8:41 am:
You are so talented with writing songs!!! I LOVE this song very much! I LOVE the chorus!!!! Thanks for posting! I wrote a song called "Your Mine" but it is still pending, but I'll tell you when it comes out!! Keep up the great work!
Luv,
Your Friend,
Distant_dreamer
 
TaylorC replied...
Sept. 5, 2009 at 7:19 pm :
Thanks! god is the biggest inspiration of all.
 
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