Truth is...

December 20, 2011
By loveissmiles GOLD, Lynn, Indiana
loveissmiles GOLD, Lynn, Indiana
13 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I live for the nights I can't remember with the people I will never forget." -Carassisa M-<3

"What the mind can perceive, the body can achieve." -Softball Coach Steve B-


Standing in front of you
searching you eyes
for the hint that proves
what you say isn't lies.

You say that you love me
you say that I'm the one.
But I can't help but doubt,
considering what others have done.

I love you,
I know I do,
but question is
Is your love true?

Or is it just a way
to get what you want
so you can move on
to the next hunt.

I hope your happy
I need you to be true.
Because truth is
I cant stop loving you.


The author's comments:
For "mi amor". The one who can destroy my world, and build it all in one breath. "Te amo mi amor."

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on Apr. 23 2013 at 9:20 am
loveissmiles GOLD, Lynn, Indiana
13 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I live for the nights I can't remember with the people I will never forget." -Carassisa M-<3

"What the mind can perceive, the body can achieve." -Softball Coach Steve B-

thanks! :)

Diana101 GOLD said...
on Mar. 11 2013 at 9:51 pm
Diana101 GOLD, Grove City, Ohio
13 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"God's delays are not God's denials"

This was really good ! I liked it alot :)

on Feb. 27 2013 at 10:39 am
IndigoElisabeth SILVER, Woodbury, New Jersey
5 articles 1 photo 171 comments

Favorite Quote:
John 1:1

This is really good. It's so sweet and touching.

on Apr. 16 2012 at 7:48 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

You are always very welcome loveissmiles!:) We will always be here for you!

on Apr. 13 2012 at 9:16 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Wow, I love this! Great Job! The rhyme is perfect;) Keep up the amazing work!!

on Mar. 5 2012 at 7:05 am
loveissmiles GOLD, Lynn, Indiana
13 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I live for the nights I can't remember with the people I will never forget." -Carassisa M-<3

"What the mind can perceive, the body can achieve." -Softball Coach Steve B-

thank you so much for the positive feedback!! :) Means so much to me!

 


msn9896 GOLD said...
on Mar. 4 2012 at 9:11 pm
msn9896 GOLD, Billings, Montana
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Favorite Quote:
I have my own particular sorrows, loves, delights; and you have yours. But sorrow, gladness, yearning, hope, love, belong to all of us, in all times and in all places. Music is the only means whereby we feel these emotions in their universality. ~H.A. Overstreet

Beautiful! I felt the relevance in my life shining through :) good work!

 


on Mar. 4 2012 at 8:53 pm
Behind_a_Plastic_Smile GOLD, Roseville, California
17 articles 1 photo 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you're not 1st you're last"

5/5 This was really well writen and i loved it- Great Job! 

NickyJ BRONZE said...
on Mar. 2 2012 at 10:55 pm
NickyJ BRONZE, Hyde Park, New York
1 article 0 photos 138 comments

Favorite Quote:
“In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life: it goes on.” ~Robert Frost

I don't normally go for love poems as much but I actually really like this. You kept it clean and concise, simple but meaningful.

Rated 5/5 :)


on Mar. 2 2012 at 5:17 pm
Sharkgirl SILVER, Honolulu, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
Brave men may not live forever, but cautious men do not live at all.
Author Unknown

Pretty poem nice you keep writing

on Mar. 2 2012 at 9:47 am
amahzing_grace GOLD, Prattville, Alabama
12 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
I pay no attention whatever to anybody's praise or blame. I simply follow my own feelings.
-Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart

i love this one! i can definitely relate to it (:

on Mar. 1 2012 at 6:00 pm
Helena_Noel BRONZE, Burnt Hills, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“I'd rather see a sermon than hear one any day; I'd rather one should walk with me than merely tell the way: The eye's a better pupil and more willing than the ear, fine counsel is confusing, but example's always clear.” -Edgar Guest

Oh, hey this is good! It typically bothers me that peoms change rhyme schemes for reasons other than enphasis, but for some reason it didn't even ocure to me til I went to re-read it. Don't change a thing. For this one, I like it like that. Well, if there WAS some way to change it I would fix the typos if I were you, obviously, but you knew what I meant!

on Mar. 1 2012 at 5:01 pm
vergil23 BRONZE, Cape Town, Other
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Favorite Quote:
''Reality is open to perception, thus it is undefined and ultimately imaginery''

Nice poem! i love the Rhyme scheme..keep up the good work :)

on Mar. 1 2012 at 7:39 am
loveissmiles GOLD, Lynn, Indiana
13 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I live for the nights I can't remember with the people I will never forget." -Carassisa M-<3

"What the mind can perceive, the body can achieve." -Softball Coach Steve B-

thanks for the feedback!! when (if) my poem so feaking numb gets approved i would definately love some feedback.

on Feb. 29 2012 at 10:48 pm
AngelsLullaby GOLD, Neverland, Idaho
12 articles 7 photos 95 comments

Favorite Quote:
Music is a higher revelation from wisdom and philosophy. ~Ludwig Von Beethoven

Another fantastic poem. Great job Love.

on Feb. 29 2012 at 10:47 am
AimeeRichae SILVER, Acworth, Georgia
9 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If life hands me lemons, you better believe I'll be making the best dang lemonade ever!"

this is good. other than that typo ;) Keep Writing!

on Jan. 23 2012 at 10:27 am
loveissmiles GOLD, Lynn, Indiana
13 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I live for the nights I can't remember with the people I will never forget." -Carassisa M-<3

"What the mind can perceive, the body can achieve." -Softball Coach Steve B-

wow, i feel like an idiot. in the second line it should say "searching your eyes" i am so sorry!


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