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Truth is...

Standing in front of you
searching you eyes
for the hint that proves
what you say isn't lies.

You say that you love me
you say that I'm the one.
But I can't help but doubt,
considering what others have done.

I love you,
I know I do,
but question is
Is your love true?

Or is it just a way
to get what you want
so you can move on
to the next hunt.

I hope your happy
I need you to be true.
Because truth is
I cant stop loving you.





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Diana101 said...
Mar. 11, 2013 at 9:51 pm
This was really good ! I liked it alot :)
 
loveissmiles replied...
Apr. 23, 2013 at 9:20 am
thanks! :)
 
SuNshiNe007 said...
Apr. 13, 2012 at 9:16 am
Wow, I love this! Great Job! The rhyme is perfect;) Keep up the amazing work!!
 
Artgirl1999 replied...
Feb. 27, 2013 at 10:39 am
This is really good. It's so sweet and touching.
 
msn9896 said...
Mar. 4, 2012 at 9:11 pm

Beautiful! I felt the relevance in my life shining through :) good work!

 

 
Behind_a_Plastic_Smile said...
Mar. 4, 2012 at 8:53 pm
5/5 This was really well writen and i loved it- Great Job! 
 
NickyJ said...
Mar. 2, 2012 at 10:55 pm

I don't normally go for love poems as much but I actually really like this. You kept it clean and concise, simple but meaningful.

Rated 5/5 :)

 
Sharkgirl said...
Mar. 2, 2012 at 5:17 pm
Pretty poem nice you keep writing
 
fluterocker015 said...
Mar. 2, 2012 at 9:47 am
i love this one! i can definitely relate to it (:
 
LoudDreamer said...
Mar. 1, 2012 at 6:00 pm
Oh, hey this is good! It typically bothers me that peoms change rhyme schemes for reasons other than enphasis, but for some reason it didn't even ocure to me til I went to re-read it. Don't change a thing. For this one, I like it like that. Well, if there WAS some way to change it I would fix the typos if I were you, obviously, but you knew what I meant!
 
vergil23 said...
Mar. 1, 2012 at 5:01 pm
Nice poem! i love the Rhyme scheme..keep up the good work :)
 
loveissmiles said...
Jan. 23, 2012 at 10:27 am
wow, i feel like an idiot. in the second line it should say "searching your eyes" i am so sorry!
 
AimeeRichae replied...
Feb. 29, 2012 at 10:47 am
this is good. other than that typo ;) Keep Writing!
 
Love_In_Her_Eyes replied...
Feb. 29, 2012 at 10:48 pm
Another fantastic poem. Great job Love.
 
loveissmiles replied...
Mar. 1, 2012 at 7:39 am
thanks for the feedback!! when (if) my poem so feaking numb gets approved i would definately love some feedback.
 
loveissmiles replied...
Mar. 5, 2012 at 7:05 am

thank you so much for the positive feedback!! :) Means so much to me!

 

 
SuNshiNe007 replied...
Apr. 16, 2012 at 7:48 am
You are always very welcome loveissmiles!:) We will always be here for you!
 
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