life in a bombshell

We live, we love,
we laugh, we cry,
we will all one day
grow old and die.

Some are scared,
others embrace
the challenge,
and join the race.

Times are changing
and we try to keep up,
words like whats up,
turn into just "sup?"

People are cruel,
people are mean,
making fun of others
just because they aren't lean.

Looks are not everything
but that's not how it seems
your getting dissed
if your not in the right jeans.

But one day they will wake up
and maybe they'll realize
that a life is well wasted
when it's built on lies.





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SuNshiNe007 said...
Apr. 13, 2012 at 9:15 am
Brilliant! You have a brilliant mind! An amazing writer! I can also relate to this I live in a small town. 5 stars! Hope you have a very amazing day! I love it!!:D
 
applesauceHater said...
Mar. 6, 2012 at 6:44 pm
I live in a small place too so I can easily relate. Some people have nothing better to do. Very relatable poem. And love your poem structure and word placing. It's really interesting!
 
AgentOrange789 said...
Mar. 5, 2012 at 9:18 am
Thank you. Thank you very much for writing this. Makes a perfect statement. Could you read my poem "A Poem from Planet Mars"? Thanks.
 
loveissmiles replied...
Mar. 5, 2012 at 10:46 am
read it, loved it, commented! :)
 
Behind_a_Plastic_Smile said...
Mar. 4, 2012 at 8:56 pm
Tell it sister! Testify! The first and last stanza were brillent and i really like this :) 5/5
 
Sharkgirl said...
Mar. 2, 2012 at 5:18 pm
I couldn't agree with you more great job
 
fluterocker015 said...
Mar. 2, 2012 at 9:50 am
oh my gosh! thank you! someone finally sees what i see! it's so true that popularity all depends on what clothes you wear or where you shop. that's not what popularity is. popularity is having a lot of friends and i thought i was the only one who realized this. but obviously not. love this poem (:
 
loveissmiles replied...
Mar. 5, 2012 at 7:03 am
oh my god, thank you so much for agreeing with me! :) and liking my poem!
 
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