Begin to Break

September 26, 2011
By AlyssaFama SILVER, Kunkletown, Pennsylvania
AlyssaFama SILVER, Kunkletown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Most people want to be the sun that brightens your day. I'd rather be the moon that shines down on you in your darkest hour.


In the dead of night, I awake,
I feel my heart begin to ache.
Was it a dream or is this real?
All this pain that I feel.
I look to the side where you are gone,
All the rights that were wrong.
A tear begins to slide down my cheek,
Are all other girls always this weak?
I remember your touch; your warm embrace,
How you're gone without a trace.
I gasp for air I held inside,
You'll never know how my soul had died.
In this cold, dark room, I look around,
You were gone without a sound.
You had left without a word,
But a million whispers could be heard.
I watched you leave without a glance behind,
Not a bit of sorrow would I find.
I watched slowly as the door had closed,
All the wounds that are now exposed.
I felt like I was bleeding from the inside out,
You are what I am without.
In the dead of night, I awake,
I can feel my heart begin to break.
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The author's comments:
This is a piece that I wrote when I was going through a rough loss of someone very close to me. I can imagine this is how a lot of people would feel when losing someone they loved.

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on Oct. 13 2011 at 6:00 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

You're welcome!!!! :D

on Oct. 10 2011 at 4:45 pm
AlyssaFama SILVER, Kunkletown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Most people want to be the sun that brightens your day. I'd rather be the moon that shines down on you in your darkest hour.

thank you so much!

on Oct. 10 2011 at 2:35 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
35 articles 0 photos 782 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

This was fantastic it flowed perfectly!!! :)




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