It Was Just A Dream

June 27, 2011
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It was just a dream, not real life.
But somehow you were there.
You were sweet and kind and understanding,
You had bright green eyes and dark brown hair.
I never met you once in my life,
And when I wake up there’s a giant mark on my heart.
I look around my room full of posters,
And started crying in the dark.
I know I never met you before,
But somehow I miss you so much.
I miss your love and I miss your looks,
And I definitely miss your touch.
When you cradle me in your arms,
And you whisper you love me in my ear.
I think of all these things right now,
And I start to shed a tear.
I can’t believe how much I love,
A stranger I never met.
But even after I wake up,
My heart is something that you kept.

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Resonating_Words said...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 7:02 pm

Well done. Very, very well done. It flows, the rhymes aren't forced and work together very well, and over all I could read it without any distractions of structure issues.

Much love to this, really.

FlyingJay said...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 6:48 pm

AMAZING. I love this so much. So descriptive and emotional. I could feel the love and pain. made me want to cry :')


LyricalBeauty said...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 11:54 am

This was really great! Dreaming of a lover you have yet to met; I've done it all too many times hahah. Great job(=

If you can, please check out my poems. Comments/Rates are always appreciated. Thanks!(=

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