Do You See?

October 9, 2010
Do you see, what I see?
Perfectly together, you and me.
Is it possible? Can it be?
Deep and long, like the sea.

Just you and me, together.
Maybe we should? Or just not bother?
What if? Would it be better?
Could it be longer and stronger?

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Taylorrrrr said...
Oct. 19, 2010 at 5:09 pm

This is  really good. I think this should go in the magazine. But I like it.


watercat replied...
Oct. 20, 2010 at 10:03 am
Thanks for your encouragement! :)
singingdetective said...
Oct. 19, 2010 at 7:05 am
I like the way it is as though you're daydreaming, just pondering on the thought. It's very deep in that sense. :) good job!
watercat replied...
Oct. 21, 2010 at 8:59 am
Thank you! :)
mce1606 said...
Oct. 18, 2010 at 4:57 pm
Love this poem! Good job, it shows so much emotion!!!
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