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We are somewhat friends, you and me
My friends think we are meant to be
I do not think that I would mind
If in your heart, it is me you find
But the real me you have not seen





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crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 19, 2010 at 6:07 pm
Wow i love it!!!!  if you could please comment and rate my work that would be great!! especially to anonymous!!!! thanx and ur really good!!!!
 
Shahed said...
Jul. 10, 2010 at 9:36 pm
I like it, although I didnt really feel the title relating to this, maybe try to make it a bit longer and more creative title (?)
 
sam013 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 10, 2010 at 10:01 pm
thanks. i guess the title doesn't make much sense if you don't know what its about. i considered making it longer, but I like limericks on their own, and obviously since it is a limerick it can't be longer than 5 lines :)
 
Shahed replied...
Jul. 11, 2010 at 1:10 pm
Consider making it longer is a good idea lol .. but if you want to keep it a limerick then its just great the way it is.. I myself like long poems thats why .. I write freeverse :) but good job!
 
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