The Whispering Wind

June 2, 2010
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I try to watch the wind
But it’s always hidden from me
I can only know its whereabouts
By its rustling through the trees

It sometimes swirls about me
Inviting me to play
Pledging me that if I do come
It would with me stay

It’s a companion for the lonely
An always present friend
I’d love to hear what it is saying
If I could just speak wind

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Andy49 said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 11:07 pm
Very good!  Well done indeed!  I like the very last line.  I'm surprised that it isn't the title of the poem, but I guess that would give too much away!
Randy73 replied...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 1:05 am
I agree with ya' Andy49 ol' pal!  I must add that the little picture to this poem is very nice.  It's a great touch to a great poem.  It adds a visual cue to help you picture the time don't forget to mention the picture...
Andy49 replied...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 1:06 am
alright, alright!  Just get off my back about it!  I won't forget the picture!!
Randy73 replied...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 1:06 am
yeah.....that's what I thought....
gigi01 replied...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 10:26 pm
Thank yo so much guys! But no arguing lol! 
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