Think before you act

September 14, 2009
By LadyLove0615 BRONZE, Cincinnati, Ohio
LadyLove0615 BRONZE, Cincinnati, Ohio
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You have to know more than my name to judge me.
You have to be trustworthy to love me.
You can't just look and underestimate me.
You can't just assume and decide to hate me.
You need to understand my personality to get me.
You have to see reality to want to fight me.
But if you don't take the time out you can bite me.
You aren't aloud to just up and leave me.
Not if your going to come back and need me.
I'm not invisible so learn to see me.
To see life from my eyes you'd have to be me.
Don't say we're similar because your story of life is like mine.
Don't take my words, my feelings, my cries.
think of it as an unforgivable crime.
think before you recite lies to my face.
Think about me being there when you need a place.
Think about an unconditional trust.
Think of a friendship between the two of us.



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on Apr. 26 2016 at 8:51 am
ButterflyNebula BRONZE, Chesterfield, New Jersey
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I like this poem. I like the rhyming in it and then I like how it talks about how you can't judge someone without really knowing them.

Pavva BRONZE said...
on Apr. 26 2016 at 8:03 am
Pavva BRONZE, Chesterfield , New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Veni, Vidi, Vici --Julius Caesar
(Translates to "I cam, I saw, I conquered.")

Limericks of all poems are my fav. Of all of these limericks, this has to be the best. So this is the best of all of these poems out there. :)

on Nov. 3 2013 at 12:01 am
LadyGrey SILVER, Ithaca, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live." --J.K. Rowling
"I am so clever that sometimes I don't understand a single word of what I am saying." --Oscar Wilde
"You're a f***ing potato." --Emilie Autumn

The rhyme scheme of a limerick is AABBA, with a specific meter. Get on that.

on Nov. 3 2013 at 12:00 am
LadyGrey SILVER, Ithaca, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live." --J.K. Rowling
"I am so clever that sometimes I don't understand a single word of what I am saying." --Oscar Wilde
"You're a f***ing potato." --Emilie Autumn

My impression of this poem (which was, incidentally, not a limerick) was: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

Twinny said...
on Apr. 6 2011 at 12:33 pm
Great Job.!i loved this poem it had amazing rhythm and everyone can relate to being judged&&this is exactly how those people feel.!:)

TrustMyLove said...
on Mar. 3 2011 at 5:53 pm
I love this poem I honestly can say that this is deep and if people really think the can judge without knowing their wrong

Chaniababy99 said...
on Dec. 5 2010 at 4:06 pm
omg i really love this poem....it is reallyyyy goodd 

on Oct. 4 2009 at 11:49 am
cheerchick4 SILVER, Beaumont, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
All is fair in love and war

I love this!!!!




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