Memories and walking and walking away

September 13, 2009
By jordanjanzen BRONZE, Saintjames, Minnesota
jordanjanzen BRONZE, Saintjames, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Never fear shadows, they just mean theres a light in the distance casting it.


I sit here and lie to myself saying everythings going to be okai
When the past brings sorrow and pain in every known way
Wishing you would come back never to leave, always to stay
Not knowing what to do, so i sit in the rain
Hopeing the others dont see my tears
That fall with every memeorie of you, vivid and clear
And the one thing of all, my only fear
Is that u left me in my prison of a world alone
The love that we shared gone, now on my own
I see the sunset bringing new memories so i walk away
Left walking with out anything to say
Holding in all my sorrow that builds and brings more pain
It seems pain is all that all i feel
Never to scar, always to bleed,never to heal
What happened to our plans and dreams
Faild, now sitting here broken hearted, sowing in the seems
These memories hang over my head, always around
Left alone to cry and sit alone, not making any sound
left covered in my saddness with no hope,chance or love, nothing found
Everythingy has gone wrong, instead of going up, it goes down...
Where do i go, what do i do, what happens now....??


The author's comments:
I wrote this one when i was thinking of the one i loved. and i tryed talking to her. and she logged off. i kno its stupid. but i got really sad. and it brought memeoires back up..and i wrote this poem..

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ADD106 SILVER said...
on Dec. 6 2010 at 9:19 am
ADD106 SILVER, Plaquemine, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Those who stand for nothing, fall for anything"

The mood of this poem is easily felt. It is quite solemn and easily conveys a sense of sadness. A person could really tell what kind of feeling you were trying to convey. However, your grammar could use some correcting. There were some spelling and spacing errors. Overall though, the poem was well written. 

jasso GOLD said...
on Sep. 30 2010 at 9:56 am
jasso GOLD, Damascus, Other
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Favorite Quote:
courge dose not always roar, Sometimes courge is a quiet voice at the end of the day saying : i will try again tomorrow

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on Oct. 14 2009 at 6:27 am
jordanjanzen BRONZE, Saintjames, Minnesota
4 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never fear shadows, they just mean theres a light in the distance casting it.

Thanks for the comment

on Sep. 28 2009 at 11:19 am
Farrahann SILVER, Front Royal, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"I am a dughter hideing my depression and sister makeing a good impression the girl next to you asking you to care a friend asking you to be there."

I love this so much! When i read it, it reminded me of how i have felt at times good work =)


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