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     As far as the gypsy’s eye can see

As low as the clouds that touch the trees

The blades of grass, the dying leaves

Love consumes endlessly

Fluttering of the moth’s gentle wings

The woman in the woods that will never sing

A frozen pond in the middle of a dream

Love endures as it seems

Touching all with gentle limbs

Singing a melody of compelling hymns

Curing men that drip with sins

Our journey starts where love begins



This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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MissEmilyDickinsonThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sep. 20 at 2:29 pm:
Wow. I love this. I'm so glad that this has been published. Congrats! You deserve it. I love this poem, a lot. It has a lot of depth, emotion, peace, love, and you. You put yourself into it, when you wrote your poem. It's just absolutely, amazing and beautiful and wonderful. You have such a talent and greatness in you; and I hope you know that. Thank you, thank you so much for sharing this.
 
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dreamcatcher77 said...
Mar. 6 at 11:50 am:
wooww this is SO good!  :) 
 
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francheskas said...
Feb. 12 at 10:57 pm:
Wow. It's easy to read and understand yet it's so beautifully structured. Good job!
 
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Sweetypie said...
Feb. 12 at 4:42 pm:
Yes keep writing
 
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the_real_iron_lady said...
Jan. 28 at 12:38 am:
I love it. I like to read and write sad poems so this was a nice change. It didnt stray too far from my usual but it gave me a taste of the "other side"
 
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Dizzily1997 said...
Mar. 15, 2013 at 10:44 pm:
It's completely wonderfully, amazing.  It sounded like a scene from one of my dreams.  Just Beautiful and heart felt. 
 
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KristenAndStephenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 8, 2013 at 1:34 pm:
I love this so much! It was beautifully written and you are extremely talented!!! Keep it up I loved this so much!!!
 
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samasparagus This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 25, 2012 at 7:27 pm:
this is so sweet.  Also it's extremely well written and has beautiful metaphors and parallels, i love it.
 
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hotty said...
Jan. 30, 2012 at 2:40 pm:
uh i kind of dont get this poem i mean like really you titled it loved one but i have to admitt it i am kinda jealous cuz i cant write that good you lucky
 
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girlthing said...
Jan. 21, 2012 at 6:58 am:
deserves five stars! =)
 
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Tremendous said...
Dec. 29, 2011 at 8:37 am:
Very interesting! I really enjoyed reading this. Good job! please consider checking my work out as well!
 
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AnythingButOrdinary said...
Aug. 21, 2011 at 9:53 pm:
the best ive read today
 
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natashajeanne1021 said...
Sept. 24, 2010 at 10:28 pm:
totally loved this! keep writing! =)
 
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TheCreativeChristian said...
Sept. 24, 2010 at 9:47 pm:
FANTASTIC!!!
 
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Heartless911 said...
Sept. 24, 2010 at 9:21 am:

Truely impressive i must say

I can read it all day!!!

 

 
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soccerismylife said...
May 15, 2010 at 11:38 pm:
great poem. its beautiful and has a certain grace, wonderful
 
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CountryGothic said...
Apr. 23, 2010 at 1:37 pm:
Ummmm...it is good and the rhyme and wording is lovely, however the pattern of a limerick is AABBA. Be it as it may, pretty poem.
 
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MsChels101 said...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 12:54 pm:
This is flippin amazing ( : I loved it, You are such a good limerick writer-er ( : Haha
FANTASTICCC ( :
 
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akbird said...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 4:34 pm:
ummmmm.....w-O-w!!! the amazing truth in this is great
 
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Colorful4u This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 8, 2010 at 2:13 pm:
I love this poem. It's wonderful wonderful wonderful!
 
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