Sunday mornings with
You, my dear, are a thousand
Cups of good coffee.
You, my dear, are a thousand
Cups of good coffee.
This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.
Sunday Morning
sweetchyck123i liked this poem a lot for some reason probabaly because i love coffee! i could imagine that being with this person is awesome
I HATE COFEEEE BUT THIS WAS A GOOD POEM, ITS CALLED A HAIKU RIGHT?
myworld10
yes, it's called a haiku. a haiku has 3 lines: 1st and 3rd lines have 5 syllables and the 2nd has 5 syllables.
NyrihazThis is so short (Haiku, duh!) and cute and splendid and I just love it and I really don't know why. Is just great. I like the use of the hyperbole, and how much you say by just mentioning cups of cofee.
^.^
ellllaI dont know why but I <3 this poem. It makes sence and flows! Great keep the good work up! :)
AuntBriti'm not sure why but i don't particularly like this and it bothers me how short it is but the main idea of the poem is great
The length bothers you? It's a haiku. Haikus are ONLY 17 syllables long. That's the point.
im with you on that one...i don't really like it that much either.
wow, this poem is more then just a haiku, this poem is a complete prose in 17 short syllabus :)
do you know either Kathy or Dennis Utter?
BlueInk94its really cute! simple, but effective. Love it!
PolorCityYa, I think it's simple and cute. I like haikus like this one!
decembersun14
dianaforfree said...
Apr. 18, 2010 at 3:05 pm:
Apr. 18, 2010 at 3:05 pm:
beautiful. simple, yet powerful. i appove, and i love. (=
sorry i dont like this one for me its too simple, but ehh everybodys got different preferences(haha sorry but 1000 cups of coffee would kill you) i bet the person your writing that for feels very treasured tho
I didn't literally mean a thousand cups of coffee. It's called hyperbole.
kick_bootie_ninjaactually, i believe its a metaphore... saying something IS something its not literally
btw, love the poem! could you check out some of my work?
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