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Sunday mornings with
You, my dear, are a thousand
Cups of good coffee.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.





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inspir3d This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 7, 2010 at 3:56 pm:

Cute, simple, effective. Great work!!

Everybody check out my haiku Desperate? I think ya'll would like it.

 
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FlyWithMe_899 said...
Jun. 23, 2010 at 12:39 pm:

awww thats sweet:)))

<3

 
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Andreww said...
Jun. 21, 2010 at 12:16 pm:
I love this! I don't know why, but I think it's so good.
 
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Nanner said...
Jun. 10, 2010 at 1:38 pm:
This made me smile. :D I love it!
 
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brax34 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 7, 2010 at 11:27 am:
probably the best haiku i have ever heard.  i've never been a fan of haikus, but you might have just converted me, good job!:)
 
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myworld10This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 1, 2010 at 8:37 pm:
cute haiku! so little yet so much. i should post some of my haikus. i have written a whole lot of them.
 
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Alana H. said...
Jun. 1, 2010 at 7:05 pm:
I really like this! Is says a lot in a little! And it paints a picture in my mind which is great! Write some more!!!
 
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Wellington This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 1, 2010 at 6:32 pm:
such a nice haiku; captures a moment and a thousand others in so few words. 
 
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Jane_P This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 1, 2010 at 5:38 pm:
What a lovely haiku! It expresses so much in so little.
 
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sweetchyck123 said...
Jun. 1, 2010 at 5:09 pm:
i liked this poem a lot for some reason probabaly because i love coffee! i could imagine that being with this person is awesome
 
BLAHBLAH replied...
Jun. 1, 2010 at 6:40 pm :

I HATE COFEEEE BUT THIS WAS A GOOD POEM, ITS CALLED A HAIKU RIGHT?

 

 
myworld10This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 1, 2010 at 8:35 pm :
yes, it's called  a haiku. a haiku has 3 lines: 1st and 3rd lines have 5 syllables and the 2nd has 5 syllables.
 
sweetchyck123 replied...
Jun. 1, 2010 at 10:24 pm :
i dont know how you could hate coffee
 
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Nyrihaz said...
Jun. 1, 2010 at 4:29 pm:

This is so short (Haiku, duh!) and cute and splendid and I just love it and I really don't know why. Is just great. I like the use of the hyperbole, and how much you say by just mentioning cups of cofee.

^.^

 
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elllla said...
May 15, 2010 at 10:48 pm:
I dont know why but I <3 this poem. It makes sence and flows! Great keep the good work up! :)
 
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AuntBrit said...
May 11, 2010 at 9:42 pm:
i'm not sure why but i don't particularly like this and it bothers me how short it is but the main idea of the poem is great
 
sammyso3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 11, 2010 at 9:47 pm :
The length bothers you? It's a haiku. Haikus are ONLY 17 syllables long. That's the point.
 
demetria replied...
Jun. 1, 2010 at 6:57 pm :
im with you on that one...i don't really like it that much either.
 
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DearDiaryMyTeenAngstHasABodyCount said...
May 10, 2010 at 11:07 am:
wow, this poem is more then just a haiku, this poem is a complete prose in 17 short syllabus :)
 
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Longhorn1495 said...
May 10, 2010 at 9:01 am:
do you know either Kathy or Dennis Utter?
 
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