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I finally threw
Out all the poems that I wrote
About you today

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mattuglyface said...
Nov. 21, 2011 at 9:29 am:
shlong!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
mattuglyface replied...
Nov. 21, 2011 at 9:33 am :
I LIKEY DA SHLONG
 
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BieberLover16 said...
Nov. 8, 2011 at 8:35 am:
I loved that! Great Job!! :D
 
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midnight_howl said...
Oct. 26, 2011 at 12:52 pm:
!.........That was short......!
 
sunriseusnset replied...
Oct. 29, 2011 at 11:54 am :
that's what a haiku is supposed t be..
 
Beautifulmonsta replied...
Nov. 17, 2011 at 10:31 pm :
i was just about to say the same thing lol
 
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weasel123 said...
Sept. 6, 2011 at 10:42 am:
I like this poem because almost ever one in this world has had a hardship and how they need to move on. Good poem.
 
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IamtheshyStargirl said...
Aug. 29, 2011 at 5:11 pm:
Strong, independent, emotional. You, my dear, know how to write an haiku, even though it doesn't have any nature in it ;)
 
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Milly.Hester said...
Aug. 21, 2011 at 2:19 pm:

wow...

 

 
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dark_armor1 said...
Aug. 16, 2011 at 8:50 pm:
just remove that. but overall i love it! very independent and inpowering. good job!
 
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HannahMarie17 said...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 7:29 pm:

I need to do what this author did. I completely liove and feel this piece. Keep writing!

 

 
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A.M.Wilson said...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 1:26 pm:

this is indeed a good poem

 

 
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writerfreak21231This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 16, 2011 at 10:45 am:
Great job! I just wrote two books called nightstalker and the beast. please check them out and read them, and make sure u post comments! Thanks! :D (sorry for advertizing!)
 
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NEVER_Perfect said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 12:32 pm:
I love this.. & I remember a day i did the same. Those 3 words show a new beginninq to a different part of life. Great Job :)
 
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redhairCat This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 13, 2011 at 3:16 pm:
Could you look at my haiku poems Doubt, All Alone, and Seeing Your Soul, please? Thank you!
 
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freeflow23 said...
Jun. 12, 2011 at 3:35 pm:
It's a bit too literal for me.
 
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lmd_4994 said...
May 21, 2011 at 7:28 pm:
take out the "that" and its perfect! :)
 
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Haileylol said...
May 19, 2011 at 12:44 pm:
The second line has eight syllables.
 
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SATVIK said...
May 4, 2011 at 9:08 am:
IT'S GREAT,I FEEL IT WITH MY HEART
 
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shizuka said...
Apr. 5, 2011 at 4:22 pm:
so deep! i enjoy this poem
 
Tree18 replied...
May 3, 2011 at 1:41 pm :
I love this! I usually cant get into haikus but this one I could really relate to! Great job!
 
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