Moving On This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

September 29, 2008
I finally threw
Out all the poems that I wrote
About you today

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shizuka said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 4:33 pm
and the picture really matches the poem :D really love them both
Kimberly B. replied...
Mar. 21, 2013 at 8:51 am
very good!!!! :)))
mattuglyface said...
Nov. 21, 2011 at 9:29 am
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Nov. 21, 2011 at 9:33 am
BieberLover16 said...
Nov. 8, 2011 at 8:35 am
I loved that! Great Job!! :D
midnight_howl said...
Oct. 26, 2011 at 12:52 pm
!.........That was short......!
sunriseusnset replied...
Oct. 29, 2011 at 11:54 am
that's what a haiku is supposed t be..
Beautifulmonsta replied...
Nov. 17, 2011 at 10:31 pm
i was just about to say the same thing lol
weasel123 said...
Sept. 6, 2011 at 10:42 am
I like this poem because almost ever one in this world has had a hardship and how they need to move on. Good poem.
IamtheshyStargirl said...
Aug. 29, 2011 at 5:11 pm
Strong, independent, emotional. You, my dear, know how to write an haiku, even though it doesn't have any nature in it ;)
Milly.Hester said...
Aug. 21, 2011 at 2:19 pm



dark_armor1 said...
Aug. 16, 2011 at 8:50 pm
just remove that. but overall i love it! very independent and inpowering. good job!
HannahMarie17 said...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 7:29 pm

I need to do what this author did. I completely liove and feel this piece. Keep writing!


A.M.Wilson said...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 1:26 pm

this is indeed a good poem


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Jul. 16, 2011 at 10:45 am
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NEVER_Perfect said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 12:32 pm
I love this.. & I remember a day i did the same. Those 3 words show a new beginninq to a different part of life. Great Job :)
redhairCat This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 13, 2011 at 3:16 pm
Could you look at my haiku poems Doubt, All Alone, and Seeing Your Soul, please? Thank you!
freeflow23 said...
Jun. 12, 2011 at 3:35 pm
It's a bit too literal for me.
lmd_4994 said...
May 21, 2011 at 7:28 pm
take out the "that" and its perfect! :)
Haileylol said...
May 19, 2011 at 12:44 pm
The second line has eight syllables.
SATVIK said...
May 4, 2011 at 9:08 am
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