Moving On MAG

September 29, 2008
By Monica C., Union, NJ, Union, NJ

I finally threw
Out all the poems that I wrote
About you today



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shizuka BRONZE said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 4:33 pm
shizuka BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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and the picture really matches the poem :D really love them both

shizuka BRONZE said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 4:31 pm
shizuka BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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i agree, this is one of the amazing works ever

mattuglyface said...
on Nov. 21 2011 at 9:33 am
I LIKEY DA SHLONG

mattuglyface said...
on Nov. 21 2011 at 9:29 am
shlong!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

on Nov. 17 2011 at 10:31 pm
Beautifulmonsta BRONZE, New Bedford, Massachusetts
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i was just about to say the same thing lol

on Nov. 8 2011 at 8:35 am
Countrylife4 GOLD, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
"Someday soon we're gonna catch that dream we've been chasing"
"Seven days without a horse makes one weak."
"The worst part of riding is when you dismount."

Insult my clothes, I say, “Okay, thanks for the compliment.”
Insult the way I look, I say, “Thanks for notifying me.”
Mock me and say riding isn’t a sport, and I’ll say,”You say that ’cause you can’t ride.” But before you make fun of my horse, make sure you have “911″ on your speed dial.

I loved that! Great Job!! :D

on Oct. 29 2011 at 11:54 am
WithEyesWideOpen BRONZE, Wayne, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
You may say I'm a dreamer, but I'm not the only one.

that's what a haiku is supposed t be..

on Oct. 26 2011 at 12:52 pm
!.........That was short......!

weasel123 said...
on Sep. 6 2011 at 10:42 am
weasel123, Carrollton, Texas
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I like this poem because almost ever one in this world has had a hardship and how they need to move on. Good poem.

on Aug. 29 2011 at 5:11 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

Strong, independent, emotional. You, my dear, know how to write an haiku, even though it doesn't have any nature in it ;)

on Aug. 21 2011 at 2:19 pm
Milly.Hester BRONZE, Central City, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
be who you wanna be not what poeple want you to be

wow...

 


on Aug. 16 2011 at 8:50 pm
Jessi_suarez1 GOLD, Kissimmee, Florida
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just remove that. but overall i love it! very independent and inpowering. good job!

on Jul. 30 2011 at 7:29 pm
HannahMarie17 BRONZE, Pasadena, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass. It's about learning to dance in the rain." - Anonymous

I need to do what this author did. I completely liove and feel this piece. Keep writing!

 


on Jul. 19 2011 at 1:26 pm
A.M.Wilson DIAMOND, Midland, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
You can't choose who you love but you can love who you choose.

this is indeed a good poem

 


on Jul. 16 2011 at 10:45 am
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

Great job! I just wrote two books called nightstalker and the beast. please check them out and read them, and make sure u post comments! Thanks! :D (sorry for advertizing!)

on Jul. 14 2011 at 12:32 pm
NEVER_Perfect SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"It Is What It Is"

I love this.. & I remember a day i did the same. Those 3 words show a new beginninq to a different part of life. Great Job :)

on Jul. 13 2011 at 3:16 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
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Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

Could you look at my haiku poems Doubt, All Alone, and Seeing Your Soul, please? Thank you!

on Jun. 12 2011 at 3:35 pm
freeflow23 GOLD, Durham, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Saul saw Goliath as too big to kill. David saw he was too big to miss.
W.W.J.D.

It's a bit too literal for me.

lmd_4994 GOLD said...
on May. 21 2011 at 7:28 pm
lmd_4994 GOLD, Union Grove, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"May you live every day of your life" - Jonathan Swift

take out the "that" and its perfect! :)

on May. 19 2011 at 12:44 pm
swimchick BRONZE, Exeter, Pennsylvania
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The second line has eight syllables.


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