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I finally threw
Out all the poems that I wrote
About you today

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pnkninja11 said...
Oct. 6, 2010 at 7:19 am
I like every part of this poem. It is very meaningful and I can relate.
 
jaygonz replied...
Nov. 26, 2010 at 12:36 pm
yes, but in the second line, she can just delete the "that" and just leave it as : "out all the poems i wrote", it just flows better, don't you think ?
 
Gisah said...
Oct. 5, 2010 at 7:37 am
I definitly can relate with you.
 
paty said...
Oct. 5, 2010 at 7:37 am
was amazing because that was short but significate so much in the life of each other
 
Erinnn said...
Sept. 25, 2010 at 10:47 pm
Less is more
 
jsdfhodfu said...
Sept. 21, 2010 at 10:58 am
well htis poem is very nice
 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 18, 2010 at 9:35 am
short but very meaningful!!!!!!1
 
the_real_reggie_rocket said...
Sept. 10, 2010 at 7:46 am

Aaaaaaaaaaa-men :)

I can definately relate.

 
BrittDawn This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 12:50 am
That is so true.
 
Alex W. said...
Aug. 25, 2010 at 7:42 pm
Sometimes a few words can say a million things
 
SnickerLover replied...
Aug. 27, 2010 at 12:34 pm
very true... even though it was only like 9 words... it hit me. hard.. looovvve it. 5 stars
 
KelsieYellow said...
Aug. 12, 2010 at 11:00 am
Short but totally relatable. 
 
PenguinFeet This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 2:00 pm

"I finally threw
Out all the poems that I wrote
About you today"

--except this poem. Oh, irony!

But very nice.

 
SnickerLover replied...
Aug. 27, 2010 at 12:35 pm
lol. very clever
 
McKenna said...
Jul. 31, 2010 at 5:07 pm
I'm gonna take a guess and say they were about a boy.
 
KICK3593 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 2:15 pm
It's nice - kind of funny, too - but I think it's left to a lot of loose interpretation.
 
Pearlcr said...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 8:06 am
its guud ,u know...means a lot!
 
inspir3d This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 7, 2010 at 3:58 pm
This is why people write haikus! It's as effective as a punch to the gut; short, but leaves an unforgettable impact. GREAT WORK! very thought provoking and deep. Check out my haiku Desperate? thanks :)
 
Kaylarebekah131719 said...
May 25, 2010 at 3:01 pm
Amazing how much power such a short sentiment can have; truly inspirational.
 
melone96 said...
May 15, 2010 at 3:42 pm
its funny how many people post comments about how short haikus are...umm, duh..they r haikus - only 17 sylables..that's short...
 
bound4life4ever This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 12, 2010 at 9:39 am

 

hey... i wrote a poem. b ut the 1st stanza kinda stole this peom. i wanted 2 put it up on teenink but i wanted 2 ask u if its ok if i can use ur poem in my poem. thanx

 
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