Photograph

May 2, 2013
By ChocolateLove SILVER, Warsaw, Other
ChocolateLove SILVER, Warsaw, Other
5 articles 6 photos 158 comments

A precious moment
A sweet, treasured memory
A part of my life

The shimmering sun
The wide grins on our faces
The cloudless, blue sky

An old photo
An irreplaceable thought
Never forgotten



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on Jul. 18 2014 at 2:47 am
bookmaniac PLATINUM, Issaquah, Washington
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Brilliant work! Especially the last stanza.

on May. 31 2013 at 5:20 am
ChocolateLove SILVER, Warsaw, Other
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Thank you so much :D

on May. 31 2013 at 5:19 am
ChocolateLove SILVER, Warsaw, Other
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Thank you :D

sarah98 BRONZE said...
on May. 30 2013 at 6:34 pm
sarah98 BRONZE, Holyoke, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
It is better to write for yourself and have no audience than write for your audience and have no self.

short, magical, and somewhat mysterious. i really like this

PhoebeB GOLD said...
on May. 26 2013 at 7:15 pm
PhoebeB GOLD, Lexington, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Music expresses that which cannot be said and on which it is impossible to be silent."
-Victor Hugo

A short poem that so perfectly encapsulates the very core of a photo! BTW: Great job on selecting an accompanying image... it really helped me, as a supah visual person, to match your writing to a fitting photograph.

on May. 25 2013 at 5:01 am
ChocolateLove SILVER, Warsaw, Other
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Well in my opionion haikus are all about taking something that seems uninportant or simple (like a photograph) and then using imagery and vocabulary that make it seem magical and extraordinary. The hard part about haikus is you have to sqeeze a lot of meaning into just a couple lines. When I see a comment like "short yet beautifully written" I know that I succeeded in writting a haikus because that is all that these peoms are about :D. OldYoundOne I think that if only you put your mind on it you could become a amazing haiku writter. 

OldYoungOne said...
on May. 24 2013 at 12:08 pm
I never understood how to make a Haiku. Could You explain it to me.

OldYoungOne said...
on May. 24 2013 at 12:07 pm
Tis true of time caught in a frozen phase. I like the poem.

on May. 24 2013 at 9:58 am
ChocolateLove SILVER, Warsaw, Other
5 articles 6 photos 158 comments
Thank you :D 

on May. 23 2013 at 8:19 pm
shadowkiss96 SILVER, Selkirk, New York
5 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You know you're in love when you can't fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams."

awee so sweet!

on May. 23 2013 at 6:16 am
ChocolateLove SILVER, Warsaw, Other
5 articles 6 photos 158 comments
Thank you :) 

on May. 22 2013 at 4:58 pm
estucker1998 PLATINUM, Tuscaloosa, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
The voracious ambition of humans is never sated by dreams coming true, because of the thought that everything may be done better and again. --John Green, The Fault in Our Stars.

Great job! Short yet beautifuly written. I especially love the last stanza. Great!

on May. 21 2013 at 2:53 pm
ChocolateLove SILVER, Warsaw, Other
5 articles 6 photos 158 comments
Thank you :D 

on May. 21 2013 at 2:31 pm
SimplyErica SILVER, San Marcos, California
6 articles 1 photo 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is something unconditional. It continues to live even when everything dies." - By Me ♥

To the point and simply fantastic. Photographs take a big role in many peoples lives. They sure do with me. (:

on May. 21 2013 at 1:33 pm
ChocolateLove SILVER, Warsaw, Other
5 articles 6 photos 158 comments
Thank you :) 

on May. 21 2013 at 1:28 pm
WulffyBoy SILVER, Hubbard, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"You suck, there's no buts, the whole music industry can lick my nuts"---- Deuce

5 stars

on May. 21 2013 at 4:55 am
ChocolateLove SILVER, Warsaw, Other
5 articles 6 photos 158 comments
I'm a HUGE Nickelback fan, thank you :D. 

on May. 20 2013 at 8:47 pm
Metalhead08 GOLD, Port Republic, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather hate you for everything you are. Than ever love you for something you are not. " FFDP "You're born alone and you die alone" FFDP "I wonder out where you can't see, inside my shell I wait and bleed." Slipknot " If youre 555 then I am 666"

Loved this! It reminded me of nickelbacks song called photograph. Very well done!

on May. 19 2013 at 3:40 am
ChocolateLove SILVER, Warsaw, Other
5 articles 6 photos 158 comments
Thank you :)

Soccer23 GOLD said...
on May. 18 2013 at 7:19 pm
Soccer23 GOLD, Rockton, Illinois
11 articles 11 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage.
Lao Tzu

absolutly amazing. I love to take pictures and this captures everything a photo is 


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