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Photograph

A precious moment
A sweet, treasured memory
A part of my life

The shimmering sun
The wide grins on our faces
The cloudless, blue sky

An old photo
An irreplaceable thought
Never forgotten



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Emily.of.BooksThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 18 at 2:47 am:
Brilliant work! Especially the last stanza.
 
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sarah98This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 30, 2013 at 6:34 pm:
short, magical, and somewhat mysterious. i really like this
 
ChocolateLove replied...
May 31, 2013 at 5:20 am :
Thank you so much :D
 
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PhoebeB said...
May 26, 2013 at 7:15 pm:
A short poem that so perfectly encapsulates the very core of a photo! BTW: Great job on selecting an accompanying image... it really helped me, as a supah visual person, to match your writing to a fitting photograph.
 
ChocolateLove replied...
May 31, 2013 at 5:19 am :
Thank you :D
 
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OldYoungOne said...
May 24, 2013 at 12:07 pm:
Tis true of time caught in a frozen phase. I like the poem.
 
OldYoungOne replied...
May 24, 2013 at 12:08 pm :
I never understood how to make a Haiku. Could You explain it to me.
 
Chichot123 replied...
May 25, 2013 at 5:01 am :
Well in my opionion haikus are all about taking something that seems uninportant or simple (like a photograph) and then using imagery and vocabulary that make it seem magical and extraordinary. The hard part about haikus is you have to sqeeze a lot of meaning into just a couple lines. When I see a comment like "short yet beautifully written" I know that I succeeded in writting a haikus because that is all that these peoms are about :D. OldYoundOne I think that if only you put your mind... (more »)
 
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shadowkiss96 said...
May 23, 2013 at 8:19 pm:
awee so sweet!
 
Chichot123 replied...
May 24, 2013 at 9:58 am :
Thank you :D 
 
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estucker1998 said...
May 22, 2013 at 4:58 pm:
Great job! Short yet beautifuly written. I especially love the last stanza. Great!
 
Chichot123 replied...
May 23, 2013 at 6:16 am :
Thank you :) 
 
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SimplyErica said...
May 21, 2013 at 2:31 pm:
To the point and simply fantastic. Photographs take a big role in many peoples lives. They sure do with me. (:
 
Chichot123 replied...
May 21, 2013 at 2:53 pm :
Thank you :D 
 
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PoetBoi said...
May 21, 2013 at 1:28 pm:
5 stars
 
Chichot123 replied...
May 21, 2013 at 1:33 pm :
Thank you :) 
 
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Metal4Life said...
May 20, 2013 at 8:47 pm:
Loved this! It reminded me of nickelbacks song called photograph. Very well done!
 
Chichot123 replied...
May 21, 2013 at 4:55 am :
I'm a HUGE Nickelback fan, thank you :D. 
 
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Soccer23 said...
May 18, 2013 at 7:19 pm:
absolutly amazing. I love to take pictures and this captures everything a photo is 
 
Chichot123 replied...
May 19, 2013 at 3:40 am :
Thank you :)
 
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