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To Anonymous

June 4, 2010
By crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.


I write this poem to,
Those who hide in the shadows,
And cover their eyes.

Not to brave souls who,
Choose to stand up and fight but,
To anonymous.



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on Jun. 14 2011 at 7:43 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

thanks!!              

on Jun. 14 2011 at 7:43 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

thankyou!!

LilBoo BRONZE said...
on Jun. 14 2011 at 7:38 pm
LilBoo BRONZE, Martinsville, New Jersey
4 articles 0 photos 9 comments
i really like this because the ones that hide are usually the ones in need and the one that need to be attention to the most. this was beautiful. keep on writing

on Jun. 13 2011 at 6:56 pm
RainWashed PLATINUM, Park City, Utah
46 articles 1 photo 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Repeat the good and the bad. Do it all again. And pile on the years."

I love this haiku. It's so wonderful! I think it's really powerful and completely mind blowing. Thank you for writing these.

on Jun. 7 2011 at 12:12 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2216 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

This is beautiful, just what a haiku should be, but then again, I'm not an ancient Japanese scholar ;)

Thank you for writing this.


on May. 6 2011 at 8:53 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Yeah thats so cool!!! Thankyou!!!

librarylady said...
on Mar. 28 2011 at 2:04 pm
A library in Wake County, North Carolina

on Mar. 27 2011 at 4:05 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

what library??      

on Mar. 27 2011 at 4:05 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

sure:)        

librarylady said...
on Mar. 9 2011 at 3:52 pm
crubs33 this is excellent! Can I put it on display at my library?? I will give you full cred.

on Feb. 23 2011 at 12:07 pm
Jessica2011 BRONZE, Elgin, Illinois
4 articles 1 photo 1 comment
Hey! I really liked this haiku a lot. I think it stands out to those who tend to keep to the crowd and go with the flow. I think, in my opinion, it is a wake up call to all those voices we have yet to hear!

lollypops GOLD said...
on Feb. 22 2011 at 7:35 pm
lollypops GOLD, Pilot, Virginia
16 articles 5 photos 219 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live

great job keep writing

on Jan. 16 2011 at 9:59 pm
Noitcif_Plup SILVER, Argenta, Illinois
5 articles 1 photo 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's only after we've lost everything that we're free to do anything." - Tyler Durden

That is the best haiku, I've ever read. No joke.

on Jan. 16 2011 at 1:30 pm
Chibbie1 PLATINUM, Atlanta, Georgia
38 articles 8 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
Reach for the the moon for if you fail you land amongst the stars :)

You write with passion, honesty and directly :) I don't go with the rules of writing though I go with the emotion and let me tell you... It was AMAZING

on Dec. 24 2010 at 11:48 am
Mariah_13 PLATINUM, Vienna, Virginia
27 articles 9 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take your breath away.

How about Instead of I write this poem To, which is six syllables you write

This Poem Is For,

.....


on Dec. 4 2010 at 6:59 pm
DawnMarie BRONZE, Milton, Florida
2 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
a bird doesn't sing because it has an answer,
it sings because it has a song. - lou holtz

Nice...but it isn't a haiku. Check your syllables again, line one has 6 syllables! Hahaha (: 

on Dec. 3 2010 at 1:30 pm
MizzCizz BRONZE, Warrington, Other
4 articles 0 photos 6 comments
Brill! i Would love to see more. x

on Nov. 17 2010 at 5:48 pm
echome94 PLATINUM, Daleville, Virginia
32 articles 3 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
When the world around me ceases to exist and then i will open up and let a cruel man like you in


~Unknown~

This is beautiful, not everybody knows how to write a haiku. You did a great job, i tried to write one called Seaweed Dreams but im not sure mine was as clear as yours.

Kali123 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 11 2010 at 7:41 am
Kali123 BRONZE, Cleveland, Ohio
1 article 0 photos 2 comments
great Haiku. love the emotion behind it too

on Oct. 20 2010 at 10:26 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks!!