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It's not what you think;
You're never alone in this
I promise;

I have learned a lot;
Know much about little things;
Promise you I'll stay

Alone, we are strong;
Together, we are complete;
We should work as one

Despite all of this
I promise I won't let go;
Our bind is too strong

Without any doubt
Two is lot better than one;
I promise you it




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awesomelyme said...
Jul. 16, 2012 at 9:24 pm:
that was a really great poem. i enjoyed it. but in the first stanze yu only used 3 syllables rather than 5.
 
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irishlass317 said...
May 11, 2012 at 6:05 pm:

I love it! It was sooooooo good
!!! :D <3

 

 
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ManekiNeko said...
Dec. 9, 2011 at 8:58 am:
Third line in the first stanza has only 3 syllables.
 
bamboom212 replied...
Apr. 23, 2012 at 5:49 pm :
thank you. yeah, i noticed a couple mistakes like that after I submitted >.<
 
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whateverjuliet said...
Apr. 11, 2011 at 8:00 pm:
love love love it!
 
bamboom212 replied...
Aug. 22, 2011 at 7:50 pm :
aw thank u! im so glad u liked it:)
 
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loser_like_me_xP said...
Mar. 20, 2011 at 12:24 pm:
dawww how sweet ^^ Awesome Job!!! :D
 
bamboom212 replied...
Aug. 22, 2011 at 7:50 pm :
thank u so much;D
 
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Melissa G. said...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 3:02 pm:
I really like your poems so much. It was very moving and very pretty at the same time. I think you should keep up the good work to. 
 
bamboom212 replied...
Feb. 20, 2011 at 1:56 pm :
thankk u. it really means alott=]
 
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CammyLashay said...
Oct. 17, 2010 at 3:22 pm:
loved it no more can be said =)
 
bamboom212 replied...
Nov. 8, 2010 at 8:36 pm :
aww thankk u so much. it meanz alottt(:
 
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ShenelleCrystalx3 said...
Jun. 28, 2010 at 11:25 pm:
that was great ! please come check out my work :)
 
bamboom212 replied...
Jun. 29, 2010 at 5:46 pm :
sure! id luv 2. thxx 4 takin the time 2 read:)
 
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SissyPooh said...
May 12, 2010 at 12:09 pm:
iireally lyk dhzz!!! OMq iireally du,,,keep writinq more(ihm seriousz)
 
bamboom212 replied...
Jun. 6, 2010 at 9:42 pm :
lol aw thxxx everyone 4 da commntz!!!
 
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KimberleyNightwriter said...
Mar. 21, 2010 at 8:55 pm:
i love this...i can relate to that so well
 
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Peace420 said...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 12:46 pm:
I love this Dude!!!!! Really awesome. It reminds me of my family.....
 
bamboom212 replied...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 3:03 pm :
ha thank u! im glad u can relate ;)
 
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bamboom212 said...
Feb. 18, 2010 at 8:21 pm:
ha sorry. the two is lot better than one is intentional, but not the i promise lol. thanxx :))
 
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