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I Promise

December 17, 2009
By bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent."
"You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel."


It's not what you think;
You're never alone in this
I promise;

I have learned a lot;
Know much about little things;
Promise you I'll stay

Alone, we are strong;
Together, we are complete;
We should work as one

Despite all of this
I promise I won't let go;
Our bind is too strong

Without any doubt
Two is lot better than one;
I promise you it



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StarsMoon said...
on Feb. 15 2010 at 10:50 pm
StarsMoon, Lehi, Utah
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it was good :)

but sammyso3 was right about the grammar mistakes.. its ok though :) for me, the poem was still meaningful

on Feb. 11 2010 at 4:21 pm
sammyso3 SILVER, Hastings, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
"We have to be continually jumping off cliffs and developing our wings on the way down." Kurt Vonnegut

It's nice, but "I promise" is not 5 syllables, and "two is a lot better than one" is not 7 syllables :\ sorry.

on Jan. 17 2010 at 9:12 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

Love it! 5 starzzz

on Jan. 13 2010 at 9:01 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
23 articles 0 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent."
"You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel."

ha thank u! XD

on Jan. 10 2010 at 9:15 pm
tennisislovee34 GOLD, Sterling Heights, Michigan
15 articles 3 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every moment of your life, you're writing. Even in your dreams, you're writing. When you walk the halls in this school you meet various people and you write furiously in your head." -Frank McCourt

ooooh, i like this :)


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