Beauty is love

October 14, 2009
By tori_Lou GOLD, Wolfforth, Texas
tori_Lou GOLD, Wolfforth, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
when life knocks you on your knees, you're in perfect position to pray


Love is patient and kind
Love is not hateful or harsh
Love lasts forever

Love is there for you
It will never hide its face
Love is in your heart

You might feel alone
But love is always close by
Love always comes home



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on Dec. 10 2011 at 2:49 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

I love it! Your poem is so sweet and rings true.

 


on Jul. 21 2011 at 11:01 pm
DramaDuchess SILVER, Medford, Oregon
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Your piece is very sweet and hopeful. I love that passage of Scripture and you did a nice job of turning it into a poem.

tori_Lou GOLD said...
on Jun. 12 2011 at 6:05 pm
tori_Lou GOLD, Wolfforth, Texas
18 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
when life knocks you on your knees, you're in perfect position to pray

thank you very much :)

tori_Lou GOLD said...
on Jun. 12 2011 at 6:04 pm
tori_Lou GOLD, Wolfforth, Texas
18 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
when life knocks you on your knees, you're in perfect position to pray

thank you very much! i usually write free verse which is probably why this one is leaning in that direction :)

tori_Lou GOLD said...
on Jun. 12 2011 at 6:03 pm
tori_Lou GOLD, Wolfforth, Texas
18 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
when life knocks you on your knees, you're in perfect position to pray

that is where i based my writing. that passage was my inspiration :)

on Mar. 24 2011 at 9:25 pm
This is sweet but it sounds like the verse in the Corinthians that they say at weddings all the time.

bergert BRONZE said...
on Oct. 29 2010 at 8:46 am
bergert BRONZE, Spotsylvania, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"When life gives you lemons, you have to make lemonade...or else you look like an idiot standing there holding lemons."-Melissa Graulich

I really like this poem, and although I think it'd probably fall more under the free verse poetry section rather than haiku, I really liked the staggered flow of it. I think it really added to the intensity of the poem.

ashley1 said...
on Sep. 16 2010 at 7:21 am
ashley1, Fredericksburg, Virginia
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All I can say is this poem is touching! Love works in mysterious ways.

on May. 29 2010 at 11:48 pm
StandardToaster PLATINUM, Pasadena, California
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Favorite Quote:
I don't suffer from insanity; I enjoy ever minute of it."

nice, this is really good.  check out my work? TeenInk.com/poetry/all/article/194499/Math/

tori_Lou GOLD said...
on May. 7 2010 at 5:37 pm
tori_Lou GOLD, Wolfforth, Texas
18 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
when life knocks you on your knees, you're in perfect position to pray

yeah that's where i got the inspiration for the poem. i thought about that passage the whole time

on May. 7 2010 at 2:28 pm
Patience97 PLATINUM, New Tripoli, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"People believe that if we really want to eliminate something, focus on that. How much sense does it make for us to give the particular problem all of the energy, as opposed to focusing on trust, love, living in abundance, education, or peace? -Un.

Sounds like something I heard once.

Love is patient, love is kind.

It does not envy, it does not boast,

It is not proud, it is not rude,

It is not self-seeking.

 

I like your poem. This piece was from my bible but I don't know what order it goes in, that is all I can remember...


tori_Lou GOLD said...
on Apr. 15 2010 at 4:16 pm
tori_Lou GOLD, Wolfforth, Texas
18 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
when life knocks you on your knees, you're in perfect position to pray

thank you :)

Meghanxo said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 11:39 am
Meghanxo, Saugus, Massachusetts
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powerful poem :)

on Nov. 12 2009 at 8:40 pm
Jonathon Harger, Lubbock, Texas
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Great job!!! I really like it.

tori_Lou GOLD said...
on Nov. 12 2009 at 7:08 pm
tori_Lou GOLD, Wolfforth, Texas
18 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
when life knocks you on your knees, you're in perfect position to pray

no way!!!!!! thats awesome!!!!

Bri Lane said...
on Nov. 12 2009 at 10:46 am
This is really great. I love it. lol I loved it so much i have it in on my notebook. =)

tori_Lou GOLD said...
on Nov. 10 2009 at 7:28 pm
tori_Lou GOLD, Wolfforth, Texas
18 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
when life knocks you on your knees, you're in perfect position to pray

thank you so much for the comment it means alot! i will definatly post more in the future!

Wilsonm said...
on Oct. 31 2009 at 11:21 am
This poem is extremely well written and captures my attention right from the first line. This poem gives the reader a new perspective on love. For example, like when you said “Love lasts forever” this really opens the reader up giving he/she a new found perspective on love. So good work writing this poem and I hope to see more work from you in the future.

on Oct. 27 2009 at 8:03 am
warriorsfan711 SILVER, Plant City, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
mashpotaoes are amazing

Love this Haiku and boy is true. Keep up these Haiku


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