Love Poem

September 9, 2009
By , Union City, TN
She loves him,
And he loves her,
Their love is never a mix,
It is but a stir.

They look good together,
They are a perfect couple,
They are each othershalf,That means they are double.

The love they hold for each other,
Might not ever end,
Which mean their love,
Will only extend.

Caring for each other,
Is the most important thing,
We all know how much they care,
So we know it's not a fling.

They love each other,
They really do,
All they say,
Is I Love You.

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Love1 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 11, 2010 at 10:16 am
i wish i had a guy that would make me feel that way....i love your poetry
babygurlmimi replied...
Mar. 28, 2010 at 2:49 pm
i noe i wish i had that love 22
htrae22 replied...
Mar. 27, 2011 at 2:24 pm
this is really good not a hakiu more of a limirck or ballad but amazing good job
O_Riet replied...
Jun. 1, 2011 at 7:29 pm
Or free verse, 'cause it doesn't completely follow any specific rules. It is good, though. Just needs work for a haiku.
sasssgirrrl22 said...
Dec. 20, 2009 at 12:26 pm
aww this is really sweet. luv the wording
babyvaldez said...
Nov. 12, 2009 at 7:08 pm
That was amazing :) It really made me think about if im really in love with my boy friend..yeah i am...but dang that was truely sweet :)
dreamer_believer said...
Oct. 4, 2009 at 4:40 pm
heck, i couldn't care less if this isn't a haiku because it's a poem....and a great poem at that! :) it might as well be a picture because you painted such a beautiful picture in my mind. very very well done :) i love this....5 stars my friend! :) check out some of my work if you could, i would love your opinion.
I-Love-Him!!!! replied...
Oct. 16, 2009 at 9:12 am
thanx i worked real hard on it. i willtry to look at your poems though
Ms.Chioffe rocks! said...
Sept. 23, 2009 at 3:17 pm
Awww, how sweet! Truly awesome, u should rite a book full of ur poems and get it published. It will be a best seller! :)
Jennifer B. replied...
Sept. 24, 2009 at 6:49 pm
This isn't a haiku I counted the syllables this is definitely not a haiku but good poem though
booklover104 replied...
Mar. 27, 2011 at 12:49 am

Great poem it was amazing!!!! love thea art, but like everyone said, it is not a haiku... beautiful though!!! =)


hairy replied...
Sept. 13, 2016 at 6:41 pm
it may sound forced but one thing i do know is that it is a great poem with truth and rythm
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