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Love Poem

By , Union City, TN
She loves him,
And he loves her,
Their love is never a mix,
It is but a stir.

They look good together,
They are a perfect couple,
They are each othershalf,That means they are double.

The love they hold for each other,
Might not ever end,
Which mean their love,
Will only extend.

Caring for each other,
Is the most important thing,
We all know how much they care,
So we know it's not a fling.

They love each other,
They really do,
All they say,
Is I Love You.



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Ashmarie said...
Dec. 20, 2010 at 7:15 pm:
I loved this poem and the way when you read it, it sounds completely natural(:
 
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11MaTa said...
Dec. 14, 2010 at 3:20 pm:
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! But why is it rated 10 ????
 
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HuntressEmma said...
Nov. 23, 2010 at 7:32 pm:
So interesting, So inspiring, Yet not a haiku. See if you can alter it to make it a haiku, and try again.
 
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CoolBreeze This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 15, 2010 at 10:13 pm:
Its a great poem but not  a haiku
 
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loveya09 said...
Nov. 15, 2010 at 3:03 pm:
like it so much
 
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DragonMaster66.6 said...
Nov. 15, 2010 at 10:36 am:
I don't quite understand how this is a haiku, but it's very sweet and tickles my soul. This is just lovely, aside from the fact that it's in the haiku category and not a haiku, but that's okay.
 
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avantgarde said...
Aug. 19, 2010 at 6:27 pm:
It's lovely, but it's not a haiku.
 
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DiamondsIntheGrass This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 19, 2010 at 3:00 pm:
how is this a haiku?
 
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TheCreativeMiller said...
Aug. 19, 2010 at 1:06 am:
This is amazing! Keep up the good work!
 
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Hippiechick10 said...
Jul. 6, 2010 at 3:59 pm:
Awesome! Very meaningful!
 
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jesseay09 said...
Jun. 4, 2010 at 6:24 pm:
This is very nice !!! :)
 
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A.R.J.T said...
May 6, 2010 at 1:27 pm:
cute:D i like it
 
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xBaByGiRrL22x said...
May 1, 2010 at 12:27 pm:
aww i really luvv this. itz so cute & meaningful(: i agree wit  princess4ever. keep up the amazing work!
 
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princess4ever said...
May 1, 2010 at 4:19 am:
This is one of my favorite poems so far!!!!!!! I lova it!! thank u so much!
 
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jimmy boy said...
Apr. 26, 2010 at 9:49 am:
this poem was awesome...i loved it...it is bad to the bone
 
BleedingRose replied...
May 1, 2010 at 8:49 pm :

I'm agreeing w/ u there!

-Rose

 
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torimcree11693 said...
Apr. 9, 2010 at 1:46 pm:
I love this poem it is something most people can relate to and it is true to the heart...keep writing and let your heart flow out into the world for everyone to read.
 
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Ivana F. said...
Feb. 2, 2010 at 9:32 pm:
reminds me of my sis and her bf. :)
 
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Chryzel said...
Jan. 11, 2010 at 7:36 pm:
This is very light and sweet, but we all know that when love is involved the meaning to the pictures that we develope in our minds are very strong. You did an amazing job.
 
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Love1 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 11, 2010 at 10:16 am:
i wish i had a guy that would make me feel that way....i love your poetry
 
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