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Ice engulfs the grass
Leafless dead trees frosted white
Spotted eyelashes

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AMAWHI said...
May 21, 2012 at 10:20 am:
This haiku was great! This poem shows great imagery, I could just picture the snow on the persons eyelashes. The drawing next to the poem was also really good. Great job!
 
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gabbru said...
May 21, 2012 at 7:35 am:
I really liked this Haiku! You used personification in the first line, which really tied it together! nice job(;
 
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rebeckabear said...
Mar. 22, 2012 at 3:32 pm:

Haiku is a form of Japanese poetry that combine three different lines and a noticeable grammatical break. The break, or kireji, is often replaced with commas or hyphens in English haiku. Haiku usually includes nature and everyday things and situations so don't think too hard about what to use as a topic. this is exactly what is is. i agree with every one you should stay writing because it is very beautful

 

 
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PoetryAngel14 said...
Feb. 1, 2012 at 4:40 pm:
Great imagery! It made a shiver run down my spine. Wonderful :)
 
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TheIntellectualOne said...
Nov. 5, 2011 at 6:01 pm:
i just saw that picture very nice!
 
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TheChessKing said...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 12:42 pm:
It is short but it is true
 
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Inez1234 said...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 10:46 am:
simple, but powerfull
 
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thinkaholic15 said...
Aug. 9, 2011 at 9:49 am:
so simple, so beautiful, so powerful and did I mention awesome imagery?? love it!!! simple, but powerful poems are the best poems and yours is one of them!! keep writing... :D
 
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youknowwho AQ said...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 12:04 pm:
Simple,but Good use of imagery.
 
DarkenRoseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 26, 2011 at 5:35 pm :
Amazing haiku, very beautiful:)
 
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Beca13 said...
Dec. 10, 2010 at 1:27 pm:
This is an awesome haiku!
 
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McKenna said...
Jul. 31, 2010 at 4:51 pm:

I have a question, what is a Haiku?

And what makes this 3 sentence piece so...special?

 
mylifeisafantasy replied...
Aug. 16, 2010 at 7:29 am :
Haiku is a form of Japanese poetry that combine three different lines and a noticeable grammatical break. The break, or kireji, is often replaced with commas or hyphens in English haiku. Haiku usually includes nature and everyday things and situations so don't think too hard about what to use as a topic. Read more: How to Write a Haiku | eHow.com http://www.ehow.com/how_3336_write-haiku.html#ixzz0wltAHk6W
 
DiamondsIntheGrass This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 27, 2010 at 8:16 am :
the first line is 5 syllables, the second its 7 syllables, and the third line is also 5. haikus originate from japan, and their special because they tend to be very short, but that makes the meaning come out stronger.
 
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Essa said...
May 6, 2010 at 1:25 pm:
cool, its awesome
 
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sammyso3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 11, 2010 at 4:30 pm:
Great imagery! Well done.
 
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Thrush said...
Feb. 9, 2010 at 11:54 am:
really pretty.
 
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caughtinaxm0ment said...
Jan. 18, 2010 at 10:13 pm:
this is beautiful (:
 
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oxStardustxo said...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 7:29 pm:
beautifully written...
 
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LilJ<3 said...
Sept. 5, 2009 at 9:36 pm:
Simple, but u were able to get the point across. I think it si truly great keep the work up. :)
 
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