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     Ink trails, rage, love,
Tangoing violently
Across blistered wall



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Michelle R. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 23, 2013 at 3:10 pm:
I live in a city with graffiti everywhere, so this poem gives me a new perspective. If I were you I would change the last word to walls; it emphasizes the commanality.
 
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SilentNinjaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 23, 2013 at 11:57 am:
I love this poem :) but ya need another syllable in the first line :D
 
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cornflower_glass This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 24, 2013 at 6:07 am:
simple but directly moving. ^_^b
 
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tyty25 said...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 2:39 pm:
the only problem i see in this poem is that the first line has only 4 syllables. but otehrwise it is a great poem and Ii like the originality.
 
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joshhuey2013 said...
Jan. 6, 2012 at 9:47 am:
hey larzthesquirrel its still a cool poem wether its 4 our not so shove it
 
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LarztheSquirrel said...
Oct. 25, 2011 at 7:26 pm:

there are only four syllables in the first line. you would need another syllable for it to be a haiku

good poem otherwise

 
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OG_kingdrizzy said...
Oct. 3, 2011 at 10:29 am:
its a very strong and powerful and the picture helps alot
 
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Rebel13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 20, 2011 at 5:44 pm:
This is good! Lots of power for a haiku.
 
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freeflow23 said...
Jun. 12, 2011 at 3:36 pm:
isn't a haiku 5,7,5?
 
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ErosFox said...
Apr. 11, 2011 at 11:11 am:

The words give off the feeling of hate and yet it moves me...

I like it =].

 
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swagmasterflex said...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 11:58 am:
very visual.
 
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tayy17 said...
Mar. 4, 2011 at 1:12 pm:
beautiful.
 
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croww said...
Feb. 26, 2011 at 2:08 pm:
the words choices are great!! love it!
 
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LEBRONISTHEKING561 said...
Feb. 25, 2011 at 8:46 am:
interesting.
 
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Brittany12 said...
Feb. 3, 2011 at 8:33 pm:
this is one of the best haikus i have read! :)
 
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CoolBreeze This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 21, 2010 at 12:18 pm:
Wow this is awesome
 
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Pearlcr said...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 8:09 am:
nyc!!!...its ....meaning ful
 
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brax34 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 14, 2010 at 12:02 pm:
amazingly amazing
 
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thewetone said...
May 24, 2010 at 12:27 pm:
wow i jus got wet reading this!!
 
McKenna replied...
Jul. 31, 2010 at 5:08 pm :
God it's just a Haiku!!!
 
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