Graffiti

the only problem i see in this poem is that the first line has only 4 syllables. but otehrwise it is a great poem and Ii like the originality.

hey larzthesquirrel its still a cool poem wether its 4 our not so shove it

there are only four syllables in the first line. you would need another syllable for it to be a haiku

good poem otherwise

its a very strong and powerful and the picture helps alot

This is good! Lots of power for a haiku.

isn't a haiku 5,7,5?

The words give off the feeling of hate and yet it moves me...

I like it =].

very visual.

beautiful.

the words choices are great!! love it!

interesting.

this is one of the best haikus i have read! :)

Wow this is awesome

nyc!!!...its ....meaning ful

amazingly amazing

wow i jus got wet reading this!!

Wow, very good description on so few words.

Good use of vocabulary and in a constructive manner.

Wow. This is truly a perfect and original example of such a simple haiku. Definitely a 5 star - great work Rachel!

Its a good kaiku because it describes whats going on in life...

I like this one because it decribes and tells about graffiti. This is how people feel and express themselves.

This is really original & creative! i think its amazing, good job. :)

This is intense! I love it.

nice. very creative. gr8 job :)

short bt great love itt!

Amazing. Very unique and descriptive.

i used to live in the city i completely love