Overwhelming love

April 30, 2018
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Your love is so overwhelming
It causes me too feel many things
A warm and tender loving
Memories now I'll only miss

These heartaches make me blue
I think I'm feeling dizzy
I beg of you to just make us start anew
Or I'd be going crazy

If your love goes afar
You'll just see me cry
If you find another to care for
I'd likely just die

Your love is my world
Where my life rotates around
Do remember all my words
That it's you that I'll only love

You make me sigh
You leave me so breathless
Maybe it's because I'm to die
Because you leave me reckless

I hate the idea that you leave me
There would be no peace
I'd just be lonely
My life wouldn't be at ease

My heart pumps hard while I write
Think it's not normal
I feel it's not right
Like the idea of you leaving

Now I sigh
Never leaving a smile
I'd wave to you and to all good-bye
Now, may I just lay down and die...

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JWMar said...
today at 6:29 am
Please rate and comment to my work. And share to friends, to read a work of a native a Filipino. From here in the Philippines, thanks and enjoy!
VictoryTheGreat said...
May 10 at 3:04 am
The description in this poem provokes strong emotion within the reader.
JWMar replied...
today at 6:27 am
Thank you so much for your attention and appreciation to my poem. Here, from the Philippines, I thank you a lot; also for appreciating of a native Filipino. Please do share it to your friends, and spread it; let them read a work of a Filipino.
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